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Chapter 14 :

Guess what? I'm sitting in Mr. Jalal's BMW and more over, guess what? 'What?' My sub-conscious peered through me, I'm sitting beside him. Oh my Holy God! I think i'm already going to pass out. Will I? Oh my God. I'm going to faint.

'You're always this quite or is it because of me?' He breaks the silence.

'No, I..' i bit my lower lip.

He suddenly stopped the car and looked at me.

'You're biting your lip again.' He says, his gaze; so intense. Oh God. Tell me, tell me he just did not licked his lips. That's so hot, right? I spared my lower lip and gasped.

'Breath Jodha.' He said, there was a way that he made my name look hot, ultimately hot.

I nodded. He started driving again.

'I love this song.' I said as John Legend's 'All of me' started to fill the atmosphere in the car.

'I love it too.' He said; still concentrating on driving.

'Geez! The lyrics seem so pure so true, right?' i looked at him, there's excitement in my voice for i don't know what reason!

He looked at me for a second, his eyes dark and intense. Burning. There's something. There's something that his eyes want to tell me.That darkness. That intense gaze. There's absolutely something, right?

'Stop over thinking...' I scolded myself.

I seriously have to stop thinking too much, too much bout him, it's not good.

'Sometimes, you wouldn't know if Good is really good or if bad is really bad.' He said out of somewhere, bringing my thoughts back to him.

'Huh? What?' i exclaimed; all confused.

'I mean, Don't be too easy Jodha, you have to be careful in life if you don't want to suffer mishaps, you have to know things till their roots just to justify them into bad or good order.'

I exactly know now what he meant. His meaning was so right and so...true?

'We're here.' He announced as the car stopped , giving me no more space for thinking.

'Ah Yes.' I groaned.

He opened the car's door for me Such a nice gentleman I thought.

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We headed inside the house as soon as Moti opened the door, and there was when i saw Mr. Jalal's brother, Mirza. Such a cute guy. Well, time went on fast, we bid our goodbyes to the both of them and i personally thanked Mr. Jalal for everything he did for me, from saving me from a kiss and then helping me while i was throwing up then taking me in a safe place and providing me comfort and luxurious stuff. That's so much for me.

I've never wanted things more than necessary in life, and this was something really extra ordinary. I just hope i get successful one day and complete all my dreams.

The same day Me and Moti decided to do some shopping since she was going out of the city to meet her grandparents for a week or more, so i'll help her get her stuff and i can buy a little stuff for myself too.

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2 Days later :

Did i ever mentioned how nervous would I really be at this day? Oh my God, No. Hell No. I feel like shouting my lungs out and running out of this hall. Damn. The atmosphere here is quite hectic, people rehearsing again and again to just hit the Perfect note. While me? I'm sitting here, standing at others; blank mind.

f**k. I should be rehearsing too. Right?

The people are really nervous, energetic and excited right now, nervousness hit me more and more as time flew by and my name was too soon to be called, just after Kris will end singing his song 'Time boils the rain' It'd be my turn.

Oh my god ! What shall i do? Run? Run run run.. Run Jo Run.

Shall i run?

Sure?

Oh my god.

I can't.

'And next to our pleasure, lets welcome the talented Miss. Jodha.' The MC announced. My heart stopped beating and i ran towards the stage from the backstage. And what i saw raced my heart even more. So many audience. So many. And... He's here too.

Mr. Jalal.

Oh my holy God.

Why?

f**k my life.

Since i had no introduction i cheered myself in my heart only and started singing 'One last Night' By Vaults.

Tied to a sallow heart
Why does he want to bring me where he goes?
Oh and to find out the reasons why
It's enough to make you wanna try for one last night

There was a complete silence for a moment of patience in the entire audience. It seemed as if they stopped breathing for a minute. Oh my god ! Am i that horrible? And is my voice really that horrible? Jeeez. I'm a mess.

Ghosts and silhouettes
They take a piece of me, they want it all
Oh but to wait in an empty room
With the feeling that it's closing in

There were many and many eyes on me, making me feel energetic and uncomfortable too, but that only one gaze made me nervous, so nervous. Mr. Jalal was sitting in the middle front row, his legs crossed, his ankle resting on his thigh and his index finger bruising across his lower lip. His eyes burning gray. Oh my holy hell. I'm gonna fall.

I had a dream I was dying
But I found nobody there
And if one last night is all that we've been given
Let's live it like we care
For one last night
For one last night

And i continued singing until the song ended. And there was it, my hard work of years payed off. Oh my god. This was really a moment of emotions, i wanted to cry, really badly. I wanted Moti here so that i could hug her tightly and weep out all my pain and happy tears out, after all, that's what friends do, right?

