
Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai - 30 July 2025 EDT
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THE LIVING ROOM
'She's dead, isn't she?'
'I am asking you one last time' his flaming eyes didn't even blink 'WHERE IS THE KEEEY?'
'No...' he toughened his grip around the pocket knife tactfully hidden behind his back, WAITING for this distressed boyfriend to recklessly lunge at him. All he had to do thence was plummet the tool right into the heart cavity. Then, everything would be done. His enemy wiped out. Just like he'd always wanted. Why, he'd even pre-marked his aim on Jalal's chest - ready and raring to attack 'If she can't be mine, she can't be anyone else's...and definitely NOT YOURS!' he'd dealt the final verbal blow
That was it. That distasteful retort was the red flag. The final undoing. The decimation of any sentiment that'd still kept the young man human. He tore ahead in a flash - a man possessed!
Simultaneously; the stalker's assault weapon sprung up like a bolt out of the blue - making a lethal swoop towards its target. However, that shocker didn't deter this boyfriend's rampage. Not for a bit. He'd predicted a sneaky ambush all along. After all, he knew his opponent well-enough by then.
So JUST as the tip of the blade landed upon his skin, Jalal managed to arrest the attack. He'd seized his foe's palm with an iron-clad grip - like a rabid canine paralyzing a deadly insect under its claws. Any slower and he would have been spluttering in his own pool of blood. Yet, such a tragedy wasn't going to happen. With the stalker acting in seconds, he was going to respond in microseconds. With the stalker playing sly, he was going to play slier!
Jalal didn't let go thereafter either. Nah! Instead; he continued to quash the man's right palm while the weapon was still perilously pointed at his own heart - enjoying the escalating agony in the demon's eyes. Worse. As each moment passed, he gradually began cranking up the force of his ruthless grip. Till the strain reached a point that the weapon HAD to be dropped. Till such point that the life was squeezed out of those ensnared fingers. Till the professor's finger-bone eventually cracked under the crippling pressure.
'Ooowwwrrrghhh' Ram Charan yelled in anguish, but his student was in no mood to let him play victim.
Scornfully jerking away the fractured hand, Jalal moved forth to up his game. Seizing his prisoner by the neck, he let his fingers dig into the throat 'Are you...' he growled intimidatingly 'Are you going to tell me where the key is or...'
'U...ugh... n...n...' he choked, coming up with no coherent answer promptly. Straightaway, the tight-hold around his airways constricted further - a warning that his pupil's temperament was running dangerously-low on 'patience'. Starting to frantically gag for oxygen, he wrestled to free himself - but this was tough. Much much tougher than he'd hoped. He scratched. Pushed. Punched. Kicked. However, NOTHING seemed to shake his young aggressor. An aggressor who was way stronger and way way more resilient than he'd imagined - even with a flesh wound on his back!
As the agonizing seconds ticked, Ram Charan was compelled to admit that his battles were futile. That he was losing. That his time was possibly up. And for a maniac, a fear worse than losing his own life was the fear of his enemies winning. His sadistic morals didn't take long to decide. If THAT night was to be his last, a similar fate would befall his victims too. If THAT living room was to be his graveyard, he would ensure his victims breathed their last there too - one way or another! 'W...w...' he subsequently rasped, almost out-of-breath 'W... what... do... I get... if I... tell... you...where th...the...key is?'
'I shouldn't have to teach you this proverb PROFESSOR...' Jalal sneered 'But, beggars can't be choosers!' the vehemence in his clutches had escalated to such an extent that the psychopath's feet were on the verge of being raised off the ground 'WHERE... IS... THE... KEY?'
The renewed choke-holds were stifling. Smothering. Harrowing. Excruciating. Worse than anything this 40 year old could withstand 'J... Ja... Jala... Jalal' with his trembling hands, he indicated towards his neck - requesting for some relief from the deadly strangulation 'Ok... o...I'll... tell...y... you...p...put me...d...down!'
Piercing into his captive's eyes with a nasty glare, the wary boyfriend ultimately loosened the throat-clamp by a small margin 'You have less than 5 seconds to spit out the truth!'
Grabbing Jalal's arm for support once free, the pale professor set his own pace thereon - repleting the depleted oxygen stores in his body by drawing in many sharp breaths. Yes! He could use his lungs again! His wheezy admissions had worked - briefly. He'd managed to buy himself some leeway from the desperate lover boy. After all, his mind needed a breather from the torture too - a breather before he could effectively drive a heartbroken youth into permanent insanity 'I...' panting aloud, he gradually looked up at his impatient student 'I w... would have given you the key... had I not... swallowed it already...'
'What!' stunned by disbelief, Jalal studied his rival - debating if this new statement was a lie or if someone was actually capable of being THIS mental? Well, he didn't have to rack his brains much. The answer arrived a short while thereafter in the form of a low evil laugh. The madman really had swallowed a key - just so Jodha couldn't be hauled out to safety! There was no limit to this creep's mania, was there?
