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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2




Hum Tumse Phir Mile...

Aahana got up from the sofa..."Maa,main jaake fresh ho jaati hun,tum jaldi se kuch snacks bana do...bahut bhook lagi hai"

Rima.."Ok beta ...tum jao aur fresh ho jaao"

After getting fresh.Aahana went to the kitchen to help her maa with snacks.

Rima "Vaise Aahana, humare jo padosi hai na unke parivar ki do betiyan bhi tumhare hi school mein hai,kya naam bataya tha unhone..."

Aahana cut her in the middle.."Rehne do na maa...hogi koi.."

Rima said "Sunn toh..."

Aahana "bla bla bla leave it na maa.."

Rima "Ok"

While Aahana was having her snacks Rima said "Bahut achcha naam tha yaad hi nahi aa raha"

Aahana "Maa...phir se.."

Rima "hmmm...tu kabhi nahi badlegi.."

Aahana "thank you...main kabhi badalna bhi nahi chahti"

"Acha maa main terace se aati hun thodi der music kar.."

"OK"

"Acha papa kab tak aayenge..??"

"Unhe thoda late hoga aaj"

"hmmm...ok"

She went to the terrace and was muttering a song when she heard a familiar voice nearby.It was coming from the next terrace.

"Riya...!!!!" she thought

"Hogi koi...!!!"She continued hearing her song

Then she heard the same voice growing louder...

"Yeh toh pakka Riya hai.."

"Riya ..."she called her.

Riya appeared..."Tum...yahan...!!!!" Riya exclaimed...

"Haan this is my home.."

"Ohh...dat means we are padosi" She smiled

"Ohh toh you live here...matlab maa tumhare baare mein baat kar rahi thi"

She said " Acha...!!!!Chacha tumhare baare mein bol rahe the.."

Aahana said.."Tumne kuch kaha...???"

Riya said " Nahi...bdw Nidhi bhi yahan hai"

"Hiii" Nidhi said

"Hiii" Aahana said

They were taliking to each other when a noise came...

It was the noise of the horn of a bike.

"Rio...Nids..." Dakshya screamed

"Lo aa gaya loudspeaker"Aahana said

"Dakshya ...!!!" Riya said

"Yeah" Nidhi said

"Tum bhi aao Aahana ...niche sab baatein karenge.."

"Never" Aahana rolled her eyes

Three of them were chatting when Aahana went to her balcony.

"Nakchadi...!!!! tu yahan kya kar rahi hai...!!!!"Dakshya said.

"You...!!!!"

Dakshya laughed.

Rima came to the balcony.

"Yeh kaun hai beta" Rima said

"Namaste Aunty" Dakshya

Rima "Namaste beta"

"Vaise Aunty aapki beti ke saath kuch serious problem hai...you need to take her to the psycatrist"

"Hello...tu bas ruk I am coming" Aahana

Dakshya "Bhago...shez gonna kill me...bya Rio ..bye Nids ...bye Aunty"

"Bye beta" Rima said

He accelerated his bike fled away...

"Aap bhi na maa...'bye beta"...usse zyada sar par mat chadao"

"Acha toh yeh vahi school wala tha...Acha toh hai.."

"Aghhh"

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Aahana was watching TV ..when Ketan entered.

"Papa...!!!"

"Hello beta...kaisa raha aaj ka din?"

"Na pucho toh acha hain Papa"

"kyon...??"

"Ahhh...Long story...!!! Phir kabhi sunaungi"

"haha...Ok..vaise tera bhai kahan hai..??"

"So raha hai"

"yeh ladka bhi na"

He went to Abhay's room...he was sleeping...

"Abhay"

"Ohh papa aap aa gaye Sorry bas thodi si aankh lag gayi"

"Aankh lag gayi...!!!!Yeh teri humesha ki aadat hai.."

"Sorry Papa" Abhay shook his head

Aahana and Rima were listening all these standing behind the door.

"Aaj toh bhai gaya" Aahana said

Rima "Shhh"

"Ok" Aahana whispered

"Koi baat nahi beta" Ketan said.

"Koi baat nahi..!!!" Abhay

"Koi baat nahi...!!!" Aahana exclaimed..

"Tu aaj raat ko padhayi kar lena" Ketan said softly..

"What...!!"

"Yes"

"Soft tone harsh punishment.." Aahana said

Rima laughed...

No Precap😉

so tell me howz the chapter should I continue.😳😳
Edited by --Mrs.Tokas-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

what a beautiful start!!! Amazing... Only one problem... yaar I will surely remember story line... but doubt names... I love to imagine Rajat or Jalal... I love this dakshya... line maru hai...
cutie pie Ahna / pari... cutie pie... Update soon ...

Just a request ... can you please change names to RaJ and Pari..or Jalal and Jodha... I love love your writing... 😃

I konw bhavini but you also watch ja where is rajat is name as akbar so tell me how you remember his name 😉😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

yup!! pari me to got confused nd forgot their names...so if possible can u plz change their names to the names suggested by bhavi dii (above) plzz...for our convenience 🤗as the story is awesome nd if u will change their names it will be out of the world 😳

ok from next time i'll update their real names
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ruthshalini

So sorry chocolate cake 😭
I know I'm late but I was busy 😭
The chapter was awesome blossom just like u 😃 😆
Thank u so much for ff sis I love u so much 😳 🤗
Really amazing ff waiting for next chapter 😉 😃
No percap update soon chocolate cake 😳 😳

thanks gulab jamun😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: SARA4444

haan even i suggest the same.. 😃😳

ok i'll try😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: SARA4444

.pehle toh me sorry ... late comment.. was busy 😭.. anyways.. fabulous start.,.. loved the update ... yeh aahana or dakshya 😆... i am loving the story...

yeh long update tha.. 😲... do din tak no update.. 😡 ... tujhe update dena hai baas.. 😆... i will not leave you easily... precap bhi nahi diya 😲.. chal kal update car 😆 🤗


ye le tera update😃chal reply kar😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: swatiluthra

Lovely CH dear. 😊
Awesome start
Thanks for the pm


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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
very cute update deat.. continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08

Amazing!!! Updaet soon... Start was brillant👏


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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

Nice start.. continue soon & do pm


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