Akdha ff:Dastaan-E-Mohabbat...THREAD CLOSED-Thread 2 link page no.154 - Page 73

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Yeaahhh my chutki finally updated daastan ... Yup.. I did😳that was soo soo soo sweet of u to dedicate this to us 😳 .ab main sweet hun hi toh kya karun?😆.. & u always surprise us by updating at unusual time , without any prior notice or teasers 😆 ... its better actually ...meri puraani aadat hain😆

coming to the update ... what can I say ... how much I hated this jalal in the first chapter as he was on the verge of divorcing jodha without knowing the actual reasonYou-Hate-Jalal!😲 these words cannot come together for you Varsha di!😲😲... but today I am equally in awe of him for being such a good husband & a great human ..Aakhir meri creation jo hain😆. no wonder this jalal deserves a well round of applause for changing himself so drastically & for controlling his inner desires 😆My SR ki bhukhi di!🤣 for his Oh-so-beautiful - queen cum wife jodha ... hats off to u jalal 😆 ... but plz dont control anymore & give us a hot SR very soon 🤣I hereby coin the title SR ke bhukhe for you, Varsha di🤣

No wonder jalal is a player ... but anu your jodha is also not less than a player herself ... 😆Dono barabar ke khilaadi hain😆...he was teasing her when jodha was talking to the girl .. & this fellow was busy in teasing the poor wife ... but jodha not less turned the game & got angry on jalal Gandi baat Jalal! *Scolds him*.🤣.making him all confused plus dragged him in the hut also 😲 ..my bold sherni😆. then I thought may be she will kiss him now ... but naaah .. u anu 😡 ... became a spoilt sport again here , didnt allow them to kiss 😡 ...usmein thoda waqt hai di😳🤣 anu mein tujhe dekh lungi 😡...picture bhej dun apni, dekh lena😉🤣

And finally after such a looog journey they reach the dargah ... phew *sigh* ... Pata nahi kitne updates se they are going and going🤣in one piece ofcourse 😆 .. hehe😆their also this madame jodha is murmuring sessions going on which didnt go unnoticed by our jalal ... he has a sharp pair of ears indeed .attentive Jalal😃.. jodha shouldnt forget that 😆 ... & those words of salim chisti saying jodha will become MUZ ... were like music to my ears ... Ohh waiting for that day now ... Usse pehle bhi toh kuch hota hai naa di.. 😳 jo nahi hoga🤣

So the beautiful journey to salim chisti dargah is coming to an end ...haan😭 How I loved writing about this journey...I loved the whole update ... anu ... very beautifully written ... Aww🤗thanks yaar!😳 hoping for a SR soon now 😡 ... & I am waiting from last so many chapters ... ab zyada mat latkao mujhe samjhi 😡 .di.. main SR kaise likhun?☺️..

Thank U for the update chutki 🤗 mention not my pyaari di!🤗... you are the only good girl to give me an update today Main hun hi itni acchi😳... rest all are dagabaaz 😭Aisha ne toh aaj update kar diya.. Preet di😭

Originally posted by: marshi

Just watched the serial and was literally crying then logged in in if to make my dard halka and saw ur pm openned the chappy at first i was so sad but as i started reading my mood got lighten and at the end after 1hr i smilled thanks anu u are really a very awesome writer love u this chappy brought a smile on my face so no need to say how lovely the chappy was right.

Originally posted by: marshi

Just watched the serial and was literally crying then logged in in if to make my dard halka and saw ur pm openned the chappy at first i was so sad but as i started reading my mood got lighten and at the end after 1hr i smilled thanks anu u are really a very awesome writer love u this chappy brought a smile on my face so no need to say how lovely the chappy was right.

Originally posted by: -AnyDestiny-

Supb update..

Originally posted by: rima4ever

fabulous mind blowing update

Originally posted by: rima4ever

continue soon dear