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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: lashy
Yayy I read prologue... 🥳 yet to read part 1 though.. nice start da.. very very nice...
Loved the opening lines.. very different..
Setting is Goa?

Even before reading you hit like for first chappy? too much lashy.. 😆
You felt the opening lines different!! Aww.. I'm overwhelmed dear..

For time being, curtain raiser is in Goa.. let's see how story is going to progress 😉

Thank you and love u dear 😳

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary
What a start di...totally amazing
>> Thanks Harshii...

Continue soon...aap toh chupe rstam nikale
>> chupa rustam.. I love that line 😆
Start itna aacha hai toh story to mindblowing hogi..
>> I hope I can sustain your expectation
Nw i'll take revange n will fill ur aacount wid update req..😆...
luv u
harshita
>> Revenge!! Ok, let me be prepared then 😉.. Love u too Harshi ❤️

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Yes.. That letter needed a special mention to set the background and to introduce Jodha's character to my readers Nanuu 😊

Great ! 👍🏼

Glad that you liked the chapter and chats 😳

Ofcourse I did !😃

Actually I've sent you a PM Nanu, didn't u get? Anyways I added you now to my buddy list

Naah! No PM! 😕 I accepted your buddy req 😃 Update soon now 😉 BTW, Nanu from you sounds so 'apna apna'

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Vow beautifully written.. Gorgeous start...Cute convo... Res.

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago

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J2lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Thanks dearie.. Yes, full to nautanki group 😉 May I know your name??

u knw it dea...J2LOVER.😃😃..OR you can call me JJLOVER too...😆😆

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Thanks Rima 😊

😛

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Thanku again 😳

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

*Edited*

Jahnavi di 🤗 Aapne kaise likh diya ki you're not a writer?? Hell you are! And a talented one for sure! From the prologue and the first chapter i can make out that this is going to be fabulous. You have depicted it so smoothly...it looks so great. Plus it has a different touch to it not the concept but your writing its so unique and chilled out. I can totally relate to it! In the prologue likewise you stated about that letter...the brother gave her sister a pale blue dot mantra after reading which she smiled after so many days then the hint you gave that something is gonna happen to his brother soon. Then cut straight to the first chapter which was again total different...jodha and samyukta, so sweet! I liked that criminal dialogues 😆 i like such things! Actually i love humour! Then jodha saying to erase those stairs of her hostel hahaha so cute! I loved that! Then the Fb comments! Oh god i have done this like so much! And that pri! She is so me 😆 I absolutely loved the recital of that facebook group. I want to read the next chapter sooonnn 😛 lambi update dena aur jaldi bhi 😛 woh kya hai na meri ek di hai jinko pasand nahi late aur small updates isiliye please ha accept my this small humble request 🤣
Love you di i am so glad that you've started writing this concept of yours and i am sure this is going to be a success! 🤗❤️

Edited by surbhimathur - 11 years ago

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Wow di you are a writerr!!! :O Thats a surprise!
Reserved!
Will edit soon :))

NO Surbhi, I'm not.. not pretending to be modest, but I must say, I'm not a writer. I'm just a story teller.. I have a story stabbing my mind since ages and I'm venting that frustration out this way.. after all why should I bear all the headache? 😉

Edited by hemakeerti - 11 years ago