3~*NOT just a passionate affair~*Pt 40 Pg2

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...jaskaran...

@...jaskaran...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

beautiful writer...😛😛😛 i love their embarassements and the gang's teasing jokes😉😉😉... they are so cute😳😳😳 i start immagining them like this only... only ur update give a sigh relief from the now ongoing track...😭😭😭... continue dear... if you publish all this chapter and make a abook.. im sure its going to rock..try sometime... update soon..

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: lashy

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: lashy

@ LD & choti

Chal yaar tum donon... I loved the swing mein donon... only if they loved each other so much could they enjoy such moments

pichle paanch chapters se it's been sensual... so there has to be break na.. 😆 every chapter mein difficult to describe how they kissed 🤣

LOOOL... Arrey yaar... I LOVED these smooth peaceful moments as well... kisne kaha I didn like it.. but phir bhi... mujhe is FF mein bohot bada dhammaaka chahiye... shaadi to u said NO... to phir yaar ek mini SR hi dedo...before marriage waali... lol what m I blabbering 🤣

@LD

By the way Lashy, one very important question🥱...Jallu aced in exams 👏...He didn't ask anything from Jo kya😳...Or will this make an appearance in the next chapter... Maybe Jo willingly this time ☺️ as gift😉😆😆

'Wait and watch' 😛

Cool! So you SURELY are upto something interesting! Yaay!😃

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: flemingo
ps- innova is toyota's 😛

Grrr grrr grr got myself confused between indigo and innova.. 😡 bad bad lashy... after all that research grr grr..

thanks for pointing it out.. edited that bit 😃

will come back to rest of replies soon...

some sweet sweet reading to be done now.. other writers ka

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: lashy

Grrr grrr grr got myself confused between indigo and innova.. 😡 bad bad lashy... after all that research grr grr..

You sound JUST LIKE YOUR OWN JO! But don't worry! Sam is just tellin ya casually... if she wanted..she would have corrected it on her own and kept quiet...but she told you... so no need of grr grr...😆😆😆

thanks for pointing it out.. edited that bit 😃

will come back to rest of replies soon...

some sweet sweet reading to be done now.. other writers ka

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divyavm

@divyavm

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

My writer-e-khaas, Amazing parts 31 and 32 ... Just caught up on both.

- For part 31: I love how Jodha is so perceptive of Jalal's emotions about that card she received ... How he is reacting is more important than the card itself which I loved

Also, what a twist with the card ...

- For part 32: Loved Jodha's quasi-pride and competitiveness on Jalal doing well on his exams ... You describe the mix of emotions so well

Also, loved how Jalal agreed to sing for his Jodha 😳Though he was so bad it ...

Thanks again for writing such a beautiful story! Keep it coming.

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Sam

@sam_0506

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: lashy

Grrr grrr grr got myself confused between indigo and innova..😡bad bad lashy... after all that research grr grr..
thanks for pointing it out.. edited that bit😃
will come back to rest of replies soon...
some sweet sweet reading to be done now.. other writers ka

hey, just pointed out casually yaar... who cares if tata built that car or toyota? Cars magazine thodi hi na hai... no need to go grrr grrr. Bad sammy... made you go grr grr

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TheIronLady

@TheIronLady

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Just lovvveeed the last two chapters...😳

Awesome update😃...

Well...will try to catch up the rest of the chapters as well.😃

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Shraddha 🤗 ... how the hell u manage to pen such story 🤗 this chapter had everything ... i loved the way jalal was singing so coyly & innocently only for jodha ❤️, to the bunch of prankster's pulling jo & ja's leg ... was soo cute !!!! the pure & innocence reflects so much .. i am really in love with this story of your's

Hat's off to your creativity shradhha 🤗 ... but damn my happiness didn't last long when jo's phone rang ... n that instant i guessed its the same maniac stalker ... felt like pulling him out from the phone & beating him black & blue😡

lashy ... grr grr grrr ... i hate YOUR stalker ...😡

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Hi Shraddha... Yet another amazing chapter... Just loved the teasings of the gang all the way.. So the stalker is into direct action now... Wow... Waiting for next chapter, guessing it would be closer to the revelation of stalker