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Posted: 11 years ago
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Now this is something else again! I do not read FFs as a rule for lack of time, but after going thru this breathless opening scenes of your newest baby, I plan to dig out your old ones as well, and read as many of them as I can at one go.

This is real fun, high octane action _ I would have loved to see the boy's derring do with the Afghans onscreen! - drama, and a mystery at the heart of it all. The boy and the girl are utterly natural, not like miniature adults, and I found that most refreshing.

As for the lawaris taunts by the village children, now that is par for the course. It is of course unkind and spiteful of their parents to say things like this about the boy's mother, but children can, on their own, be very cruel, like the ragging by bullies in schools. I am so glad the boy is remarkably tough and resourceful, and can look after himself, and others, in a crisis.

All in all, a most enjoyable ride so far, and I am sure it will only get better as you proceed.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Part10 Hysterical mom
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Posted: 11 years ago
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akbar is in agra

rukmavati and khannum come for wedding here in marwar


Will akbar also come for wedding???
Where is today's update???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow !!!! Read all 10 parts in a go and it was like seeing a movie 😆, the fight scenes described very nicely. This FF is completely different from your other FF ... Specially the jodha and Jalal in Jashn e bahara ...who are kids themselves , atleast in the way they fight 😆.

Loved the freshness in this FF , khanum adds to the same. But introduction of Khanum isn't surprising coming from you ... As I love to read your salim and Khanum conversations.

Do keep updating , your regular updates are something I look forward to apart from the days episode.It has become a habit now to open IF and look for your days update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Wow awesome update!!!
Loved the last line
Finally Akbar is mentioned...now i m waiting for his entry!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
😃amazing update
plzz update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
sssooo cute...very nice update continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
part 10
lovely...
the kid is too much...
so naughty...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Your Khanum is a girl after my own heart! A spunky daredevil who cannot even imagine a situation that she cannot come out of safely. Splendid!

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Part11 Emperor's daughter


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww poor Jo(mother)
I m assuming she is Jodha!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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am 1st... very nice update...

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