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~*Fifty Shades of Jalal*~

THREAD 2😳🥳

Thread 2 of a lovely and a beautiful Story 'Jalal' & 'Jodha' .. re written from the story of 'Christian' and 'Anastasia'

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INDEX

Thread one :

Chapter 1-6

AKDHA FF " Fifty shades of Jalal " Thread one Ch 1-6 | 4036867 | Jodha Akbar Forum

Thread Tw0 :

Chapter 7-10 (Scroll down)

Chapter 11-15 (pge 58)

Chapter 16-18 (pg 108)

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CHAPTER 7😳

I returned back and saw Mr.Jalal was standing where last i left him about like 15 minutes before , i guess . As he saw me , i noticed a smile appeared on the end of his lips , and he moved towards me . 'So , will you?' he asked in a one go as we both were nearly standing in front of each other . I nodded my head with a small sweet smile on my lips . Alas! I noticed him smirking . Then he took out his hand respectfully for me , he is such a respectful and manner able guy i have ever met since now , really ?'Lets go' saying this we move to leave for coffee .

We made our way down the corridor , hands in hands . I don't know why have i been feeling so weirdo being with him ? My knees shaky , butterflies fluttering in my belly and my breathe was a bit faster then regular . And my heart .. my God , its just beating fast and fast . I looked at him from the corner of my eyes and i must say he looks damn too sexy every time .. I mean how is it possible for him to look that handsome every time ?

We walked about for 5-7 minutes and then we reached for the elevator . Suddenly my mind sinks 'What are we going to talk about?' such questions raised at the back of my mind , while i still kept on looking down , i don't know why but i just can't look at him , damn , i was flushing !

We were just a few steps away from the elevator when he asks me 'How long you know Miss Singh ?' I looked up at him , he's still smiling . Holy f**k ! 'Ah .. since out freshman year , she's a great friend' i smiled at Moti's thoughts . Really she have been a great friend and have been a dutiful and a wonderful friend like a sister could be . I think i am too lucky to have her , since i do not have any sister of mines . 'Ok' he replied , he seems thoughtful . What ever !

And here we reach the elevator and he presses the call button and what happened then , did made me embarrassed like hell , a couple was kissing in the elevator and as they saw us they apart . The couple too was hell embarrassed and they jumped onto the other side . I and Jalal jumps on the opposite side .

'I was already feeling damn too shy with him , and now this has meant to be happened wao good god !' i thought . I tried to maintain a straight face and hooked my eyes on the floor , trying to sound as normal and cool as i can , but then i peeked him through the corner of my eyes and i saw a small smile on his lips . Its very hard to tell , but i assume he was smiling .

The doors of the elevators dropped open and to my pleasure , Mr.Mohammad clasps my hand in his's . His fingers long and cool . I felt the same current ran through me , which i felt the very first time i shaked hands with him in his office . My heart beats accelerates . As we stepped out , we heard the couple giggling . Shyly i looked down while he smirks !

We left the hotel , hand to hand .. Crossing the roads , no one have ever held my hand and for the first time some one is , and that too Mr.Mohammad . I flush thinking this . We cross the street , he is still holding my hand , God why do i feel so Hot ?

Walking a few blocks we reached the Portland Coffee House , where he releases my hand , probably because i should get inside .

'Jodha .. why don't you choose the table for us while i get the drinks for the two of us' amused .. he looked at me , i smiled but before i could say he asked 'And what would you like to have ?' He sounded so cool and polite as ever i'have seen him .

'I would like to have English Bag out Tea'

he stares at me .

'No coffee?'

'Um..mostly no'

He then asks 'Sugar?' his voice seductive .

For a moment i was lost in his that 'Oh so killing' Seductive voice , but reality hit me soon before i could face embarrassment .

'No , thanks' i replied , quite warm , so i shouldn't sound rude .

'Anything to eat?' he raises his brow ?

'Ah , no thank you for the gesture' i replied , looking proudly but shyly at him ..

He grinned and moved towards me and took my hand in his's , replied 'My pleasure' and kissed my knuckles . I closed my eyes in the pleasure and breathe freshly .

Quite interestingly i watch him waiting in the line , he looks so handsome and damn too sexy . I could watch him all day without a blink .. He's tall , broad shouldered & slim and most importantly by look he is such a guy i love to date . The thought suddenly hits my mind .

And the way that pants hang his hips , oh my .. so sexy ! He ran his fingers through his hairs for two times , his hairs unruly , dark copper color . I can do that too . OMG !! I flushed at my thoughts .. So dirty huh ? What does he do to me ? I smiled and bit my lower lip to stop further smiles .

'Where are you lost Beautiful' OMG , he brought me back in my senses

but , wait .. he .. he just complemented me with BEAUTIFUL . I was just thinking about running my fingers through his hairs and feel his soft touch and here he comes . OMG he's staring at me like a detective . God .. can he read my mind ? I am going crazy totally .

In embarrassment i smiled , he holds a tray with our respective things . He then manner-able serves me mine's and then sat to have his's . He sat opposite me . Crossing his long legs .. looking HOT as usual .. A smile crept on his face as he caught me eyeing him .. I shyly looked down at my cup , my heart racing !

