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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn
Magical one as alway my Nany 🤗😳

I love you tenny sweety! 🤗 Thanks so much!😃

But the last part was worrying and scary one 😭😲

Aww.. I know...

I want to read read read read the next part Update ASAP han 🤗 Warna tujhe pata hai na in advance kya hoga tere saath 😈😈

Loooll..😆😆 I am gonna update it soonest now.. 🤗

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

badme comment karti hoon😳

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch
badme comment karti hoon😳

Sure lOve ❤️

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sufidox

@sufidox

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Please continue soon 😃

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Nanu baisaa...
It was excellent and awesome...
The urge and the determination to find Jo was expressed beautifully...
Aww...
Jo became a mother of a sweet baby girl...
Jalal is elated...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm...
Unres part 2 really very soon...

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Res for the comment for ch2.

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow Princess😃 That was really beautiful...Jallu searching his beloved Jo like a true deewana😉...Is hit by a vehicle and reaches the same hospital where Jo is delivering a baby😃...Thankfully, you did not leave the chapter at Jallu feeling a whiff of air showing Jo's presence but actually ended the chapter at their meet😳...Lovely dear, I really loved it...Now Princess update soon and I mean really soon😃

PS: I am saying update soon because, there are many updates from different OS/SS/FF still pending and I/we are waiting, waiting, waiting...Humlog track rakte rakte bhul na jaye😡😭...Khayal rakho hamara😭😭

And I really mean, update the next/last chapter soon...because I loved it and I know the next chapter will be emotional and a really good one😉😃😳...HAPPY ENDING😉

Edited by Pals2411 - 11 years ago

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onaisa

@onaisa

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

It was really awwwsum nyc update

Thanx a ton fr PM plz ipdate mean continue

Writing N plz PM me

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Namy, it was beautiful!!🤗🤗🤗

Jalal is really in love with her! He could sense her presence in that hospital even without seeing her for a second!

The entire scene in the maternity ward was priceless! From Jodha's delivery to Jalal finally getting to see her and his priceless expression when he saw his daughter! Just too priceless!😳. I just don't have words to describe it. It was priceless beyond all imagination. The scene almost made me cry!

Jodha has shut her eyes! Oh no! Now what will happen?😭. I hope she is fine though. Their family has just begun and I can't see her go away!

Please update soon!😊 Can't wait to see how this turns out!😳