'Tch tch... unfortunate, na?' the professor concluded with a mock
Unfortunate? Actually the bigger unfortunate was the professor now - for he'd GROSSLY undermined the magnitude of Jalal's present hysteria. He'd ended up playing a very bad joke. On a very very vengeful opponent. And at a very very very inopportune juncture!
An eerily quiet instant later, all forms of repressed emotions exploded within that living room. Consumed by a never-before rage, Jalal rammed his own torso onto the lunatic - using the sheer might of his shoulders to mercilessly hammer into the monster 'You bastaaa aaa aaa rrrd!'
'W...wha...what...' caught unaware by the fury of this unexpected cannonball assault the professor was trapped - and at his attacker's mercy - literally being swept through his own house. Like dirt.
In no mood for any form of empathy, the avenger forcibly ploughed through his prey - blitzing him from one end to another. They soared from the entranceway. Charged across the living room. Slammed into the patio doors at the far side. And blasted right through its glass.
Even scraping through the sharp edges of the broken panes didn't slow the momentum. In fact, the duo landed in the balcony with such potency that the professor was brutally pummelled onto the terrace wall, causing him to trip over backwards.
THE BALCONY
'N...n... n... n... n... nnno...ooo' he screamed deliriously - his fingers seizing the short parapet wall at the nth moment, as his body dangled from a three-floor drop 'H...help... someone... Jalal...'
At that crucial point, the 25 year old returned to his senses. Steadily. Perhaps coming out in the open and away from the poisonous air of that apartment had helped calm him down. Perhaps the loud shrieks from the crowds pooling below had jolted him into reality. Either way, the 'wildness' in his manner had made way for something else. It'd made way for a more 'composed' form of hatred - a more 'rational' pursuit for revenge!
'I... can't be doing this...' he soon realized! Not because he pitied a maniac, but because he cared for his own future. While the law might be able to attribute his violence so far, to self-defence - the professor's death hereafter would definitely land him in trouble. And spending years in prison for getting rid of a deranged madman was not how he'd envisioned his days ahead. Yet - and a BIG yet - he knew that hoisting this dangerous man to safety would only expose himself and Jo to new perils. Which meant; he had to put his enemy permanently out-of-action - and without flouting the law too! But, how?
'H... help someone... please...' Ram Charan's howls echoed again, indicating that his hands were unable to carry the weight of his body anymore 'Jalal beta... please help...lift me up ... I promise... I'll hurt you no more...'
Damn! The boyfriend had to snap out of his dilemma. NOW. Time was of the essence. He only had seconds to act. Even lesser to come up with a ploy.
In a hurry, he surveyed his wrecked surroundings. The floor. The glass. The doors.
'The doors' he abruptly stopped - he'd detected something 'The hinges!'
Leaning across ever-so-subtly, he touched the grease on those door hinges and smelled his fingers 'Oil' it was common cooking oil. Odourless. Colourless. And eventually traceless too! His lips curved into a sly grin. His quest for vengeance had hit upon an ingenious ploy. Quickly brushing the oil on his palms, Jalal stepped forth and leaned over.
My my. The sights he witnessed thereafter were so ironical, he could laugh. Shocked crowds that'd thronged the streets beneath to catch sight of this 3rd floor balcony drama were voraciously shouting slogans in unison
'Save him'
'Pull him up to safety'
Funny how after everything that'd transpired, the professor had garnered such empathy from onlookers - onlookers wholly unaware of what an inhuman fiend this man was!
Nevertheless. Wasting no further time, Jalal bent low and stretched his hands out 'Here sir...' he shouted with mock-concern - loud enough to be overheard by the many eyes watching his actions closely 'I'll pull you up... please grab onto my hand... I'll rescue you somehow ... don't worry...'
Thanking his stars, an unwitting Ram Charan instantly welcomed the assistance. He held onto his student - and let go of the terrace wall thereupon.
Alas. The devious stalker had just committed the biggest mistake of his life!
Suddenly, the grip felt weaker. Somehow, his fingers were slipping faster than they were a moment ago. However, he attributed the unstable grasp to Jalal's sweaty palms. His distraught mind was too troubled to think otherwise - too self-absorbed to suspect any foul play!
'Pull me up!' he screamed once more 'I'm falling...I can't hold on...'
'I AMMM' Jalal yelled back, the numbness in his soul hiding his dark emotions 'I'm doing my best sir... but aapko bhi koshish karnaa chaahiye...' he repeatedly tried to yank the man up - but the cautiously-planted 'oily' layer on his own palms ensured that any rescue attempts wouldn't work very well
And just like the cunning young vindicator had planned,
The professor's fingers subsequently slipped...
Further...
And further down...
Till there was nothing for him to hold onto!
At long last, he fell. Nearly ten metres below! No, NOT to his death - but to an alternate fate!
The slower fall had saved his life - but his back had taken the brunt of that ten metre drop. A fall that should leave him with serious injuries - injuries from which a 40 year old would NEVER be able to recover to normalcy.