Then he talked about few things , very professionally .. Like likes and dislikes . He asked me why do i like this tea , and etc etc .. Everything was going so normally and i was calm a bit until he asks .

'Is..He your boyfriend?'

My my , i stare at him . eyes widen

'Who?' I asked

I think he hesitates to say , but hesitation and now ? 'Why didn't you hesitated Mr.Mohammad , when you asked me that? and now hesitating to tell me the god damn name ?' i thought .

'The .. photographer' . he looked at me 'Suryabhan.'

My God . I laughed .. He looked at me more seriously then before .I think i should not have laughed at him .. What if he takes it as his insult ?

'No .. no .. Surya is just a good friend of mines ..' I saw him calming by my answer .

But i wasn't giving up Mr.Mohammad ... I thought

'What made you think that HE is my Boyfriend ?' i waited for him to reply ..

He took a moment to gather his words i assume .. and then replied ' The way you both looked and .. umm .. smiled at each other .. ' he smirks .

'He's like my family member .. something like brother'

And i saw him calming more now with my response .. He then breathes and smiled . While i look at him secretly through my lashes .. trying to show as if i'm concentrating on my Tea.

'And the boy at the store yesterday , is he your boyfriend?'

My God ! He started again .. I hooked my couple of eyes from my cup up at directly to him and looked at him and smiled 'No..i already told you that Mr.Mohammad yesterday that he's just a friend .. '

'Oh' he muttered.

'But why did you asked?'

So i think we were playing a game . He asks , i reply . Then i ask he reply .. Quite funny

'You look quite nervous when around men' he said in a go ..

OMG ! I stare at him blindly ...

'You are totally mistake Sexy .. its just when you're around .' i thought and blushed

Well .. well ..Mr.Mohammad i am not giving up .. i grinned .

'I find you..like .. you can make people do what you want' and i looked at him and continued 'Intimidating' and i observed he inhaled a sharp breath ..

He then rubbed his chin with his index finger so slowly but sensually ..

'You should find me like one .. ' and as he said that shyly i looked down ..

'Oh come one .. You're honest Jodha .. and don't look down .. I like to look at your lovely face' ..

OMG !! One in all .. He just started and i don't think he's ever being ready to find a way back out of it .. Oh .. i looked up at him and smiled ..

'At least like that .. it gives me a clue of what you might be thinking'

Oh my f**king GOD ! Is he a mind reader? What ??? OMG ... I can't gulpe it down he actually said he can get a hint of what i am thinking by looking at my face .. Does he ? i thought fondly.

'I find you mysterious , Miss Rajput' he said

'Oh wat ?' i smiled 'Mysterious and that me?' i almost giggled ..

' Well. Mr.Mohammad , there's nothing mysterious about me' i complained

'And i think you're quite self contained too..'

What the f**k ?

God i want to laugh loud

'Not at all'i smiled

'Not when you blush , i wish i could know why you blush ? which you do most of the time ' and here i blush and giggled again .

'So. do u always make such personal observations Mr.Mohammad? i winked

'Oh No .. i never realized .. did i offended you?'

'No' i giggled

'Good then' .

'I'm used to get on my own ways in all the things Jodha' and my heart skipped a beat !

'Well , i won't deny it .. You have not asked me to call you by your first name dear' i said .

OMG ! Did i actually said that ? Whoa

'Um.. only my friend and some close friends call me by my name Anastasia'

'Oh' i looked at him shyly

'Call me Jalal' OMG .. What ?Now .. ?? He's a control freak .. i laughed inside ..

'You're the only child?'

I feel as if i'm being interviewed

'Yes'

Then he asked me some questions about my father and mother . I told him about my Mother and her currently new marriage and about my step dad .

'your father?' he asked

'He died when i was small'

'oh .. i'm sorry'

'No , its okay'

then he asked me about my get along with my other step dad's and all that boring stuff ... Ughhh

Precap : 'Do yOu have a girl friend?'

'No Jodha .. i don't do the girlfriend thing'

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Chapter 8

Time passed and passed as we chatted , actually calling it chat would be un-fair coz it seemed as if he was interviewing me .. Asking about everything related to me . 'Exams' i remembered i have exams for which i got to study . If i kept sitting here , i guess i would never get time to study .

'Um...Mr.Mohammad' i called him ..

'Yes?' he replied

'I think i'd better go , coz i gotta study'

'Study for your exams?'

'Yes' i nodded

'Hmmm' he rubbed his chin withi his index finger ..

'Okay , come on lets go'

He said suddenly as he got up from the chair and moved his hand forward for mines . I looked at him blankly , shocked ? amazed ? flush ? what shall i do ? As i keep my hand in his hand .. i said 'Thank you for the tea Mr.Mohammad'

He smiled , oh Yeah !! That sexy but secret smile .. i just love it ..

'My pleasure Jodha , come' and he started walking and i was following him out of coffee shop .

So, we're walking back at the hotel and he looks so calm and fresh and cool while on the other side i looked flustered , i assume i was too nervous nah !! I am just thinking and thinking about our coffee chat .. He was actually interviewing me and i was answering as he's my boss and i gotta give him interview to take a job !! whoa ..

