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RECAP:INTRO OF Mohammads ND rajawats.. HAMIDA CAME TO KNOW ABOUT JALAL LOVING JODHA.. JA's TALK ON PHONE.. JALAL COMING TO MEETJODHA FOR THE VERY FIRST TIME..

Chapter 2


"Di.. meri life ka aaj itna important din hai.. main aaj pehli baar unhe dekhungi.. vo yahan aa rahe hain aur aap ho ki mujhe akela chod ke ja rahi ho.." Jodha said nervously while packing rukaiya's bag.. "Ohoo.. to aaj aap apne unn ko mil rahi hain.. hmmm.. tabhi main sochun ki aaj subah se tu itni khoyi khoyi kyun hai.. aur vaise bhi vo yahan to tujhse milne aa raha hai.. main kya karungi.. tujhe kisi ko impress karne ke liye meri zaroorat nai hai.. meri jodhu bohot pyari hai.. aur phir main aa to rahi hoon do hafton mein.. tab dekhte hain ki kaise hain aapke VO.. " she said teasing nd calming down jodha..

As if it was destined.. rukaiya had to leave for an urgent meeting where she was representing Sanjeevni.. If succeeded, Sanjeevni would get advanced machinery  at cheap price nd foreign visiting doctors as well.. The meeting nd final announcement was scheduled after two weeks..

A few hours later..
jodha was sitting in her room with her parent's picutre in her hands.. she had this certain feeling that something big is awaiting her.. she tried calling ruks nd moti but both of the numbers were unavailable.. giving up she started talking to her mother's picture..jodha almost jumped when ash (ashwini ) screamed her name from her room.. putting the picture on the bed she rushed to ash..

"Dekho jodha..jalal abhi thodi der mein yahan aa raha hai.. uski family humari bohot ache dost hain.. dhyaan rahe ki tum kuch galat na bolo uske saamne.. tum samajh rahi ho na meri baat.. " ash said pointing her finger at jodha nd saying all this in a thundering voice..

Nodding innocently jodha walked back to her room with fresh lot of tears glistening in her eyes.. she doesn't know why but she gets very scared nd nervous whenever anyone shouts at her.. Everyone knows that she would be the last one to be reason of any disgrace to this family yet everytime she was instructed.. she sat on her bed nd closed her eyes tightly..

She came back to World when she heard the door of her room being knocked.. She wiped her tears nd adjusting herself went to the door.. Opening it she saw a pair of very captivating, Brown eyes smiling at her.. she had not seen him for long now.. she didn't even remember anything from their childhood yet he seemed so familiar to her.. She smiled back at him nd invited him in when he introduced himself formally.. "Hi.. jalaluddin mohammad .." he said giving his trademark dimpled smile..

"Hi.." was all she could manage to reply.. jalal smiled at her nervousness nd very calmly said "Maine kal bhi kaha thha.. plz don't be nervous.. main aapka test lene nai ayaa.. its just that ki main shaadi se pehle aapse kuch baat karna chahta thha.. mujhe pata hai ki mom ne aapko sab bataya hoga.. lekin main ek baar apke muh se sunna chahta hoon.. kya sab jaanne ke baad bhi aap iss shaadi se khush hain..? aapko kisi ne force to nai kiya na..?" jalal asked nd came nd sat besides her while she stood up with a jerk as she felt him closer abit..

"jodha.. aap mujhe sach keh sakti hain.. agar aap mujhse shaadi nai karna chahti to.. main Samajhta hoon ki kisi bhi ladki ke liye Sa.." before he could mention Salim. he was cut in between by ash's sudden entry.. she had come in with some snacks nd drinks.. She looked at jalal smiling at her nd jodha knotting her dupatta standing at a distance from him.. ash glared jodha nd left them alone..

As soon asa sh left jodha turned nd served him.. nd out of the blue he heard her say "mujhe iss shaadi se koi problem nai hai.. main khush hoon ki aap yahan sirf mere mann ki baat sunne aaye.. lekin mujhe iss rishtey ko samajhne mein aur apnane mein thoda waqt lagega.." she herself was surprised that she actually said that to him.. she was not the one to speak her heart like that.. While jalal smiled warmly nd saind in an assuring tone "Thank you for accepting this proposal jodha.. jahan tak waqt ki baat hai.. ab se meri zindagi tumhari hai.. jitna chaho utna waqt le sakti ho.."