'Call for an ambulance...QUICKLY!' Jalal shouted out the last part of his performance to the startled bystanders, before slowly stepping back. Moving away from the chaotic scenes below. And onto the privacy of his own thoughts. Never in his civilized life had he ever imagined he'd be driven to such monstrosity against a professor - but, he had!
On that victorious note, he glanced up at the grey night skies - his face reflecting a brief spell of serenity 'Karma's a bitch, isn't she?' he smirked under his breath. As the evening breeze ruffled a tuft of his auburn hair. As another drop of blood trickled down the sides of his face. As he stood tall, he resembled a warrior at the top of his game.
However, now that he'd sailed through the storms. Now that he'd immobilized the stalker. Now that he'd achieved what he had to, the effects of the adrenaline-rush were commencing to wear off! His energy levels were beginning to dip. The first signs of fatigue were taking over. The feverishness that'd kept his beats pounding rapidly so long were becoming shaky jitters. His left shoulder was throbbing in pain again - like it'd been sliced apart from his torso. Before long, he'd hit upon exhaustion like one would a blind-alley brick wall.
Sucked into an unhealthy daze, he turned around - and what he witnessed thence left him giddy and nauseous.
The trails of blood covering the tiled-floors were unnerving. Disturbing. He hadn't noted it for so long - but he'd been losing blood at the rate of knots! No wonder then that all of a sudden, his head felt ten times lighter. That his eyes were beginning to see double. That his balance was deteriorating too - and fast! Even a non-medical man like him knew the symptoms couldn't be normal. What he'd endured couldn't be a superficial flesh wound. It had to be an injury far worse.
'Bah!' he dismissed the notion thereafter, aware that he didn't have much time on his hands 'As long as the blood's mine and not hers... I can't be bothered...'
So, he resumed the strenuous journey back to the opposite end of the living room. His feet getting heavier. Pinning himself onto furniture for support every now and again. Till he eventually reached her still body.
THE LIVING ROOM
'Jo... I got him... we've won!' he celebrated meekly, slumping on the ground once he'd reached her spot. Obviously, her face remained placid - like she wasn't around to share this joy with him. With edgy fingers, he held her cheeks - a growing sense of despair throttling any remaining optimism in him. For some reason, her form felt more 'lifeless' than it had ten minutes ago 'No Jo...' the lump in his throat intensified 'You c...cannot...' overlooking his collapsing expectations and the inconsolable agony in his heart, he bent close to her ears 'Jo, I know I came late...I might have failed you by being unable to tear down that door... but that gives you no right to punish me like this...' he chided her - as though she could hear him 'You cannot give up on me... ok?'
Well, who was he fooling? 'Himself', of course! There was no pulse. No sign of breathing. Her limbs were frozen - like blood had not been running through them. She resembled nothing more than a beautiful corpse. He nervously turned to the main door 'Abdul... any luck yet?'
An instant later, a worried voice echoed from the other side 'Vijaya Hospital's ambulance is on the way...' he paused 'But we've only managed to get hold of one ambulance so far... all others are out on call... Renu's still trying... waise Jalal...we've been calling out to you... what crazy shit's been happening... are you...'
'Abdul' he interrupted, a soft smile lingering on his lips 'Promise me one thing buddy...' he took a much-needed pause 'Promise me that the first ambulance to arrive will take Jodha in it...'
'W...' the friend nearly yelped in distress 'Dost... why are you saying this yaar... what's happened... I just heard that Ram sir fell from...'
'P... promise me...' garnering whatever physical might he could from his body, he stretched his cold palm across to check upon his shoulder wound. Fresh blood was still oozing out. Profusely! 'Promise me y... yaar...' he reiterated
Abdul said nothing. Instead, a moment later - a series of thunderous bangs were heard at the entrance. Bangs that were powerful enough to rattle all the door-frames on that floor 'This f**king lock doesn't budge...' he let out a flustered scream 'And we haven't located a key yet... and...you're not saying anything, Jalal...and the police are taking their own time...and...'
'Abdul... please... just calm down and promise me ...' somehow, his torso sank closer to the floor by the end of that statement - he understood that he was losing his ability to sit upright. To keep his eyes open. To even communicate coherently 'Just p... promise me' he struggled to revive his diminishing reflexes 'Before I blank out...or something...'
'Jalaaal...yaaar... don't do this!' Abdul broke down, unable to restrain his pent-up emotions anymore 'Ok... ok... I... I promise...but...'
'Thanks mate!' he chuckled a final chuckle 'You're a star, you know that?'
'N... no...' Abdul frantically tapped the door, trying to get his bestie's attention 'Listen to me... Jalal... Jalal... are you listening...'
