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Originally posted by: shahbhavini
Aishu vow what a mindblowing update... superb!!! amazing... U the best comedy writer... kya kya ideas ate hai tere dimang me...
DII BASS YAHI SAB AATA HAI DIMAAG MEI BAKKI TOH KHAALI REHTA HAI🤣Another rocking comedy update...😃 U THE COMEDY KING OF JA FORUM😃DII!! NOW I M GETTING BORED OF THIS TAG!🤣Finally they are soon going to get marry... I love Jodha's drama and making Jalal embarrassed in front of his family ...hilarious... but she is right engagement kis baat ki... vo to ho chuki hai na...par thank god... usne ring nahi pehnai varna...iss ladki ka kuch nahi keh sakte... engagement se inkar kar de... Hey not fair... Mirza ko ghar pe chod ke shopping pe sab chale gaye... Really U can write everything beautifully... I love the part when reporter questions and their answer were so professional and sweet...CHALO SOME ONE MENTIONED IT TOO!🤣Tu muje ek chij bat...TU CHIZ HAI KYA???????????????DII!! AAP KO NAHI PATA!!🤣YEH BOBBY KA IDEA AAYA KAHA HAI... DEKH ME ARCHANA KI TARAH HAS RAHI HU... UFF RAJAT AND BOBBY IMAGINE😆DII!! AISE HE MAZZE KE LIYE DAAL DIYA🤣Poor Veer ko buri tarah se fasaya... bhag gaya... Aur yeh itni sari language...kya baat hai... I LOVE THE PART WHEN HAMIDA SAID TO CALL HER MOM... vow you don't miss anything... Jodha is feeling so lucky ...suddenly Jalal has filled her all emptiness... such a sweet scene... Also when Veer called her Behen...I was touched...even in joke sounded so sweet...HAIN???😲 U FOUND IT SWEET! 🤣I love the part when Jodha compare Jalal with his father... I guess every girl wants same quality in his man like his dad... Best kiss ever I read... I felt ghoosbumps really very passionate but romantic... oh your Jallu is so hot... I wish I was their instead Jodha😳DII!!!!!! AAP AISA MAT SOCHA KER I M STILL HERE FOR THIS🤣Messages... Jodha sends what a cute messages... her expression changed every second... Jallu ka phone kaha pe hai...??? vo to gaya kam se...Hamida wonderful choice for the dress... I pictured pari in that dress..IT WAS AHAANA'S CHOICE DI!. aww ... Poor Jallu uska haal behal ho gaya hoga😃 First Night dress... 😳 ab yeh Jodha ko koun samjaye ki kya hota hai first night ko😆 Muje to pura doubt hai... vo Jallu ko chune bhi degi😆 and My Jallu is so protective about her and told her not to worry for the dress... awww... I love their romantic gaze... I always do... Veer phir aa gaya kabab me haddi chalo acha hua Jalal ka phone to mila😃Aisha U R wonderful Amazing comedy writer... Keep Writing... I love your every single update... 👏👏 U R STAR⭐️WRITERDII!!! I MISSED U IN MY PREVIOUS CHAPTER!! AAP CHAHE EK WORD BOL DIYA KERO PER BOLA ZAROOR KERO!🤗
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