He then took out something from his pocket nd said "Yeh kangan aur Payal, Mom ki hai.. vo chahti hain ki ab se yeh unki Bahu ke paas rahe.." he bent to his knees nd put kangan in her hands nd payal in her feet.. While she just kept wondering why didn't she push him back or shifted abit away when he stepped closer.. as she came out of her thoughts she saw him sitting opposite to her nd having his coffee.. she looked down to see those beautiful diamond bangals nd golden payal in her feet..

With a few more talks from jalal's side nd reluctant replies from jodha's side, Armaan got up to go.. jodha stood up to see him off but as soon as she stepped her payal sound made her shy nd jalal happy.. he wanted stop himself but he couldn't resist saying "Iss payal ki awaaz, mera ehsaas bankar tumhare saath rahegi.." she blushed profusely nd went with him to the lawn..

jalal was about to sit in the car but he turned nd said "Mere aane se pehle tum kisi baat par upset thhi shayad issiliye ro rahi thhi.. tumhari aankhein bohot khubsoorat hain.. mujhe inn mein aansoon dekh kar achha nai laga.. ho sake to inn mein yeh muskurahat humesha banaye rakhna.." saying so he left leaving jodha shocked..

She was shocked to see him reading her mind first on the phone nd then her eyes today.. no wonder she was blushing on his compliments.. he is a true charmer nd from now on 'Her Gaurdian Angel'.. she smiled widely with blush accompanied nd went to her room..

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hamida was extremely happy to see the same happiness in jalal's eyes that she longed to see for so long.. jalal was sitting nd chatting with abdul nd salima.. While salima was set to play on the mat..

"Finally I'm gonna have some company when you guys sit to watch ur irritating football nd cricket matches.." salima said to jalal nd abdul..

"Haan haan.. theek hai.. ek tu hai jo bina mile hi khayaali mahal banaa rahi hai aur isse dekh jabse bhabhi se milke ayaa hai tabse kitna chehek raha hai.." abdul said calming salim nd teasing jalal, only to have two pillows hitting on his face from jalal nd salima..

"Oye abdulll.. zyada matt bol.. jab tum dono romance karoge na tab bataunga.." jalal said chuckling to himself while hamida who was witnesseing the conversation couldn't help smiling.. She treated abdul no less than jalal.. she moved to them nd sat with salim in her lap, making him have his custard..

"waise beta.. Ankit kab aaraha hai..? vo bhi Mumbai mein hi koi job join kar raha hai na..?" hamida asked.. "Haan aunty.. vo bhi do teen din mein aa raha hai yahan.. aur phir vo Sanjeevni join karega.." salima said..

"Aur jalal.. mujhe tujhse nikaah ki baat pochni thhi.. beta pandit jee ne do dates batayi hain.. ek to 5 din baad ki hai aur ek do mahine baad ki.. ashwini ko 5 din baad ki date theek lag rahi hai.. tumhe yeh sab bohot jaldi to nai lag raha na..?" hamida asked jalal, directly in a grave tone..

"No mom.. I'm okk with it.. lekin aapne jodha se poocha..? I mean ho sakta hai vo abhi prepared na ho.. ek anjaan aadmi ke saath iss rishtey mein bandhne ke liye.."jalal said like a love struck man.. to which abdul teased "Ohoo.. to matlab ab jalal saare kaam bhabhi se pooch kar karega haina.."

"Dekh abdul kuch seekh jalal se.. abhi shaadi nai hui tab itna khayaal hai usse jodha ka.. aur ek tu hai shaadi ke baad bhi meri kisi opinion ko seriously nai leta.." salima said in mock anger t which abdul mumbled "shaadi nai hui issiliye to yeh haal hai.. ek baar shaadi hone de phir pata chalega.."

"Kya.. Kya bola tumne..?" salima asked pointing her finger at abdul who just sqeaked "Nai salu (salima ).. maine kahan kuch kaha.."

Their silly banter never amuses anyone.. everyone knows that it is their way of expressing love.. they would fight like kids nd then say Sorry nd make up next instant..