No. Jalal wasn't listening thereafter - because his attention had reverted to her 'Jo...' his faint voice echoed fondly 'You know what... I... I'll take you near the door... that should save the paramedics a few seconds...' he tried to carry her up - but he failed. How could he - when he couldn't even support himself? 'You've got to be strong girl... you've got to help me out here... ok?' he continued speaking to her unresponsive body as he shuffled her lifeless physique along to the best of his ability. Stopping only when they'd reached the right hand side of the main door. Thus ensuring she'd be the first 'casualty' the medics noticed when they eventually came barging in.
Once Jalal had laid her apparently peaceful form to rest, he recognized that his enthralling Jo was disappearing from his field-of-vision. He was passing out. But, there was yet one thing he hadn't done. One thing to do before he lost consciousness. He was yet to share a precious moment with her. A moment that he hadn't been able to share for three months now - unaware if he'd ever be able to do so again.
He bent down.
And kissed her tenderly.
'Your lips are chilly...' the heartbroken boyfriend teased his girl, oblivious to the fact that his own lips were becoming just as blue 'I love you...'
As he slowly came away from her, something dropped out of his shirt collar - consequently catching his fading attention. His Taveez. The lucky Talisman that his abbu had given him as a child. A possession that he held dearer to himself than any other materialistic belonging he owned 'Looks like this wants to be with you now...'
Following a generous amount of strain and scuffle, he managed to remove the protective charm that he'd never removed in the past 'It'll keep you safe, Jo...' he tucked it within the folds of her listless fingers, prior to slouching on the floor - not far from where she was 'Ya Allah!' he shouted, drained out of every ounce of life by that point 'I think I'm tired now Jo...' he mumbled - to keep himself company 'I want to sleep... for some time...and when I wake up...'
OUTSIDE THE FLAT
'Jalal... Jalal... are you listening...' the frenzied buddy turned to the lady kneeling beside him 'Renu... h...he's stopped talking...Jalal is not responding...'
'But why have YOU given up? Why are you sitting down?' battling a fresh surge of tears, Renu almost dropped her mobile as she angrily attempted to prop him up 'Keep going at it Abd...' suddenly, she halted. Her quivering fingers recoiled from his body. His arm was blazing hot to touch. So antsy had she been for the past quarter-hour that she hadn't even spared a thought as to how worn-out this man must be from all that relentless thumping and hitting. Her friend had literally been using his body like the flat head of a hammer - fighting to break the solid brass lock of that door! 'I'm sorry Abdul...' wiping the droplets off her cheeks, she went on to empathize with her weary chum thereafter 'It's ok... you, take a break...'
'No...no...' nudging her away in panic, he rose from the ground - fraught with a renewed sense of unrest 'You're right Renu... I have to keep going... I... can't afford to stop!'
'Madam...'
It was the watchman - intruding their emotionally-charged conversation once again 'Madam, shall I try these spare keys fir se? Shaayad they might open the lock now?'
'Er...yeah...yeah...' she mumbled, kneading her forehead fretfully before stepping out of the way. She knew that the keys weren't going to work. Well, they hadn't worked in ten previous trials. Fat chance they were going to work now.
'Beta...' came another soft voice from the cacophony of noises humming behind them 'Why don't you both move aside for a while... he is going to end up injuring his shoulder badly this way...and you're doing yourself no favours by getting so worked up...'
'Don't worry ...' another neighbour added 'Your friends should be safe... the police will be here soon...'
'Why don't WE give it a few trials ... a few knocks... shaayad darvaazaa khul jaaye...'
'Huh?' casting a short glance at the anxious crowd of people flocking behind them Renu looked away, unconvinced. If a sturdy young man like Abdul hadn't been able to take down that door, there was no way on Earth that a puny watchman and a few old residents could achieve that feat. Reminded once more of all the dead-ends they'd been encountering over the past fifteen minutes, a suffocating wave of grief took over her sensibilities 'F**k you professor...' she swore 'Ram sir... you'll rot in hell... no medical help will cure you... you'll rot in HELL!' turning around, she cast another dismally inquisitive peek through the keyhole of the flat. Damn! The lighting was too dim. Nothing was clear. NOTHING! This unawareness. This state of ignorance was cruel. Torturous! What the hell was transpiring on the other side of that damned door? What had the professor done to those two? Was Jalal safe? Was Jodha safe? Were her friends even ALIVE? With the awful line of thoughts embittering her beyond reason, she went through a fresh round of angry door-banging 'Bloody idiotic thing...doesn't work with ANY key or any amount of brute force... and the ambulance is still stuck in traffic! What am I supposed to...'
'R...Renu' a tearful voice compelled the preoccupied tomboy to snap out of her hysterics 'Renu...' her cheeks now paler than a white sheet, Meera was unsuccessfully trying to muffle the speaker of her mobile as she stuttered 'Aunty is crestfallen... she's unable to compose herself... anyway, her family friends are trying to get hold of other hospitals for an ambulance... but...' she was beyond herself, on the brink of capsizing into a sobbing wreck 'I'm too terrified to call Jodha's house... I... I...'