The audience cheered and applauded so loudly for me whilst i heard many compliments from the audience such as 'Go for it Girl.'

'Your voice is sensuous.'

'You're great.'

'I like her voice.'

And so so so so many more.

This is probably my one of the life moment. I'm so happy and over whelmed and pleased with myself today.

Yehet😃 Back with an update. Gehehe. I hope you all enjoyed the update. Well keep enjoying because now i'm really back in the mood to update. And yeah, one imp thing, stop pushing me for updating other FF's, as promised i'll finish all, it's just that i wanna carry on with this one for the time being, so i'll just keep updating this and other ones in a while too. Any queries? Ask me in the comments. The update opened many new facts about my characters, i hope you enjoyed the update. Hit likes and comment~ Kamsahamnida 😳
Edited by MeShu-Holic - 10 years ago
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Recap!!

The audience cheered and applauded so loudly for me whilst i heard many compliments from the audience such as 'Go for it Girl.'

'Your voice is sensuous.'

'You're great.'

'I like her voice.'

And so so so so many more.

This is probably my one of the life moment. I'm so happy and over whelmed and pleased with myself today.

Chapter 15:


Of course, that was one mind-blowing moment of my life. Actually, unforgettable moment of my life would be better. I'm standing in front of a ocean of people who are whole heartily clapping for me. I never thought that i could do mind-blowing jobs like this? What else can i do? I obviously don't know. But i hope to achieve my life goal and become something in life.

As soon as the claps and cheers were finished i hurried back to the back stage. To my surprise; i bumped into someone so lean. I looked up and.. I lost my mind. His fragrance, his scent; everything hit me like alcohol.

'Mister...' i gasped; unable to continue my words when his arms struggled at my small back. I closed my eyes, bit my lower lip and breathe heavily. He took my face in his palms and caressed it with his long-slandered fingers. He then moved nearer and nearer until our lips were touching. The touch felt same as the first kiss we had. In the elevator. Oh my god. Jeez! His tongue opening and parting my mouth, touching even the deepest corner of my mouth. Oh my god.

'Yo man, where are you lost?' Someone hit me on the upper arm. What the f**k?
'What?' i asked unconsciously.
Oh damn. Where is he going? He's disappearing. Wait..Wait..Jalal..

'Jodhaaa.' This time i was pinched mercilessly.
'Oh god, what the hell.' I cried in pain.

I was...fantasizing about him? It was such a...day dream? Oh my god.

'Jesus Christ. Go to stage you bum, you're name is called. You won. Go brat.' Ellie said pushing me towards the stage.

Oh my god? Wait, what? I won? What? How? And my dream? No, my fantasizing. Oh god. This is hell. I'm all messed up. God, damn it. Without any other second thought i ran to the stage, to be only greeted by a huge round of applause once again.

'Congratulations Miss.' Mrs. Leigh Hunt congratulated me, handing me a certificate for which i had to pose with her. I smiled as the camera flashed, and just then she whispered, 'Go and receive your award, there's him ..' She said pointing finger towards. Mr. Jalal. Oh my God. f**king hell. Right?

I was again, yet again; pushed towards another side; unconsciously. I smiled as i was nearer to him. We shook our hands in a firm shake. 'Hey Miss. Jodha. I hope you're doing well.' His smile, oh my holy god. Just look at it. His teeth and his lips. Oh f**k. He's perfect. Unable to make any eye contact i looked down nervously, smiled a half smile and said, 'Yes, thank you.'

He handed me the award and to my another surprise, i had to post for a picture with him too. Wow. We together in a photo? Oh my god, really?

I can't be any happier for the fact that i won the singing competition. And i can't be more happier to realize myself that i'm not less than anybody. I'm satisfied with my life, i have dreams to achieve and many works to do. I'm happy to tell all those bitches out there who point fingers on me just because my mom and dad aren't together and i haven't grew up with them. Shut up now bitches i thought.

I smiled as the camera flashed, 'Done, thanks.' The cameraman smiled. As i was about to leave i heard him say, 'Meet me outside in the Parking area, Jodha.' Something inside me melted hot. Hot. Hot. Hot. It's burning. My heart's racing. My saliva wants another saliva exchange. Ew? What the hell. I'm so gross.

Unable to take my voice out i just nodded. Not looking at him because i'm blushing crimson red. Holy hell.

As i went backstage i got many cheers for the other competitors and many congratulations, I thanked them all and took my stuff and made my way to leave..to the parking lot. Oh god, what is he gonna do? Jeez! Kiss? Take me there? oh no, hell. Shut up Jo. What are you thinking?

