UNPREDICTABLE LUV #3 (closed) new link added on pg 1

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khushboo

@khushbooparmar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

thnx yrr!! ye ki naa tune achi baat🤣
chal bye, going to sleep! kal baat kerte hai🤗

Good night dear...

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Ruthshalini

@Devilicious_ME

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

vaapis start ho gyi tu 🤣
tu chal bye too sleepy today!

nd when did I STOP AISHA!!!! muahahahahahah🤣

Sweet dreams byeee

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#533

Aishu vow what a mindblowing update... superb!!! amazing... U the best comedy writer... kya kya ideas ate hai tere dimang me...

Another rocking comedy update...😃 U THE COMEDY KING OF JA FORUM😃

Finally they are soon going to get marry... I love Jodha's drama and making Jalal embarrassed in front of his family ...hilarious... but she is right engagement kis baat ki... vo to ho chuki hai na...par thank god... usne ring nahi pehnai varna...iss ladki ka kuch nahi keh sakte... engagement se inkar kar de... Hey not fair... Mirza ko ghar pe chod ke shopping pe sab chale gaye... Really U can write everything beautifully... I love the part when reporter questions and their answer were so professional and sweet...

Tu muje ek chij bat...TU CHIZ HAI KYA??????????????? YEH BOBBY KA IDEA AAYA KAHA HAI... DEKH ME ARCHANA KI TARAH HAS RAHI HU... UFF RAJAT AND BOBBY IMAGINE😆

Poor Veer ko buri tarah se fasaya... bhag gaya... Aur yeh itni sari language...kya baat hai... I LOVE THE PART WHEN HAMIDA SAID TO CALL HER MOM... vow you don't miss anything... Jodha is feeling so lucky ...suddenly Jalal has filled her all emptiness... such a sweet scene... Also when Veer called her Behen...I was touched...even in joke sounded so sweet...

I love the part when Jodha compare Jalal with his father... I guess every girl wants same quality in his man like his dad... Best kiss ever I read... I felt ghoosbumps really very passionate but romantic... oh your Jallu is so hot... I wish I was their instead Jodha😳

Messages... Jodha sends what a cute messages... her expression changed every second... Jallu ka phone kaha pe hai...??? vo to gaya kam se...

Hamida wonderful choice for the dress... I pictured pari in that dress... aww ... Poor Jallu uska haal behal ho gaya hoga😃 First Night dress... 😳 ab yeh Jodha ko koun samjaye ki kya hota hai first night ko😆 Muje to pura doubt hai... vo Jallu ko chune bhi degi😆 and My Jallu is so protective about her and told her not to worry for the dress... awww... I love their romantic gaze... I always do... Veer phir aa gaya kabab me haddi chalo acha hua Jalal ka phone to mila😃

Aisha U R wonderful Amazing comedy writer... Keep Writing... I love your every single update... 👏👏 U R STAR⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️WRITER

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago

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Uzma Ahmed

@RKfanatic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

Fabulous writing 👏
Can't wait for next chapters continue soon 😊

Edited by RKholic - 11 years ago

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

Seriously Aisha, you're updates are too good. You have such a creative mind. OMG, this update was fabulous!!! I loved loved loved it!!❤️❤️

Wow..every update of your keeps getting better and better...love you Aisha.. really love you for your amazing work!!😃

It is too good. I don't know what to say. I'm speechless. But I guess you understand that I'm trying to say that your story is really really REALLY good. 😆 😆

P.S. Continue the other story soon or else my "feelings" will be hurt.😉🤣

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#536

Oh- and yes:

Precap #1 looks not so good for Jodha. 😆

Precap #2 yipee!!!

Thought to add this.🤣

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Neha Mishra

@Shivika_Fanatic

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#537

Subhanallah ... MashaAllah ... 👏
You've written it amazingly. Loved every bit of it to the core Darling Aisha .. luv ur Jodha n Jalal
Well done dear.
Expecting jodha to Turn seductress in SR ❤️