15~NOT just a passionate affair~ 56 (2 PT) 7 Oct - A fitting END? - Page 3

it was a wonderful chapter. loved the way jalal taught a lesson to stalker. di u have depicted very nicely how jalal tried to save jodha.

awesome update... nice thing. but, chapter after chapter, with nothing to look on but despair and still you have managed to keep us engaged. hopefully, next chapter will see a bright light of hope.

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PART 56- A FITTING END?

Another fantabulous update Lashy!! I really really loved it. I wouldn't say I am at peace now but yeah I am relieved somehow. My thoughts aren't actually coherent at the moment so please ignore if you don't like something I am going to write now.

Jalal is at par with the stalker now

If she can't be mine, she can't be anyone else's...and definitely NOT YOURS!' As u said this was the final undoing. This creep was again trying to have the upper hand with that pocket knife by riling up Jalal all the more than he already was. But he was in for a shock here as he had done the biggest mistake of his life by underestimating his young student. With the stalker acting in seconds, he was going to respond in microseconds. With the stalker playing sly, he was going to play slier! This said it all. I need not add anything here. I really loved the line- like a rabid canine paralyzing a deadly insect under its claws. The stalker is going to pay the price for his actions now.😈

I liked how Jalal didn't loosen his grip on the stalker's hand. Atleast not until he had broken his finger-bones. This was just the starting. DID THAT MANIAC ACTUALLY SWALLOW THE KEY? I am aghast. Just so that Jo couldn't be saved and in that case not even Jalal. He was more afraid of letting his enemies win than losing his own life. He had decided if it was going to be his last night then the same will happen to his victims'. I did notice that now he is even hell bent on taking Jo's life, someone he wanted to marry as he claimed to love her for his own twisted reasons. But then I guess it was expected after he realized Jo wasn't loyal to him as he had thought. She was loyal only to HER MAN and had always loved him no matter what. Jo is also his enemy now. What a sadistic creature! This is insanity( for lack of another word. Probably you can tell me an apt word for this) on an all new level.😡

So the stalker is holding on to the parapet wall for his dear life. Great! That idiot had the guts to call Jalal beta' after all this. Oh God!!!! It was nice to see Jalal coming back to his senses at that crucial juncture for he couldn't afford to destroy his future over that creep.He couldn't taint his beautiful life by becoming a murderer in the eyes of the law. Guilty for getting rid of a maniac. So he adopted a more rational' pursuit of revenge. I am flabbergasted at this guy's quick thinking Lashy. But he also knew he can't hoist the prof up to save him because that would mean endangering his life as well as that of his love all over again. He had to put the creep permanently out-of-action without breaking the laws. And my my what a way he came up with! Greasing his hands with the oil from the hinges of the door and offering to help that creep. The oil was traceless. Waah. I so love that sly grin'. But the prof didn't know what he was in for. And lo, he fell. I hope he has a fate worse than death. Maybe paralyzed for life. A dependent on others. He doesn't deserve to die this easily. By simply falling from a third story. I don't care if I sound sadistic here.😡

As he stood tall, he resembled a warrior at the top of his game. Wow!!!!! You know what? This reminded me of the on-screen Jalal right after he had flung down the lifeless body of Adham Khan( ignoring the gory details there). That particular scene was top-notch and I had loved it. As soon as I read this part of blood trickling down the sides of his face and the warrior analogy, this image flashed in my mind out of nowhere. Though please tell me from where did the blood come on his face? His injury is on the shoulder na.😕

I AM PROUD OF JALAL HERE.

Now that he was done with what he had set out to do, the pain and exhaustion started sitting in. Very realistic. He was human after all. He's bound to be in pain considering his grave injury. If not, he would be a Super human. It's amazing how he was able to put all that aside to tackle the stalker and get HIS GIRL to safety. He had been losing a lot of blood all through this. The trail of blood must have been a disturbing sight. He knew his injury wasn't superficial but he was past caring. As long as the blood's mine and not hers... I can't be bothered...' What a man he is!

With this he made his way back to Jo. It was gut wrenching to see him trying to share the victory with the lifeless' body of Jo. The way he was losing his optimism and was chiding Jo saying she didn't have the right to punish him so for coming late. Asking her not to give up on him oblivious to the fact that she wasn't listening. It is commendable that inspite of being so injured himself all he cared for was Jodha's life and made Abdul promise that the first ambulance would take Jodha. He did everything he could for his girl before slipping into unconsciousness. He carried her to the front door so that the paramedics could save a few seconds. His longing to share a precious moment with her not knowing if he will ever be able to do so again had me crying. The kiss that followed made me shiver. No idea why. He gave the lucky talisman that his abbu had given him as a child, something he held dearer to himself than any other thing,to Jo. To keep her safe. This spoke volumes about his love for Jo. That how she was more important to him now. This entire scene was very poignant. Loved this the most in the entire chapter. It's amazing how you manage to put in atleast one such moment in every update of yours. His last words while he was still conscious -that he is tired an wants to sleep for some time and when he wakes up- he blacked out there. Couldn't even complete what he was trying to say. So much of crying since yesterday. Ufff

HERE I WANTED TO HUG HIM TIGHT. SIMPLY FOR THE MAN THAT HE IS.