Bloody spoiled brat.

There is a huge rush of many types of cars, luxurious to middle class. I look here and there, trying to find him. Damn, he should have told me the exact place. Wait, was it a joke? Just to trick me down? Ah, no. Of course not. Such a big businessman wouldn't do those stuff, right? But what if ?

'Ahhh..' i groaned in confusion.

'You're okay?' His voice soothed me.

I turned back, He's standing in front of me, so close..that i can even touch him. He's looking down at me, his eyes searching and scotching mine. Then he smirked. Oh damn. I died. I died. I'm dead. What the hell is wrong with me? Why am i behaving like a stupid hormonal teenager. Shut up Jo, act smart. Act kind. Act mature.

'Yeah,, thanks.'Tingles of a new sensation was going on and on in my body.

'Mi...Mister..Jalal..' I smiled nervously, he moved his hand forward. What? Why? Oh I got it. I moved my hand forward too and we shook our hands. His touch sending millions of sparks in my body. I don't know what it is and why it is, but i feel something extremely hot when he touch me. His touch is like; magical. It feels as if my body have been craving for this one and only touch since ever.

'Miss Jodha, we meet again.' He smiled brightly. I wonder how does he manage to look so perfect and so sexy and so bossy all at once only. 'Yeah.' I flushed a fake smile. He didn't said anything, he just kept staring me. I know i can feel that even if i'm looking at my tangled fingers to avoid the awkwardness. I know his eyes are fixed on me, as if he's studying me. Could he read my mind? Oh, no. Obviously not, right? But what if... Arrghhh Dipshit! My sub-conscious raged on with anger inside me.

Finally, gathering some strength i looked up and found him staring at me blankly. Oh what the hell! Alright, let's just do it Jo. 'So, why did you called me here?' I asked; hardly giving any expression this time. Control. Control. Please control.

'Your phone is switched off, i guess. So, your mate called me.' He stopped, watching my expression with utter interest.

'Wait..what?' I creased my brows.

'Miss Moti. She called me, saying your phone is switched off and that she wanted to break in a important news to you.' He explained.

'Oh.' I managed to speak. What the hell?

He took out his phone from his coat suddenly and then made several touches on it and handed it to me, 'Talk to her.' He smirked. What's with the smirk?

I did as told. I took the phone. I heard Moti on the other side of the phone, 'Hello?' She said. I took a little distance from him and stood in a corner, 'Moti..' i murmured as quietly as i can. 'What the hell you spoiled brat. Where the f**k have you been? And most importantly where the hell is your f**king phone?You s**t, do you know how worried have i been, you prostitute.' She said it all in a one go. I laughed, so hard. 'What the hell. Do you think it's funny? OH no, wait, let me tell you Miss Jodha Singh Rajput that this isn't funny at all, and you may pay for this laugh right now.' She hissed.

'Oh my god babe, you're hilarious as ever.' I continued laughing.

'Whatever, now listen , there's something really important.'

'Mhm.' I listened quietly this time.

'Okay, look i'm going to be out for another week with my family , there's some family problem, i'll tell you those once i come back, but ..the main thing is, you're moving out of the house and staying with Jalal.'

Wait, what? My world stopped spinning. I didn't understood anything, as if my brain short-circuited and needed to be rebooted; immediately. Everything around me stopped for a while. How the f**king hell this could happen.

'You're joking, right??' I hoped she was.

'Not at all.' i could almost sense her evil smirk on the other side of the phone.

'You know, you're a bitch.' I said as quietly as i could.

'Ahun, i know that too.' And she laughed.

'Wow.' i laughed sarcastically.

'Look babe, we need to get the flat empty because it need repairing, the roofs you know would break and anyone could get hurt, i couldn't risk that. Do you understand me?'

'Hm.' i nodded as if she could see me.

'It's fine, cheer up. Okay sorry but i Got to go. See ya later baby. I love you , bye.'

And the call went dead ...

Just like the senses in my body, the call was dead too..

Me. Jalal. Us? Under one roof? In his house? With him? See him everyday? Me. With him? Staying at his home? Kidding, right? Oh my god. Hell No. I screamed inside. I looked where i last left him and oh geez! He's standing at the same place i left him. I looked at him, he was looking at me only, not blinking at all. How bold, right? I slowly made my legs move and went to him. I handed him his phone back.

'What's wrong?' He asked, his voice full of concern.

'What? No, nothing.' I smiled sarcastically, but it looked like a kind smile.