'I exercise control in all things'

OH yeah !! i remember his line .. So this is true , i see .. I am getting lost in thinking and thinking deep ..

Ok , now i gotta ask a question

'Do you have a girlfriend?' i said it out too loud .. OMG !!

He grins and then reply 'No Jodha , i don't do the girl friend thing'

we're walking towards the intersection , across the road from the hotel as we talked .

What? he don't have a girl friend ? Maybe he's Gay ? No .. but why ? maybe he lied to me in his interview . But if he's not then why don't he have a girl friend ? I got to reassemble my my thoughts and i started walking forward and shit .. in a rush i stumbled onto the road ..

'Jodha' Jalal shouts as he holds the hand he was tugging even more tightly so hard that i fall back up against him , a cyclist whips past me , he was heading up the wrong way from that one way road ughhh !

Good Heavens ! It all happens so fast , for a minute i'm falling , then in the other minute he catches me and then i'm in his arms .. and he's holding me tightly against his chest wao .. 'This is so amazing' i thought and blushed .

I closed my eyes and breath .. I can smell his scent . Its so intoxicating , wonderful .. turning on one !! He uses some type of expensive body wash , i thought ! I kept on inhaling his scent , even more deeply .

'God..are you fine? are.you..are you okay?' He sounds so worried and un-relaxed . Why do i get a feeling that ... he's actually caring for me 'Caring is the first stage of love' this line suddenly strike at the back of my mind and i looked at him wide eyed and mouth dropped open ..

His one arm is around me , which clasp me to him and i'm being hold tightly against his chest while his other hand is on my face and his finger softly traces my face and his thumb brushes my lower lip .. OMG !! I felt current as it happens .. and i felt as if his breath hitches . Our eyes locked .. he's firey , hot , anxious .. his gaze burning .. god , i wish if i could keep on looking at them for ever !

He looks so hot .. so handsome , charming , protective , aggressive , sexy , smart .. He's a mixture of all those beauty God sent in this world .. He's Jalaluddin Mohammad and he's so sexy !

My gaze then struck at his mouth and here i go .. His lips seem so hot .. so cool .. what ? how does they look like ? Wht ever .. but i just want to kiss him , bite them , lick them and for the first time in my life .. I wanted to be kissed ... to be kissed not by someone else but only by him ..

I wanted to feel his warm mouth over mine's and explore him .. wanted to experience his mouth . Please.. i silently begged for a kiss .. Not only I , but he was looking at me too , his hot and fierce gaze locked with mines ..

For a moment i started believing that he's thinking the same as i am , until he slowly shakes me , and i'm back to the real world .. leaving my own imaginable my own beautiful world of Mr.Mohammad being with me .. And i feel so insulted at the moment .

Keeping his hands on both of my shoulder's he continued to look at me and then slowly whispers 'Hey.. look at me' I COULDN'T .. !! How could I ? After passing through this stage of insult and shyness .. How could i even face him ? Look up at him ? Look in his hot gaze?

'I said , look at me' he commands slowly .. Slowly i shifted my gaze up at him and he's staring at me , truly as if he loves me from all his Heart ?? or maybe i am imagining too much . He would have kissed me if he did so .. I know right..I'm not his standard nah !! that is why maybe he's acting like this ..

Tears warmed at the back of my eyes thinking this .

'Jodha, you should steer clear of me . I'm not the right man for you'

What ? What ? what?? What is happening with me God ? why in the world with me ? now ? here ? with him ? whyy ?? I questioned GOD silently ..

He is watching my reactions carefully , with so much interest !! Yeah , you've hurt me enough Jalal .. I felt broken at the moment .. I am nearly at the merge of crying ? Why it has to happen ? AND .. And why is he still holding me ? why ? Slowly i eased myself so that his hold on both my arms loosen , it was a kind of slow jerk ..

Tucking the strand of hair behind me ear , i stepped back from him .. we were both far enough now .. far enough for his proximity to work out its magic on me .. Far enough for him to hold me ..

Gulping the bile down , which was created at the back of my throat and commanding my hot tears to stay away right now i said 'Thank you' I'm all broken , i wanted to cry out loud , my pride have been wounded for the first time in my life .

'For what?' he asked

'For saving me' i replied .. NO this thank you was not for that Jalal .. This was for hurting me .. hurting me like no one has ever . This was for wounding my pride 'Thank you' this was the only word my subconscious was trying to mock up at him for those reasons ..

'I don't know , where was my brain while walking and i ...' but before i could continue on with my fool explanation he interrupted me ..

'No , it was not your fault at all.. That ass idiot was riding the wrong away ... He would have hurt you if today i wouldn't have been here .. God ! I don't even want to imagine what damage could he have hurt to you'

What ? Why ?? Why do you feel this way Jalal ? i'm ... i'm struck ..You left me confused ? Why would you even care if he hit me or killed me ? Why the f**king hell ? If you don't love me ? If you don't feel a single thing for me then why ? why this care? why thinking so much ? why thinking how damage he could have done to me ?

Well , that damage would have been less then the damage u brought to me , the emotional damage .. You hurt my feelings .. You simply denied me .. Yeah ? right ? damage ? huh ? you're talking about damage ? when you ..yourself brought a big damage to me .. Wao .. i wanted to clap up at him at the right moment ..