'Wait!' abruptly cutting short the cry-fest, Renu stepped forth to clutch Meera's evidently tense face 'Stop... you've wailed enough...' she bore into the meek lady's eyes with a persuasive stare - her only means to hide her own insecurities for then 'Just keep calling...ok? Your friend needs you to be strong for her...' her voice dropped to a whisper 'Abdul needs you to be strong for him...so... buck up!' having meted the power-speech, she paused for a while. To think further on. And to press her head that was hurting from all that overthinking. Till an alternate idea dawned upon her 'You guys just keep doing what you're doing... I'm going to leave... to try and search for help... the police are taking their own sweet time to respond...I'm going to...'
'No Renu...' Abdul began protesting - but stopped when he saw the remaining shades of colour rapidly draining from his girl-pal's features 'W...what happened?'
'U...u...' words failed her. She right away thought she was going to lose her sanity. Why wouldn't she? It was not often that she saw such a sight - a sight so gut-wrenching that she was thankful the other two hadn't noticed it yet 'Ugh' she instinctively covered her mouth - feeling queasier than she'd ever felt in her entire life. She HAD to seal that gap at the bottom of the door. Fast. Before her friends spotted the ghastly development.
Choosing the quickest available option, she kicked the doormat towards the door and closed the bottom gap in a haste. Blood had started trickling out of the flat from under the door and she didn't want her friends to see that mess. They wouldn't have it in them to stomach such a fright.
'What happened, Renu?' a miserable Abdul questioned
'Oh...nothing' wiping the sweat off her forehead, she took a blank step back 'I'm just going to go... ok?' she wasn't even going to think or reason or suppose or fear whose blood it was that she'd just seen. She was just going to rush to get some help 'I'm leaving... you guys ... just keep trying!'
'I'll come with you...'
'No you stay here...' she overrode him, her dazed eyes still coming to terms with the shock of what she'd just witnessed 'Meera wouldn't be able to cope alone...I'll go... by myself...'
'But where are you going?'
'To search for someone who can open this lock...ASAP... a blacksmith maybe...there should be a shop nearby...'
And if she couldn't find a blacksmith, she'd look for a burglar to pick-open the lock.
And if she couldn't find a burglar, she'd hijack a crane to tear down that building.
But she would fine SOMEONE or SOMETHING to open that darned door! And soon...
Thank the Lord for her sake - and for a lot of other people's sakes - that her search didn't have to extend to such extremes. A man was working away at his shop just two streets away - a locksmith, to be precise!
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The quiet little boy continued to curl the edges of the long paper he was holding onto, adamantly refusing to give a 'yes' nod. His reactions were now plain enough to decipher - he didn't want to hide the extent of his disgruntlement any longer. Well, he didn't like what he'd just read. He knew what he was getting was a raw deal - and nothing would convince him otherwise!
When the silent spell had gone on for long enough - way longer than any 'sulk-session' he'd displayed in the past - he finally mustered some good-old 12 year old courage and looked up. At the gentleman in front. His handsome face appeared so stern now - his usually-affectionate bespectacled-eyes so authoritative. But, why? Why was his loving father coming across as one so strict? Was it the darkness of the room that brought about that effect? Or was it the gravity of the situation that called for such tough-love? Either way, the boy couldn't understand what HIS own fault was in all of this! Why was HE the one being punished? 'Not fair'
Interrupting the ongoing stillness in the room, the man cleared his throat - an indication that his patience was wearing thin. The young boy had better speak up. Pronto!
'But abbu...' he ultimately grumbled aloud, expressing his displeasure like a child who'd just lost his most precious collection of toys - all at one go 'Abbu... you'd promised ... you'd promised to take me to the India-Pakistan cricket match next week... and you say you're leaving now... that's cheating... besides, you're telling me my doggie's not going to stay with me for long either...' he had to fight back the whelming impulse to break down into tears, since he could guess that his dad was currently in no mood to put up with weep-a-thons 'And this list... I don't like what it says... this list is so scary...' he'd used the term 'scary' because he didn't know what other adjective to use 'I mean... it's asking me to do so many things...' his cute brows knotted into a frown - a frown too worried and too matured for the likes of a twelve year old 'It says... I have to take care of Ammi... I have to take care of the house... I have to take care of the office... I have to take care of Taaya...'
He abruptly stopped. His father had now folded his arms unhappily, darting him a very grim look as he'd done so. It was obvious. Abbu wasn't approving of this 'whiny' display from an otherwise brave young lad!
'But... but...' the boy swiftly added, hoping to get done with his confessions and woes, before the inevitable - before his father was going to leave him forever 'Abbu... I'm meant to take care of all of them... but, who is meant to take care of ME?'
Puzzlingly, the man said nothing thereafter. Nah. He only let out a long sigh in response. However a second later, he DID grab his confused young lad by the wrist and led him towards a high window. Once he'd opened the curtains, the vista outside left the boy speechless. Awestruck.
What a welcome change the scenes outside were - a complete contrast to the gloomy interiors he'd been cooped in for so long.
