FF: Pale Blue Dot (Chap 10, page122 14/10) updated - Page 4

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Originally posted by: Rasika29

Lovely start...

Really loved prolog and chap 1...😊

The chat convo btw Jo and frnds is just awesome.

update soon and plz PM me

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

NO Surbhi, I'm not.. not pretending to be modest, but I must say, I'm not a writer. I'm just a story teller.. I have a story stabbing my mind since ages and I'm venting that frustration out this way.. after all why should I bear all the headache? 😉

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

awesome love...

very nice...

waise yeh pri kaun hai???

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

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Jahnavi di 🤗 Aapne kaise likh diya ki you're not a writer?? Hell you are! And a talented one for sure! From the prologue and the first chapter i can make out that this is going to be fabulous. You have depicted it so smoothly...it looks so great. Plus it has a different touch to it not the concept but your writing its so unique and chilled out. I can totally relate to it! In the prologue likewise you stated about that letter...the brother gave her sister a pale blue dot mantra after reading which she smiled after so many days then the hint you gave that something is gonna happen to his brother soon. Then cut straight to the first chapter which was again total different...jodha and samyukta, so sweet! I liked that criminal dialogues 😆 i like such things! Actually i love humour! Then jodha saying to erase those stairs of her hostel hahaha so cute! I loved that! Then the Fb comments! Oh god i have done this like so much! And that pri! She is so me 😆 I absolutely loved the recital of that facebook group. I want to read the next chapter sooonnn 😛 lambi update dena aur jaldi bhi 😛 woh kya hai na meri ek di hai jinko pasand nahi late aur small updates isiliye please ha accept my this small humble request 🤣
Love you di i am so glad that you've started writing this concept of yours and i am sure this is going to be a success! 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Hi, You've reached Jahnavi's voice mail.. I've currently fainted reading this comment, will catch u soon once I'm back to senses. Thank u..

krr..krr.. krr