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Posted: 10 years ago
Another entertaining chapter 10 from you HemašŸ˜›...I loved this too...
The chicken biryani-kebab eating scene was beautifully written...especially when Jodha was noticing Jalal's kebab eating style, Jalal noticed her noticing him and offered kebabs in a subtle way and Jodha understood that he offered her but acted brilliantlyšŸ˜‰, only to glance at him later (he off course noticing that too and smirking)šŸ˜†...I also liked that Jodha felt that his eyes felt familiar to heršŸ˜‰
The last scene was again wonderfully written...Jodha in her weird act when Divya, Mohan and Jalal enter, their reactionsšŸ˜‰ and the final smirking comment by himšŸ˜‰...I am now waiting to see his reactions on knowing of Jodha's leave😳...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Read Chapter 9 just now...Very interesting...

>> Thanks dear.. 😃

Jalal is a divorcee😲 but he also seems to be interested in JodhašŸ˜‰ (I am loving that)...By the way, I think he is disturbed that Jodha is freaking with a man by bunking officešŸ˜‰ (at least I would like to believe that😳)..

>> You love to believe what you prefer to.. and I'm not going to refute it Pallo.. šŸ˜†

PS: By the way, Jayanagar Bangalore Central is just 10 minutes from were I stay and have been there several times (though I have not eaten at the Village😃)
>> I thought you are staying in Mumbai.. this is a news to me.. I too don't know how Village's food tastes.. actually I don't know Bangalore at all.. šŸ˜†



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Another entertaining chapter 10 from you HemašŸ˜›...I loved this too...
>> thank u thank u.. šŸ˜‰šŸ¤—

The chicken biryani-kebab eating scene was beautifully written...
>> hi hi.. ā˜ŗļø
especially when Jodha was noticing Jalal's kebab eating style, Jalal noticed her noticing him and offered kebabs in a subtle way and Jodha understood that he offered her but acted brilliantlyšŸ˜‰, only to glance at him later (he off course noticing that too and smirking)šŸ˜†...I also liked that Jodha felt that his eyes felt familiar to heršŸ˜‰
>> Yes dimag ki batti jali for Jodha.. šŸ˜‰
The last scene was again wonderfully written...Jodha in her weird act when Divya, Mohan and Jalal enter, their reactionsšŸ˜‰ and the final smirking comment by himšŸ˜‰...I am now waiting to see his reactions on knowing of Jodha's leave😳...
>> I'm happy that you liked that scene dear.. šŸ¤— you get a glimpse of his reaction in chap11 on thread 2... šŸ˜‰


Are you busy these days pallo? Not much IF presence from you..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti


Are you busy these days pallo? Not much IF presence from you..

Yes dear...busy plus MIL has come...so don't get much time in IF...A lot of FFs are pending...I am going one by one now😭...Completed yours today and I loved it all...😃...
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Posted: 10 years ago

oh.. ok.. why 😔 dear? don't you like B'lore.. generally people fall in love with b'lore instantly for its climate na.. yeah, I too heard its cool most of the time
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti


oh.. ok.. why 😔 dear? don't you like B'lore.. generally people fall in love with b'lore instantly for its climate na.. yeah, I too heard its cool most of the time

The weather over here is way better than Mumbai...Cool most time of the year...but I miss my parents, my relatives, my friends....And I am not much of a socializer...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pals2411

The weather over here is way better than Mumbai...Cool most time of the year...but I miss my parents, my relatives, my friends....And I am not much of a socializer...


oh.. is ur hubby's native place Mumbai too?

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