'Wooow!' he exclaimed, perching on the edge of his toes as his kiddish fingers grabbed the window sill to afford him a better view
Sunny skies and fluffy clouds above. Soft sands and tranquil tides below. The breeze was light. The water crystal clear. The sounds a soothing playlist of nature's many melodies. It was God's skilled artwork on this canvas of nature.
Then, the father pointed to a silhouette in the distance - a petite silhouette that the son had somehow missed the first time around
It was a girl. Around ten or eleven. Playing all by herself. Possibly building something on the shores.
In a short while, the little one sensed that she was being watched and stood up to observe her spectators. The intrusion not frightening her in the least, she waved out to her audience with a sweet smile 'Hi...'
He observed her, curiously. Muddy hands. Small hazel eyes. Raven-black wavy hair. Bright features. Something about this girl was so different. So refreshing. So welcoming. So much like 'home'. Though hesitant at first, he waved back too - his smiles-of-relief subconsciously morphing into bigger grins 'Hi'
'I'm trying to build something...' she called out to him with an affectionate blink 'Wanna help? We can build this together...'
'Sure' he nodded and turned around - wanting to find out if he had his father's permission to join her.
Gosh! He hadn't realized it, but his father had left. He was standing alone. In the darkness. With none beside him. He cast a brief glimpse at the door. He didn't know how - but it'd been locked too. Nevertheless, he knew what he had to do. After all, he did have abbu's consent. So, he dragged out a step stool. Parked it under the sill. Climbed onto it and jumped out of the window. To join her. Something he couldn't wait to do...
'Jodha!' his eyes opened.
The skies were white. Wait. The sky wasn't white - the walls were. Then, how was it sunny? Or was it a bright light instead? Many bright lights. But, why was this place so quiet? It wasn't 'serenely' quiet. It was 'clinically' quiet. What WAS this white place? This white room? God. This was a hospital! An operation theatre!
'Check the patient's vitals...'
'Is he becoming hypertensive?'
'Check his eye reflexes...'
'He's awake?'
'Seems like it...'
'Dr. Swaminathan... I think we need to top up the Propofal...'
'Yes... I'm doing just that... and the Sufentanil too... not to worry... his vitals should settle down soon enough...'
'Nurse... any news from our blood bank yet? We need at least 2 units more! Hurry up!'
'No news yet doctor... but the staff are calling up other banks nearby...'
'AB+ blood group na... so, not the easiest to get hold of...'
'We've barely got him out of Hypovolemic shock... we need more units ASAP... ask them to keep trying... I want this young chap to make it through fine... I could do with some good news in the lead up to the New Year!'
'I understand doctor... waise bhi... I heard that the female patient who came in with him... the one in the other OT... couldn't be revived...'
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DAY 3 post-op INSIDE THE HOSPITAL ROOM
'Hey yaar...'
'Can you hear us?'
'Huh?' who was this? Was this person talking to him? Well, the voice certainly sounded familiar.
'Jalal?'
He slowly reopened his eyes. It took a great deal of energy to do so though - what with the eyelids seeming to weigh as much as a pair of iron shields
'How are you feeling buddy?'
He wanted to answer. He tried to - but it was easier thought' than done! For starters, his tongue was too dry to function effectively 'U...' he swallowed 'Um...I...'
'Yayyy!' suddenly, a loud round of cheers echoed around him - followed by a series of high-fives too!
'FINALLY!'
'You've spoken...'
'At last!!!!'
God! Who were these people? Feeling drowsier than he had when he'd downed an entire bottle of vodka once, Jalal battled to keep his eyes agape so he could decipher the surroundings. It was a decent plain mid-sized room. He was lying down in the centre. Possibly, on a large single bed. His left upper torso covered in complex layers of dressing. Some annoying tubes needled all over his arms. And a few - no - MANY faces surrounding him.
'Hey sleeping beauty...' the outline of a woman's profile appeared to come close to his face 'It's us yaar... RENU speaking here!'
'Jalal...' another recognizable voice chipped in 'It's ME ABDUL! Renu's here... Salim... Sana... Meera... your office colleagues are waiting outside... many of our classmates had dropped in earlier ...' ensuing an awkward lull, he continued on a more hush tone 'Even Maan and Payal are here... waiting in the corridors...'
'Oh!' so, it was THEM. HIS friends. HIS people.
'Abdul' Renu suggested 'Shouldn't we inform aunty? She'd be so relieved!'
'Yeah... you wanna bring her here?'
'Huh?' he wondered. Aunty? Who was aunty'? 'Oh!' it struck him then - they were referring to HIS mom 'H...' he muttered his first conscious syllables, though the speech was awfully groggy 'A... ammi?'
'Aunty's ok yaar...'
'Unfortunately, she wasn't taking the news very well... so the doctor prescribed her some medication...to calm her down...'
Shit! His heart sank. Even in that semiconscious narcotized state, he knew he didn't like what he'd heard. It'd taken years to wean his mom off those anti-depressants, following abbu's demise - only for her to revert to those medicines now. Shit!