'Ohkay then, let's get moving.'

Without giving me a moment to react he held my wrist, sending million of sparks again as his skin bruised against mine. His hands warm. Pleasing. Sexy. Inevitable. Oh god what the hell. I have already lost my senses but now i think i'm going to lost my consciousness. What's going on damn?

We're walking towards his car, oh it's an Audi R8 spyder now. Omg! He's really rich, a rich guy with many toys. I wonder if he have any other car besides this and the other one. Boys and their toys.

He opened the car door for me and sat on the driver's seat when i asked him, 'Where are we going?' I kept looking at him, his features, so manly..so attractive so hot so sexy. He's really an Alpha..!

'We're first heading at your place. Then going my home.' He smirked.

'Oh.' I said with a small voice.

This is hell, you know hell. It feels good and feels bad too. I'm excited but i'm nervous too. I haven't lived with anyone ever before except Moti, i'm just so nervous. And excited because i'm going to live with the extremely hot Mr. Jalaluddin Mohammad. It's a roller coaster for me right now. I just hope everything goes well.

We then reached at our apartment and i hurriedly opened the door and asked him to take a seat while i pack my stuff, 'Have a seat.' I smiled as kindly as i could. He nodded and then took a seat on my bed. Alright, what the hell? I mean he should've sit on the couch, it'd be hard for me to pack now. Right?

Pushing all my thoughts aside, i ran towards my wardrobe and took out my clothes and everything to pack my stuff while i saw him busy on his phone, scrolling up and down. Boys and their toys. Exactly.

Oh my god! This is going to get awkward, right? I thought as i took out my undergarments. I need to keep those, it's essential, but.. How can i drag those out in front of him and keep'em in my luggage . No, no way in hell i'm doing that. But. Ugh! Damn it. And wow. To my surprise he just kept his phone back in his pocket and looked at me.

'You're done?' He asked.

'No..I..I..just..' i smiled a very very very weird smile i ever had.

He looked at me; all confused. I'm such a mess. I turned back towards my wardrobe. Look Jodha, you got to do that, okay? Do it..Just go..Do it, it's normal..i

'It's alright Jodha.. You do not need to be shy cuz of your undergarments, it's a normal thing. I wouldn't mind.' Oh my god! What the hell? Jeez!! Holy mosses ... My holy god. Oh my god. Oh my lungs.. Oh my air.. Oh my breath.. Oh my...he made it even awkward. What the hell.. Oh my god! How can he ? Oh jesus! Oh my god. It's very awkward, very very very much. I need to run out of here..

I turned back and he's staring at me; smirking as usual . I turned back again immediately. My heart racing. Then, i took out my undergarments and hurriedly kept them in the luggage.

I then after packing up my stuff said, 'I'm done.' He looked at me hurriedly and then smirked and got up, 'Then let's go!' He commanded. I nodded and smile , he took my stuff and my bag and carried it out and threw it in the car like a gentleman , we then sat in his car and drove to my new destination. His Home.

Oh my god! I'm so excited right now, how will the house look like? And wait, are there any other members in his house like his parents or siblings? Oh my god , i feel nervous. What would i do there? Don't know damn, and wait, is he alright with me staying at his home? I don't know. I still feel very awkward. Oh god, help me.
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Hey Everyone❤️
I hope you all enjoyed the chapter. That wasn't a big one but i'm trying LOL. Thanks for the appreciation guys,it means a lot. Sorry for the mistakes and for being late but i kind of dozed off these days since my college started this week. Enjoy!
Edited by MeShu-Holic - 10 years ago
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Happy New Year! love it!!!! update soon

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so , when u r planning to update ?😉

next month 🤣
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haan,haan!kar update next month ka 2 date mein..mera birthday hain..
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Originally posted by: ...prithibi...

haan,haan!kar update next month ka 2 date mein..mera birthday hain..

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Originally posted by: ---Mehak---

i see 🤣

okay then 🤣

nahin..update bfre my birthday bcz i m going to cme in the world at that date nd cn a baby read? 🤣🤣
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mehak🤗
thanks for this update mrs.Grey😎wonderful👏

drunk Jo😆😆she can't get enough of jalal everbe it his expressions,his body aroma or his any belongings...everything makes Jo want more of him☺️

" Never trust a man who can dance " 🤣
is that true 😲for sure,Jo has to ignore this advice of her mom😈
Jo and her inner thoughts👍🏼...loved them❤️
best part was when she thought of 3 peoples on breakfast tomorrow😆😆besides she didn't get time to lecture moti on what to and what not to🤣


Edited by _akdha.forever_ - 11 years ago

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