Jodha? Why are you thinking only about yourself why ? everyone has his/her own life .. They're boss to it .. You can't force anyone to love and care for you .. Love & care develops time by time .. And you both hardly know each other .. You both met for the 2nd time and you expect him to kiss you ? Why thinking of only one side? think about him too .. He has his life , some rules .. Give him time and then see if he love and care for you .. My sub conscious advice me .. Maybe .. its right !! I am being so self fish ? Ain't I ? I questioned myself ..

'Anyways , i am getting late Mr.Mohammad .. And thank you for coffee and the photoshoot' saying this , i didn't even looked up at him and turned back to leave when his voice stops me ..

'Jodha..' I stopped , closed my eyes and took a sharp breath in , hoping to find some courage to turn back .. When i turn back he was staring me .. 'What Jalal ?' i asked . He remained silent for few seconds and then moving his hand through his hairs he replied ..

'Good luck for your exams' he murmured ..

'Thank you' i replied brokenly and then left him back without giving him a second glare and walked and walked .. tears started rolling down my eyes ..

This has been ought to happen with me. Yes of course, coz am the unluckiest girl in the world..

'Jodha' Am i hearing so much today? I listened his voice again.. My mind is teasing me. I thought and walked and walked 'stop Jodha' what? Again

I am not believing it would be true. There is no one.. I was not believing until those long and slender feelings traces my shoulder 'What?! ' i almost jumped in amazement. Its...its reality, its .. its him ..

Turning my face , i looked behind the person who was trying to stop me .. All my excitement turned into disappointment , as i looked up at an unknown person .. Its wasn't him . Shit ! 'Yes?' i asked with disappointment in my voice ...

'OMG ? Mujhe nahe pehchana tumne ?' Oh goodness ! who's this monkey now ? He was not so tall , his eyes black , and his hairs same as his eyes .. He was not so good looking 'Kon?' i asked .. irritated , annoyed , exasperated , outraged .. Asperity was the only thing in my voice ..

He was just about to speak , well then Jalal suddenly comes in the scene ! Whoa ! This scene looks quite good . My naughty mind started working its way up 'Yes!Jealous .. I would make you jealous ' I thought looking at Jalal ..

'Mr.Mohammad ? you here?' i asked , trying to sound so fine ..

'Umm..I just wanted to be sure that you reach the hotel with safety , you know what i mean ..' he replied , so cool !

'Oh its .. its absolutely fine .. but i'm capable of taking care of myself Mr.Mohammad' i grinned with pride on myself .

'Huh?' he smirked .. 'I've already seen your capability of taking care of yourself Miss Rajput' and he smiles ..

What ? Really ? He's ... he's making fun of me ? he's making joke out of me ? and that in front of an unknown person ..

Now i feel quite angry on him .. I'm aggravated , antagonistic , boiling with anger , churlish , enraged .. But i know , to accomplish my goal i gotta drink this bitter mixture of anger ..

Just passing a small smile towards him , i looked at Mr.Unknown .. I bet , ignoring him would surely make him angry ..'So , umm..where we are ?' i asked the unknown person ..'Oye Jodha ..i'm Max baby .. You forgot me huh ?' OMG ? Is he really Max ? He's my school friend of course and i just couldn't identify him .. Really ? How ungrateful of me .. and he .. he identified me ..

'OMG Max' i fakely jumped with more excitement to burn someone on fire , my hands on my cheeks in wow .. 'OMG OMG' i jumped two times .. And kept my hands on his shoulder .. 'Max...where were you? What're you doing here ?' i looked at Jalal with the corner of my eyes .. He looked quite jealous !! Yes , yes .. I'm starting to get victory.

'Aree , what shall i tell you , hell busy in my life u know' he winked .. and i wonder for what that wink was ? 'Oh' i replied 'Toh , you are here , am here too .. lets...'but before i could complete Mr.Burning on fire interrupted by taking hold of my wrist very tightly

'Jodha , i think we are getting late , do you remember? Miss Singh might be wondering where are we , so don't you think...' but well well .. I'm not giving up .. I interrupted him 'Aye Mr.Mohammad please just few mins' he looked with a murderer look towards me and replied 'Nope , we are getting late' and saying this , he actually started dragging me with him .. I looked back and called out to Max 'Okay buddy , see you later , bye ' and bite my lower lip to hide the victory smile ..

We walked quietly , his hand tightly gripping my wrist as if i'm a prisoner and he's holding me so that i may not run away ! Wao the arrow strike the correct target and i'm in wow ! I'm just waiting for him to say something ... Silence stepped between us .. Finally , after long session of silence he spoke up .. looking straight though ..

'I was present there , and you could have introduced me to your friend' .. His voice was full of jealousy . He was eager , envious & invidious .. He was so f**king jealous , i stopped walking and looked towards him 'What do you mean ?' finally , his straight gaze fix over my face ..

'You better know what i mean' he was damn commanding , but so sexiness in his voice

'No , i don't' i lied and acted innocently ..

'You do' he said between his teeth ..