'Hey...' he sensed a gentle tap on his palm 'Your mom will be fine... don't worry...'
'Especially now that you're awake...'
'And finally speaking...'
'WE were all worried sick! Then imagine what she must have gone through...'
'You've been unresponsive for THREE days, you know...during which she hardly slept... or ate...'
'What!' a few warning bells abruptly went off in his head. Three days? He'd been unconscious for three days? THREE WHOLE DAYS? What had become of HER in the meanwhile? 'J...' he gasped
'What?'
'J...' he restated in haste, in case his eyes automatically sealed themselves shut again
'Kyaa?'
'Urgh!' he grew flustered. What the hell had the doctors doped him with that he couldn't even talk clearly after three days? Drawing in a long breath, he spoke up again - making every effort to be heard a bit clearer now 'Jodha?'
The jovial ruckus that'd been enlivening the room slowly tempered down. A cloak of melancholy had shrouded the ambience. Even his semi-blurred vision could identify it - the cheer that'd been prevalent on his group's faces so long, had faded away.
His pulses raced. His worst fears were coming true. His already-haggard mind and body could take this uncertainty no more 'Jodha?' the frail boyfriend re-queried, muttering a hundred prayers as he did so 'W...where is sh...she?'
'Dost... you should rest now...'
'Jalal... you sleep... we'll be back later... ok?'
Damn! This was crazy. Why weren't they JUST TELLING HIM? What was the point of this silence! 'Bolo na guys...' he was yelling now - or at least that's what his mind thought it was doing 'HOW is Jodha...'
'Jalal...'
'She has slipped into a coma yaar...'
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Dedication by Anjali -
THE SPIRIT OF A VINDICATOR
It's in my nature to be Kind, Gentle & Loving
But know this enemy!
When it comes to matters of protecting
My Family, My Friends & My Love...
Do not trifle with me for I am the
Most Powerful & Relentless Creature
you will ever know!!!
You owe me so much... *sigh* I'm just taking life as it comes Choti 😭Hee hee thanks so much re... so I can sense this one has really touched you in that 'sweetest' corner of the heart 🤗
Originally posted by: Super Kool
Apologies in advance for the long post that is about to follow...was not able to post because of tight schedule...and...to cut short on my post when it's about NJAPA would have been criminal...to shuru se shuru karte hain...Yayyy and for the first time, it's taken me a whole week to reply too.. 😲...Hows you re... 🤗 and people apologize for short posts not long posts..Poor vishal!!! I have soft spot for this guy and felt bad because he was hurt...Hee hee.. someone had to be the bali ka bakra na...😆jalal! Jalal! Jalal! Why are you so adorable? and which tantrik should I visit to bring this guy out of the novel...😆thank god things have finally started to look up for the couple...jodha was so proud and why not? No, it was not just about finally proving her point...it was more about being proud of the choice she has made...proud of the fact that she was right to trust this man with her heart, body and soul...And that pride continues...that short convo with jalal was cute...☺️bade bhaiyya has a lot to make up...and the mumbled thank you was a start...Loool...The unshakable faith of jalal on maan and his logical mind were enough for him to spot punctures in ' maan is the stalker' theory..hot+ intelligent= my dream man...okay...did I get sidetracked, again? While reading that part I was yelling 'you are right jalal...just follow your hunch...go! go! go!...'Awww so cute... I love it when my friends tell me THEIR thought processes as they read the story... makes for such a gratification as a writer 😳The ultimate revelation of the stalker and the painful realisation that jodha was on his mercy was pure agony for me as a reader and a woman...her fierce struggle brought tears to my eyes...despair and misery tried to creep in everytime...and everytime she came back with all the courage she could gather even in her drugged state...lashy, you owned me when I read jodha's thought...and they were...no matter what happens today people who love me will always love me...no matter what...no, I don't want this for myself...I hate what is happening to me...but...i will be the survivor and not the victim...👏 Yes.. it was pure agony! But she made the best of a very bad situation!Professor...oh god!!! What should I say...he is a sick man...if only there was someone who could have given him the attention he should have got...someone to support him while he battled with his mental condition...no, don't get me wrong...I am not defending him...not at all...what he has done to jodha is despicable...loathsome...vile and vicious...what I mean is if he would have got the proper medical care and attention things would not have deteriorated to this extent..probably, he wouldn't have turned into this monster...our Ja-jo wouldn't have to go through the misery they are in...things would have turned out different and far better for all concerned...alas! It wasn't to be...True.. I agree.. wholeheartedly...Jalal had beaten the prof to pulp...god!!! My blood was boiling too...he wrecked havoc in his and his girl's life...took away robbie and was bragging about... I wanted to wring the prof's neck...I saw red when I read it...I am worried for jodha...she was chalky...and the use of word lifeless was enough to worry the hell out of me...she said she couldn't see...was that because of the day's event taking toll on her body or because of her bashed skull...poor jalal!!!Yes the reason she couldn't see was because of the head injury.. generally the first thing you lose (permanently/temporarily) after a head injury at the back of your head is your vision😭His heart was ripped right out of