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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
part 76
nice...
OMG that was heart breaking...
its better Salim reaches Jodha fast...
thats the place he will feel safe and loved...
but he doesnt keep it inside him and not tell her...
damn them all...
my heart goes out to Salim baby...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello there I'm a new reader 😊 I liked your story so much I loved the concept it's really awesome 👏👏👏 waiting for new update eagerly 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naya92

Hello there I'm a new reader 😊 I liked your story so much I loved the concept it's really awesome 👏👏👏 waiting for new update eagerly 😉

thanks for liking my FF it keeps us writers motivated to write despite busy class sched
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: spvd

part 76
nice...
OMG that was heart breaking...
its better Salim reaches Jodha fast...
thats the place he will feel safe and loved...
but he doesnt keep it inside him and not tell her...
damn them all...
my heart goes out to Salim baby...
cont soon dear...

thanks a lot for giving me long feedbacks on each part it helps to write better
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Posted: 10 years ago
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As I have noted often earlier, your Salim is a dream kid. Such maturity and wisdom at such a tender age, coupled with such dauntless courage. Remarkable.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Part77 Salim consoles Khannum

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sashashyam

As I have noted often earlier, your Salim is a dream kid. Such maturity and wisdom at such a tender age, coupled with such dauntless courage. Remarkable.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Yes orphans and fatherless kids are usually mature beyond age. They are forced to grow up because they face lot of discrimination from society and in order to survive they compromise. Also they are braver than normal kids who have mom-dad and family to fight for their rights to protect them. My school was next to an orphanage and a few kids from there were in school.
Salim has only one friend Khannum and for him her happiness matters. If he had many friends he may not have bothered may be broken friendship in anger that is what all do. But here one she is smaller than him second the only one friend he has so he wants her to remember him always in happy way. So he is just acting that he is not feeling hurt to make her happy.
Edited by myviewprem - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Aww poor Salim 😭
Please send Jalaal along to drop him at his house and meet Jodha.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Aww poor Salim 😭
Please send Jalaal along to drop him at his house and meet Jodha.

thinking practically imagine an emperor going to drop a fatherless child 160 kms away to his house will any emperor do that? and he hardly knows salim lets see 😉
Edited by myviewprem - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 77
nice part...
poor Salim baby...
Khanum is apologizing and still doenst want Salim to leave...
the 2 kids are so adorable and lovely...
i hate Jalal all the more...
still the kid is consoling another younger kid...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 77
nice part...
feel so sorry for Salim...
he somehow consoled Khanum but didnt get near to Jalal...
he deserves that...
poor baby...
cont soon dear...

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