'Okay ! Go straight and clear in what ever you want to say Mr.Mohammad' i smirked inside..

He closed his eyes and breath sharply and then opened his eyes again ! And the moment he opened his eyes again , i was stunned ! Because , anger or jealousy was no more in his eyes , it was .. it was something else .. Something new , something different , something .. strange .. But .. what was that ? Love? No , how could i be so sure !

'Jodhaa' as he called out my name , i felt so beautiful .. more beautifully he pronounced my name for the first time and it felt so wonderful ... Joy ran all over my body , i won it !! But did i actually ? No .. there's a long way to make him feel what he feels for me ..

He left hold of my wrist and kept his hands on both of my shoulders and looked deeply in my eyes as if he was searching for a suitable answer for his confused spirit ! He remained silent , i remained silent ... I really am hoping some positive things , please God don't disappoint me ..

'Okay , anyways .. Lets leave it .. We better reach fast' was all he said as he moved his hands back off my shoulder ..

What ? Why ? How ? When did he changed his mind ? I am disappointed , disillusioned , dismayed , inconsolable , disenchanted , bitter , disgruntled , dissatisfied .. I'm totally discontented with his decision ..

Why does he have to do that ? Why ? Breaking my heart again ? Changing my victory into loosing it yet again .. All hopes trashed , heart broken .. And this time , i'm not going to let myself down again .. I need to act normal .. I tried to break a smile for him and then replied 'Yeah , of course' and we walked back into the hotel ..

We ignored every type of eye contact during our walk .. Our body inches apart , but my arm brushed over his hand while walking , but none of us looked at each other . There was is an awkward silence between us , something really very new , different ..

I over looked at my lust , my want for him .. I really do needed him , didn't I ? Or was i doing something wrong ? When i thought he would kiss me , i thought i could describe it sensational , sensual , lustful , intimate , romantic , heart warming , emotional , soft , long lasting and plush !

I have really tried my level best to write something good and describe emotions and everything and tried to make update long , which i think couldn't be for you all , but just few words of appreciation and likes would be enough to encourage me to write something more wonderful next time . 😳

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Chapter 9

Yeah yeah , update after ages 😆 Janti hu . Sorry guys m have been really busy with my studies , but don't worry ..i'll keep updating , though in ages 😆So , the main part of the story is starting now..!! I mean from next update..No..wait , it's starting from this part only..So , i hope you all enjoy the story .. Suspense suspense 😃

When i reached home , Moti was sitting by the dining table , her eyes on her laptop and she was drinking coffee , as she looked at me the smile which she gives me always her welcoming smile , it fades away ! Jeez ! I hope she doesn't assume everything that happened and my feelings for Mr.Mohammad ..

Though , she couldn't smile i passed on a fake smile and continued walking and stopped when i was near to her seat , she gots up and looks worriedly at me , my face , my eyes , my body 'What happened Jo?' her voice seemed kinda worried ..

I felt so great , know why ? Because i'm a single child of my parents and i always wished that i had a sister , but God had other plans and he presented Moti to me in a form of a great friend and also a wonderful sister , i just love her . We really have a great understanding . Always and forever she understands me well , my mood and etc , and i'm really lucky to have her in my life .

'Nothing baby' i smiled at her , 'then why the heck did you cried? your...your eyes they are a kinda reddish Jo , see you can't lie to me' she looked at me with her judgy eyes 'Hey, am not lying ok' i lied again .. 'Jo , what the heck did that son of a bitch did to you ? tell me , i'll send him to hell , i swear..' but before she could continue i kept my palm on her mouth ..

And i laughed , she frowns her eyes 'Huh?' she murmured against my hand 'OMG !! You beautiful little brat , Moti ... calm down .. nothing happened .. specially such thing , omg' i can't stop smiling .. I felt so lovely , i wanted to love my best friend , for her concern towards me .. I love you Moti .

Well , i guess i need something to distract her ..'Actually , a cyclist had nearly knocked me' i said to her 'what' her mouth drops open . She moved few steps back and examined my body more clearly 'OMG !! Jo are .. are you fine? i mean , are you hurt ?' she asks so concerned !

'No Moti , Jalal .. Jalal saved me' i flushed saying this . Her eyes sparkled as i said this 'Hmmm...' she smirked naughtily .. 'What?' i widened my eyes and looked at her fakely angrily ..'What?' she naughtily turned what back at me !! 'What did i said' she giggled 'Moti , i'll kill you stupid , i know what are you doing ..' and as i said this we both started giggling ..

'Well so , tell me how was coffee ? I mean ,i know you hate coffee and u just had coffee with him .. didn't you?' she winked . 'What do you mean stupid ? I had tea , he had coffee and i think , why did he ever took me for coffee , its just waste of time' i said

'Stupid , he likes you Jo'

'What ever , but am not going to see him again' i tried to sound polite ...

'Hmm'

'Okay leave it all Jo , don't you want to see the article ? Its ready and my my Surya took really some great snap' she asked ..

Wao , is it ? My my .. i blush at the thought .. Whoa !! Jeez !! what the hell i am thinking , ughh !! I'm just over thinking about him ! I DONT WANT YOU JALAL .