his chest...he cherishes this woman and to see her in such a state had to be devestating...on top of that the prof managed to sneak up and attack him...jalal is battered and bruised..mentally, physically and emotionally..and the prof has finally managed the impossible...he has pushed him beyond the point of humanity...it's now his primal insticts versus prof's viciousness...an intense clash is about to follow...Yes dear... you push any man too much and this is what happens... you awaken the beast in him... as they say, a man defending his house, his horse and his family are formidable..Lashy, I always fall short in my efforts to appreciate you...words never seem to be enough...I went through myriad emotions while reading these parts...i was excited because things finally got better for the couple...I was afraid because it seemed like the lull before the storm...I was frustrated and angry because of the pain and torture an innocent was subjected to...I was in tears when the prof bashed jodha in the head...I was hopeful when jalal reached the prof's house...I was heartbroken to see ja-jo in this condition...as I have said before this story is such a roller coaster of emotions...and I can't get enough of it...lub you lashy...you are a Rockstar...Thanks so much... and you're mine... 🤗My schedule is very tough these days that's why it took me some time to catch up...Thank you for the pm...thank you for never giving up on your late lateef girl...❤️No never!🤗
Take 5 for another riveting chapter with 56 writer-e-khaas ... it was tiring for us, but I am sure it was even more tiring for you 🤗
(1) Animal instinct: We knew that Jalal had reached the same level of extremity as Ramcharan in the end of the last chapter where we were told of the transition ... But , the beginning of 56 took this to a new level ... The hunting-prey imagery and analogies were amazing and brought it to life. If last week I liked the flower under the shoe, this week it was "like a rabid canine paralyzing a deadly insect under its claws" and then the image of the cannonball with Jalal's final ramming into the creep after he swallowed the key.
(2) A return to senses ... How amazing your Jalal is that he came back to senses at the right moment ... What good would be avenging Jodha's pain if it would threaten the same future with her? But what an amazing ploy- he made it seem he was saving Ramcharan ... Only to have oil greased hands to drop his foe to a fitting end. And some may ask why Jalal had to go to such extremes with Ramcharan, but he had to - or else Ramcharan would have thwarted every attempt of Jalal to save Jodha.
(3) Isn't it amazing how adrenaline can bring you strength ... But immediately Jalal weakened as he saw the blood. His despair at seeing Jodha was heart-wrenching ... Especially in such a moment that he had defeated their adversary. And poor guy, he kept saying how he was late. His two last actions in the living room touched me ...The following four things touched me in the end of this scene:
- One was asking Abdul to make sure that Jodha went in the first ambulance ... His presence of mind when he heard there was only one ambulance is amazing
- Second was his taking Jodha to the door ... To make sure her rescue was as quick as possible ... And the beautiful way he was connected to her and talking to her the whole time - particularly the line "You've got to be strong girl... you've got to help me out here... ok?"
- The loving kiss
- The symbolic nature of the taaveez ... and how it wanted to be a part of her now
And how ominous was the "sleep" that he was referring to ... the sleep that both Jodha and Jalal went off too .. leaving their friends hanging.
(4) Renu's practicality, guts, and presence of mind: Today Renu stood strong for me ... yes Abdul was also trying his best and pushing forward ... but I liked four things with Renu today:
- The way she objected "Why have YOU given up?" to Abdul ... but then later understood the state of Abdul
- She herself was getting pulled into grief without all the dead-ends ... but seeing Meera she herself pulled herself together and asked her to be strong for them
- Her presence of mind when she saw the blood through the bottom of the door ... and covered it ... because if the group had seen it ... all hope and perseverance may have crashed
- And then she was extremely practical and found the lock smith.
(5) And as always, my favorite parts are the way you transition scenes ... moving from Part 1 to Part 2 ... we do not know where we are ... as does Jalal not know where he is.
How beautiful is the part in blue? In the realm, between life and death ,and as you are fighting for your life, you often do see memories floating around you (I myself have shared a similar experience with me) ... you travel through time. How beautiful it was ... the image of a young boy with his father ... and the imagery was beautiful "It was God's skilled artwork on this canvas of nature." And to be honest, this scene was like a sunshine in the darkness ... before we all came into the darkness with him and transitioned to darkness and being alone ... when he woke up! Hats off for a brilliant addition to the chapter! 👏
And you kept us well in suspense in the second part - we didn't know who was the patient they said could not survive ... we did not know what happened to Jodha. And you brought some closure, as we knew Jalal was safe and Jodha was alive but in a coma. I am not worried Lashy that Jodha is in a coma ... after all how can she wake up from her deep slumber till she knows that her Jalal is waiting for her on the other side ... your Jalal will get her out just like the show Jalal brought Jodha back after the drinking of poison. 😳
Thanks again for a beautiful, but tiring (more for you), update writer-e-khaas 🤗