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Unlike everytime ash (ashwini) and Loku (lokendra ) have been treating jodha like a human since her wedding was fixed with jalal.. As many times either hamida or salima would come to take her for shopping.. nd Since jodha is getting married to lokendra's friend's Son they have to even buy gifts nd clothes for jodha like her GOOD nd only relatives..

jodha had even called rukaiya who was pretty upset that she would be unable to attend the wedding but due to ash's orders the wedding had not a single chance of being posponed.. ruks has also informed moti nd kunal about the marriage who were with jodha the very next day..

"moti di.. Jiju.." jodha squealed in joy when she saw moti nd kunal in the lounge.. she ran nd hugged them by turn.. after a few more pleasantries with lok nd ash, kunal left for his home while moti stayed with jodha for awhile more..

jodha nd moti moved to jodha's room..
"So.. howz ur prince charming hmm..?"moti asked to which jodha blushed nd looked at the payal in her feet.. "OMG..!! jodhu.. you look so cute when you blush.. I'm sure aapke prince ne meri Cinderella par apna jaado chala hi diya hai.. kyun..?" jodha blushed even more with that nd said "Di.. aap aur ruku di mujhe itna satate ho.. huh.. maine to aapko aapki shaadi par bilkul nai staya thha na.. aur vaise bhi mujhe to aapse gussa hina chahiye.. aap ab aarahi ho.. do din mein meri shaadi hai.." she said last few bit fumbling nd blushing..

"Awww.. I'm so sorry jodhu.. main to kal hi subah aa jati lekin abhi na mere ek collegue ne mumbai mein job transfre liya hai to jab tak uska replacement nai milta, baaki ke doctors par kaafi workload  thha.. but no problems ab main aagayi na.. ab main khud apni jodhu ko dulhan banaungi.. jisse tujhe dekh kar tere unn ko kisi aur ka hosh hi na rahe.." moti said teasing jodha..


While at Mohammads House

"jalal.. choti ma.. buddy.. salim.. kahan hain sab log..?"
Everyone gathered in the hall as they heard the loud call for them.. jalal went nd hugged the man.. "Hey Champ.."

Yes, it is Ankit..jalal's friend nd a Child specialist.. he would now be working in Sanjeevni..

Ankit Moved forward nd took blessings from hamida nd humayun Mohammad.. They were his only family.. Ankit would call hamida - 'Choti ma' nd Mr mohammad was more like a friend so he called him 'Buddy'..

"SO..?" Ankit raised his eyebrows to jalal who just shrugged "What..?"

"Arre mere bhai.. Apne Tom nd Jerry kahan hain..?" Ankit asked reffering to abdul nd salima.. jalal sighed a relief nd "Ohh.. tu unki baat kar raha thha.. vo dono shopping gaye hain..salu ko kuch dresses chaiye thhi that's why.."

Ankit knew jalal was thinking something else.. "Haan main to unke baare main pooch raha thha lekin tu ekdum se itna expressionless kyun ho gaya thha..? tujhe kya laga main aate hi tujhe Bhabhi ke baare mein poochunga.. Nai yar.. yeh session to dinner ke baad ka hai.." Ankit said chuckling at jalal's shocked expressions..

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back at rajawat's house

"Mom plz.. enough now.. okk.. I'm calling my friend now nd she would arrange for all of jodhu's wardrobe.. main shaadi mein nai hoon but still I want everything perfect for jodhu.." ruks almost shouted at ash on call when ash insisted that she would give jodha some money nd ask her to shop for herself.. but ruks insisted that she would ask one of her friends to design jodha's new suits nd sarees..

ruks knew ash or lokendra can never win an argument against HER.. so after her call with ash she called her friend nd told her what she has to do..


Next very day all the celebrations have started in both the houses..
The Ace Designer, Sanjh Sethi was at rajawat house with her few of helpers nd she sat with moti nd jodha to decide jodha's Saree nd suit design nd as all the clothes have to be packed nd delivered at Mohammads house with in next 48hrs..

While discussing about her clothes jodha often starts thinking something which didn't go unnoticed by moti..

After two hours when jodha nd moti finally settled in her room moti decided to probe jodha abit as she knew that jodha would never share her fears.. "Shaadi ho rahi hai to kya ab mujhse apne mann ki baat share bhi nai karegi jodhu.." moti said sweetly.. jodha kicked herself mentally for making it very clear infront of moti.. she knew she has to open up now..