'Why not' i smiled .. 'Come' she says as she hands me the lappy !

My attention was not in the article at all , for me , all those words were just crap and only thing meant to me was his picture , i pretended as i was reading the article but i was actually staring at his pic , looking at his steady gray eyes , his beautiful glorious face , and actually asking him , why did he said he's not the right man for me ?

Well maybe , he's right . He's heavenly beautiful , glorious face .. He's wealthy , he's CEO and .. and we are like poles apart ! We were never meant to be one , i think he was right .. It was a rejection , but not a straight one . Maybe he wasn't wanting to hurt me , but what ever , rejection is a rejection !

'That's quite amazing Moti' i said as i pushed the laptop back , 'Anyways , i'm just going to study , bye see ya' i said as i gave her a kiss on her cheek and left . I can't think about him all the time , or else am gonna be his addict !! His drug addict , Jalaluddin Mohammad's addict , which would be harmful for me ..

''The night has arrived , so do my thoughts ..!! Oh God !! Why aren't these thoughts of Jalal...his gray gaze , his perfect lips , his mascular body...why ..why aren't these all going out of my mind ? Why ?'' Silently , i questioned God , laying down on my bed , hugging my pillow..

"Why ? Why do i feel like this for him ? Why do i need him ? Why do i want him to accept me as his Girl friend ?? Why do i want him to be in my life ? Why can't i just forget him ? His thoughts ? why can't i ? Its .. its all just so weird .. This all , these things , these feelings , are new to me .." Getting up from the laying positive , i hugged my knees and hid my face between my legs ..

This night , i dreamed something so weird .. He was in it , but .. it was not clear .. It was dark .. I saw his gray eyes , and i'm just running , running faster and faster into the dark places ,and i don't know , if i'm running away or towards anything !! That dream was so weird ..

Finally , my exams over and now i would never have to sit like this for exams , in the row of isolate students , i smiled at the thought .. So , today we are going to celebrate and i am going to get drunk , though i have never been drunk at all , but am just so happy today ..!! End of my academic career ..Finally ! Heh ! I looked at moti and she looked at me , and we both smiled at each other !

I looked at Moti , she's holding a brown paper parcel "Jo..There's a parcel for you" really? but i haven't ordered anything from amazon recently ? I stopped searching for keys in my bag , kate hands over the parcel to me and takes my bag and starts searching .. Huh ? a parcel for me ...Its addressed to Miss Steele...and no address ? I wonder who could send it ? Maybe mom .. or my dad !

'Its from my folks' i remarked ..

Moti jumped with excitement 'Open it nah !' she says as she enters the kitchen , happy 'Wohoo...our exams are finished!!'

So , i opened the parcel and oh my god !! in disbelief i covered my mouth with my hands , Moti came running from the kitchen 'What ?? What happened ? what's in it' she asked . Oh my god ..oh my god !! I can't believe it !! Who--aa ..

OMG !! Its three volumes of Tess of the D'Urbervilles .. i open the front cover and on the front plate its written :

'London: Jack R. Osgood, McIlvaine and Co., 1891.'

Holy shit- Its the first edition .. And now i know who could've sent those , oh my god !! No , i can't believe it .. Moti is standing beside me and she picks up the card !

'Moti...' i said in disbelief ..

'No...' she said , her eyes wide with disbelief , it left her stunned 'Jalal?'

'I guess so' i was lost ..!! Thoroughly lost, Mr.Jalal left me in disbelief ..He took me by amazement once again .. Holy shit - But , i thought he might have forgotten me , and now .. OH god!! What's happening ? What are you doing to my life? Where am i going ?

'Now what does this means?' Moti says , still lost in thoughts .

'Baby , i really don't have any idea bout it .I..I don't know anything , maybe its his warning..but for what ? See you know na..You believe me nah!!Its not me who's knocking his door' i said , as i frowned..

'I know Jo you don't want to talk about him , but Jeez ! See .. he looks like kinda seriously into you .!

Oh God , why is this happening to me ? The whole past week , i have not let myself dwell on thoughts of Jalal and yeah okay..though his gray eyes never left haunting in my dreams , and i know , that scene ... those arms of him , his beautiful manly scent would take ages to go out of my brain , but whatever it is . Why have he sent this to me ?

He himself said that I wasn't for him then , this all , why?

'What is he trying to say ?' Moti exclaims ..

'I don't know , but i just can't keep these books , i'll return them.' i say .

'Yeah , that's a great idea .. ' Moti replies , she's damn too supportive ..

I smiled at her , she's really so sweet , loving , caring and greatest of all ; supportive..'Love ya Baby' i kissed her on her cheek .. She kissed back on my hairs 'Love you more baby ' .

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The bar is just so heated up , wow .. Its so much fun , songs on full volume loud and hectic as well , Surya joins us as well , though he's not going to graduate for another year , but he joins to celebrate with us .

Oh God , its just so loud , Surya said something to me , i didn't got him ... i shouted 'Louder'

'So , what now ? your future plans?' he shouted at top of those hectic voices

Oh i got him , he's asking now what am i going to do after this graduation , i replied 'Moti and me , we are moving to Seattle , her parents had arranged a condo for her o'er there..'