His friends are real gems. Abdul, Renu and Meera. Abdul's desperation to reach out to his friend and help him was penned down very nicely. The way he had been using his own body like the flat head of a hammer trying to break the lock without resting was fab.

Renu deserves a special mention here. Though I never hated her but I never really liked her either. She was superb here. She was the only one who was somehow keeping her emotions in check and trying hard not to break down then for her friends needed her. She couldn't waste time in wallowing and rather wanted to do get them some help ASAP. She is one strong girl I must say. Loved her power speech to Meera that she needed to stay strong for her friend as well as for Abdul, who was almost on the verge of breaking down. Loved her concern for Abdul and Meera when she saw the blood trickling out of the flat.. Knowing they wouldn't be able to take it she sealed the opening. I couldn't help but notice that she was genuinely worried for Jo as much as she was for Jalal. I guess for the first time ever she referred to Jo as her friend. And she meant it. Wondering if her friends' were even alive. Her quick thinking and timely action saved them.👏👏

Jalal's dream in blue was very very beautiful. The disgruntlement of a 12 year old at not being taken to the cricket match was very cute. It was quite touching that he saw his abbu in his dream who was going to leave him forever telling him that his dog wouldn't be with him for long either. His question that if he was supposed to take care of his Ammi, the house, office and his Taaya, then who would take care of him was very innocent. Then his Abbu pointed to a beautiful girl who was building something and after greeting him asked him if he wanted to help her. The boy in turn couldn't hold back from joining her and he had his father's consent too. His father was his guardian angel here. Guiding him to his soulmate. He had to go back for Jo. I guess that is why he came back. So that he could bring her back too. Am I right kya? This was the Awww moment. My second favourite part.😳😳

He wakes up after three days in a hospital. Phew!! He will be fine soon but. But he was troubled by the news that his Ammi didn't take the news well and had to go back to the anti-depressants to calm herself. He was every bit a caring son then even in that condition. This guy is GREAT. As soon as he realized he had been unconscious for three days, he was overcome with worry about Jo.He inquired about her. He started fearing the worst when his friends were avoiding his concerned questions about Jo.Then the shock of his life- HIS GIRL was in coma.

Superb update. This part made me proud of him all over again, I wanted to hug him and I cried for him too. All that you had mentioned to Varsha Di regarding the update did come true.Update the next part soon. Please please. I am very very eagerly waiting for Jalal to get

Jo back and the happy times to start. New Beginnings! Wow!😃😉

Well done, chellam👍🏼

But i feel down😭😭😭😭😭

You know.. i feel like hugging you hard (even though its not going to be easy as of now :P ) .. for this update!!

Absolutely wonderful.. BEAUTIFUL...
I am typing from tab and i hv to run to station to catch train in five mins..
But i had to atleast let you know that it was way beyond excellent..
Loved Jalal absolutely..my star hero
Renu..Abdul.meera... muahh!!
The blue part was way beyond BEAUTIFUL..
I still owe u detailed comment...
Hope Jo recovers soon..

Love you for this update.. take care :*

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Lash.. what have u done.. what should I say.. I don't want to let my feelings out.. I don't want this feeling to be diluted by words.. I'm not going to comment on this chapter either.. love u.. just love u.. that's all I have to say..

So the other patient could not be revived and thank u for this.. HE finally met his befitting END..

but Jo in Coma..Hmm..I'll be waiting for her to be out of coma soon and join the boy in building their castle.. that boy badly needs u Jo, please, pretty please.. wake up from ur beauty sleep fast..

that dream.. that small boy's fantasy.. his lonelines.. his innocent wish "Who will take care of ME?".. I was brave through the whole update, but this part made me lose.. lose for you.. and I shamelessly admit.. I cried Lash... for the first time in NJAPA..

Well said Jahnu😕

But I've a hope here...She isn't in coma but waitng for her prince. Yeah she is sleeping beauty and Her prince would bent down and give her a kiss. As he touches her, Sleeping Beauty will open her eyes and smile up at him. ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Well said Jahnu😕

But I've a hope here...She isn't in coma but waitng for her prince. Yeah she is sleeping beauty and Her prince would bent down and give her a kiss. As he touches her, Sleeping Beauty will open her eyes and smile up at him. ❤️❤️❤️

Kal.. do you also wonder where the Talisman is now? 😊

congo to the new thread

Lashy didn't read the chappy but read the last line( he he my bad habit) wht jo is in coma nooo 😲😭

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Kal.. do you also wonder where the Talisman is now? 😊

😆
yeah why not but Jahnu you're banned from making guesses right?😉

As he touches her, Sleeping Beauty will open her eyes and smile up at him then slowly draw her hand up to his and gently pat his palm.. He senses something in hand. He looks down.. There he will find "The lucky Talisman"😆