"Di.. aisi baat nai hai.. main.. vo.. main.. kuch soch rahi thhi di.." she said in alow tone.. "Kya hua..? chal mujhe bata.." moti aid listening to her attentively now..

"Main.. di.. main.. jalal ke baare mein.. soch rahi thhi.." jodha said bowing her head down.. to which moti smiled nd teased but stopped when she saw that jodha wasn't enjoying it at all.. she was serious.. "Kya hua jodhu.."

"Di.. jalal bohot achhe hain.. vo mujhse milne aaye thhe.. sirf yeh jaanne ki main yeh rishta apni marzi se bana rahi hoon ya nai.. vo bina kahe mujhe samajhne lage hain Di.. lekin main.. abhi apni dresses select karte waqt mujhe to yeh bhi nai pata thha ki unhe mujh par kaunsa colour achha lagega.. vo iss rishtey ko achhe se nibhaenge mujhe yakeen hai.. lekin main iss rishtey ko kaise nibhaungi.. maine to aaj tak kabhi kisi anjaan insaan se baat tak nai ki.. aur itni jaldi shaadi.. main abhi unki pasand - na pasand kuch bhi to nai jaanti.." jodha finally gave words to her fears.. she had silght tears in her eyes.. How she wished to have her mother today.. who could teach her some Golden Rules for a happy married life or give her some more time to know her partner well..

moti hugged jodha while jodha broke into tears.. she sobbed till she recollected jalal's last few words when he left after their first meeting.. "tumhari aankhein bohot khubsoorat hain.. mujhe inn mein aansoon dekh kar achha nai lagaho sake to inn mein yeh muskurahat humesha banaye rakhna.."

"Arre kya hua.. abhi to itna ro rahi thhi.. abhi ek dum se chup..?"moti asked in a confused while jodha went to wash her face nd hide her blush from moti..
She came out smiling.. nd satisfied moti smiled back at her..

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Finally the D-day is gonna come tomorrow.. Both jalal nd jodha are excited yet nervous.. It would be a big day for them..

jalal laid on his bed nd was just staring in the space.. He was smiling imagining jodha finally in his house as His Bride.. HIS WIFE.. he was fantasizing about her being totally his by then.. but still he was nervous.. he didn't knew if she would be ready to accept their relationship so early.. nd he wanted himself to be the last one to hurt her in any way.. he wanted to give her all the love nd happiness in the world..


While on the otherside jodha had different fears nd thoughts.. though she knew that jalal wouldn't hurt her but still she was afraid..
"vo mujhe samajhte hain.. lekin agar mujhse koi galti hui to.. vo mujhe hurt nai karenge lekin agar maine unka dil dukhaya to..?" These were the sort of questions roaming in her mind.. For once she blushed when she thought that next time she would be sleeping, she would not be here.. she would at his place as HIS WIFE..

They both drifted of to sleep not knowing when.. just preparing themselves for their new life TOGETHER..


Precap : Jalal's And Jodha's Marraige

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DONE...😳
HOPE U ALL LIKE IT...
DO READ N TELL ME HOWS IT...
WAITING FOR UR COMMENTS...😳😳
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Mrs. Tokas

Edited by --Mrs.Tokas-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sis I'm in love with this ff 😳 😳
Magical awesome blossom 😳 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oye pari!! Are u planing to kill me by ur awesome ffs?? And suxh continuous updates!! U r d best yaar!! Chap 1 was too good!! Extraordinary!! Didn read d next one yet!! Will b comment aftr reading!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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supeeerb update
mene 1st chapter se read kiya ek saath it ws lovely yaar
U have a Pack of awwsum stories
thanx fr d PM buddy
Edited by onaisa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruthshalini

Sis I'm in love with this ff 😳 😳
Magical awesome blossom 😳 😳

oh thanks shalu very much😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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welcome😳
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Originally posted by: dharshu

Oye pari!! Are u planing to kill me by ur awesome ffs?? And suxh continuous updates!! U r d best yaar!! Chap 1 was too good!! Extraordinary!! Didn read d next one yet!! Will b comment aftr reading!! 🤗

no no ash dear 😆😆😆thanks very much for reading it.. 😳😳
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Originally posted by: onaisa

supeeerb update

mene 1st chapter se read kiya ek saath it ws lovely yaar
U have a Pack of awwsum stories
thanx fr d PM buddy

thanks very much onaisa dear😃
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thanks😃

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