'Will you be back for my show then?' he asks ..

'Of course Surya , i swear , i wouldn't miss it ..' i smiled at him , and he put his arm around my waist and pulls me closer .

'Aww , it means a lot for me , that you'll be here , Jo' he whispers in my ear 'Another margarita?'

'Suryabhan .. are you trying to get me drunk because its working ? lol' i giggled

'But , i'd better go with a beer now ' i smiled .

'I'll get us all Drinks' i said and left..

Oh , head's spinning .. but no worries , i'll...control !!

Ok , i head over to the bar , and there i decide that i should visit the powder room until i'm on my feet..Christ..! oh , there's a long time .. So i took out my cell phone , to relieve the boredom , whoa ..!! that's a fantastic idea.. I check my calls , oh last number isn't Surya's , i thought it would be his's .. but it's Jalal's number , hehe..My inner goddess smiled evily . That's a wonderful idea , but wait , whats the time ? Whatever , i think he must be awaken , and if not , i'll do so. And after all i have to ask him why the hell he sent those books to me ? i hit the automatic redial ..

'Tinnnggg' the first bell rungs..

He didn't answered..

'Tinggg' the second bell rungs and he answers on the second bell..!

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Chapter 10

'Jodha?' oh wow, cool..He looks surprised , yeah he should be , in fact i'm surprised myself , wanna know why ? cause , jeez ..i've called him .

What ? My dumbo brain worked a little and i got confuse that how the hell he knew that it's me ?

'Why did you send me the books?' i asked him , my voice it seemed like that of insulting him , what ever ..i rolled my eyes up at me , why would i care?

'Jodha..?? Are you okay ? you .. you sound strange..what happened ?' He's full worried , his voice full of concern .. Whoa ? Concern ..?? and that for me , ahh maybe because of this alcohol .. i guess i'm taking it wrong .

'I'm not the strange one , Jalal..Its you ..' wow . Finally wow I sigh.. Finally i told him that..Thanks to Alcohol for giving me the courage to tell him the truth i have been hiding since the first time i met this Mr.Hot .

'Jodha..?? Are you drunk?' he asked straightly , without even caring for my words.

'Why would u care?'

'God..Dammit , where are you ?'

'Why would you ask ?'

'Which bar ?' his voice , a kind of bossy one , aha..trying to be my boss ?

'Umm.. '

'Yeah yeah , tell me please' aha , now begging ?

'Okay.. umm so wait .. i'll count till 3 and you wait and then .. i'll tell u ok?' my inner goddess laughed .

'What ? are you gone crazy Jodha ? Dammit , tell me where the hell are you?' His voice is now full of more concern for me , i'm liking it han ;) Smart player , that's who i am .I feel proud

'Tick tick one..

tick tick two..

tick tick...'

But before i could continue , i heard him shouting

'Jodha , tell me where are you ?Don't be an ass '

Jeez !! He took me by shockness .. OMG

'A bar in portland' I replied , feared of him .

'And..how are you getting home ?'

'That's none of your business , Jallad' what ? omg ? jeez ? The hell ?? f**k ?? Did i said Jallad ? GOD GOD GOD , what the hell am i doing ? God.. I waited for his reply ..

'And what if i say , that's my f**king business ? Now tell me where the hell are you Jodha ? Am worried damn it , don't you understand' That was not a command .. that was something else in his voice , what was it ? Something new , something strange , something unknown. A lover's concern , that was it.

'Ok , at least tell me , which bar are you in ?'

'First answer me , why did you send me the books Jalal?'

'Jodha..Where are you ? Tell me now .' Aha , his tone .. that Control freak tone , its back whoa..Smart play Miss Singh .

'You're sounding freaking funny Jallad..' I bite my lower lip on addressing him with that name once again , but anyways - I gigged

'That's great , but tell me where the f**k are you ?'

Oh wow, So the god of perfectionism , god of optimism male beauty .. Jalaluddin Mohammad is swearing up at me , wow ? I have never ever thought or ever imagined it in my wildest dream .

'Ok , i'm in portland , a long wayy from seattle , u know' i grinned

'But..where in portland?' he asked .

'Why should i tell you?' i giggled

'Oh god ..!! tell me '

'What ever' i rolled my eyes 'Good night , Jalal'

'JO..'

And i hang up ! Whoa . I don't believe it , so mission not accomplished . My task was to ask him why did he send me the books and he didn't answered me , dammit . But anyways , let it be at least one mission is accomplished today which was important and that was to get drunk in this great celebration . Today I'm celebrating for myself .

God , i shouldn't have drink so much of alcohol , i should've kept that in mind that its my first time , and now my head is swimming uncomfortably . So , the line has moved and finally its my turn . Ok , so after using i come out , feeling a little great and fresh .

Oh my god !! What have i did ? Holy crap .. Did i called him ? Jalal ?? called Jalaluddin Mohammad ? and shit those things about him and on him ? Godd god god , i looked here and there trying to gulp down the bitter truth , a sin .. maybe , which i have permitted and there's no way running away from it . Save me God !! Pleasee..

My phone rungs and it makes me jump , i answered the call .

'Hi?' well , i haven't seen the name of the caller , waited for the reply .

'I'm coming to get you ..!!' he says and then hangs up ?? what ??? What ?? i mean what ? Was he serious ? damn it ?? was he angry ? was he mad ?? It was him .. Jalal .. only Jalaluddin mohammad have the ability to be so calm and more threatening at the same time .

Holy Crap - What if he seriously get here ? Umm..hold on hold on .. I haven't told him where was i ? and for the time being , if he comes to know where i am , it'll take him hours to come here and we would have been gone until then. Ok calm down calm down ,.. I took a long relaxing breath ..

I tried to explain myself looking in the mirror 'Look Jodha , nothing like that is going to happen , he's not going to come here , either if he does he won't be able to meet you , so just calm down and relax' .

I look flush and unfocused and a confused brat right now, totally.!

I returned back , and Moti shouts at me .

'Where was you Jo ? why the hell you took so long ?'

'I was in rest room Moti .' i replied calmly ..

'OKAY , come and sit '

'No i think , i'll go out for some fresh air .'

'no , you're not going anywhere .. got that ? '

'Just 5 minutes , please'

'Okay , only 5 , be honest' and she winks up at me ..

I smiled at her , and left .

Oh God , i have to go through this crowd again , i'm so unsteady , more then usual , and my head is spinning around . I'm actually seeing a double of everything , and now i truly realized how much have i drunk . And got myself in this mess.

'Jo??' oh , Surya has joined me .

'Hey' i turned around , head spinning .

'You okay ?'

'No ,i guess .. I have had so much of alcohol' i smiled weakly at him .

'Oh yeah , me too' i see sparkles in his eyes , and he's watching me intently , examining me further 'Need some help?' he asked , and moves forward and snakes his arm around me.

'No , no no..Its okay , i'm okay . ' i tried to push him back , tried to free myself , but in vain .

'Oh Jo , please..' he is getting ever nearer .. he holds me more tightly .

'God .. Surya leave me , what the hell are you thinking , you are doing? ' i shouted at him.

' You know na Jo , i like you , so now please..' One of his hand is at my back , holding me tight and the other one cupping my chin , Holy Crap - He's going to kiss me .

'No no no no please leave me Surya ' i tried to push him , but he's just so hard

Then , he slips his hand in my hairs and holds my face straight .

'Oh Please Jodha.. ' he place trails of kisses from my jaw to my mouth . His kisses are soft . Oh No please , i don't want this please . 'Leave me Surya , you're a friend only , please leave me' nothing proved to be working , he's totally a lost brat .

'Please no Surya , you're my friend please , no leave me ' nothing

'I think the lady said No ' A voice , a familiar one .. standing in the dark , a silent voice . Oh my God ! I don't believe it , he really came here . f**k ! Jalaluddin Mohammad , he's here . Surya releases me in a rush .

'Jal..aal' the words came out of Surya's mouth as a result of shiver sparkling through his body . f**k Yeah man - He deserve that .. Anxiously , i glanced up at Jalal through the dark light , Holy Crap - He's furious , and cold .. What is he going to ever do ? God god god ..

I felt something heaving in my stomach and i was out of controlling myself and was unable to tolerate that stupid alcohol and therefore , i vomit suddenly on the ground.

' Ugggh..oh my god , Jodha ' Surya jumps back , how bad of him huh ? Oh i'm just going to fall , but wait , Jalal holds me . He had an arm snaked around me , holding me tight and the other hand holding my hairs and pushing my head upward , so that they won't come on my face. He took me on a side of the parking lot.

'If you want to do it , do it again , over here .. Don't worry , i'm here .. With you , i'll hold u Jodha..' I feel awkward , Jeez .. as i try to jerk him away uggh i vomit again and again .. Crap !

Oh God , when the hell is it going to stop ? My stomach is fully empty now , and i haven't even had my food , then why so much of vomiting ? Silently i vow to myself that i'm never ever going to even touch this bad ass called Alcohol .. It just destroyed me totally , ewww.. So , finally it stops and i feel relief .

Jalal takes a hand off me , and from his pocket he produces a handkerchief and hands it me .

The handkerchief was freshly laundered , made up of linen and it smells of him , it was intoxicating . It was monogrammed , but i never understood the meaning of JMA . I feel so ashamed of myself right now , that i just can't look up at him in the eyes . I cleaned my mouth with his intoxicating smelling handkerchief .

I looked and found that Surya is still looking us disgustingly standing by the bar's entrance . This is the first and the worst moment of my life , and that too with Jalal . Its just a whole crap .!

So , risking a glance up at him i saw him , and he's staring me his face cold giving no sign of anything ? And again i looked at Surya and he seemed quite ashamed and timid of Jalaluddin Mohammad just like me , uhhh .

Surya said something , i can't hear but Jalal ignored him ,so do i . I guess he heard what he said .. Okay NOW .. just do say sorry to him Jo . I said to myself , trying to stand a little more straight and look up at him perfectly .

The handkerchief , ahhh its just too soft and its smell is making me addict of it , i really want to smell it , but uhh i can't in front of him 'I'm sorry ' i said to him.

' Sorry ?? for what ?' he asks , confused .

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Edited by ---Mehak--- - 11 years ago