3~*NOT just a passionate affair~*Pt 40 Pg2

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Elizabeth FitzWilliam Darcy

@LizBennett

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Babe...u made my Sunday...no other words can add more emotion to that..

Loved it!

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

🤗grizzly bear hug to you...

Before you accuse me of ePDA, I want to defend myself.

The last 2 chapters have been so beautiful..

The best part about your writing is that it does not go over the top ever, Just like you never go over the top my dear!

I just loved the kiss and make up oops... no the kiss that spoiled the makeup😉

Jo rushed to him to show the letter and after all the un original F**k and B*****ds he still managed to too the exam. You do see such brilliant students around. And I am with Jo in her jealousy. Its so cool and she is so proud of him too!

Me too!

What about my JO ? Was she good too?😕Or did she just pass but not with flying colors😲

I love Jo's haq on Jalal.

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sara

@SARA4444

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

diii just loved loved loved both the chapters 👏👏⭐️

amazing writing👏⭐️

it was soo romantic 😳

akdha😳

who was the person on phone? the stalker??😕

update soon 😃

beautiful chapters 😃

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bokul

@bokul

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

congrats for the new thread

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J2lover

@J2lover

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

first of all thank you soo much for this sudden surprise...actually i was xpecting your update next week maybe...😆😆 but i jumped upon my seat when i saw my SWEETHEART FF...UPDATED...😳😳 thnxx for making my NIGHT...😆 n coming to the update...it was KADAK..in my language...😉😉...the cute TEASING was really MEAN...😳😳 but CUTELY MEAN...😉😉😉 now am really xcited to go to college...hope i too get a similar group...😆😆 ANYWAYZZ...coming to THE HIGHLIGHT OFC... MY DARLING JALLU'S SONG!!!!!!!!!🤣 SCHOOO SCHWEET...😆😆 u big thnxx for that...😳😳 🤗🤗n THE CLIMAX...😲😲IT was totally UNXPECTED...THAT MORON DARED TO "CALL" HER...😡😡 OMG...its gonna be soo INTERESTING NOW...😉😉 ACTUALLY HAVE SOO MANY GUESSE ABOUT THAT CALLER...but just wanna WAIT N WATCH...😃😃 update soon dea...😳😳 n KEEP giving such UNXPECTED surprises...😳😳

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Delphi

@Delphi-03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Amazing Chapter... And congrats on new thread!!!
But now... Return of The Stalker...!!! (Sounds like the name of some cheesy horror movie...😉)

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agun

@agun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Brilliant Lashy...I cannot get over this Jalal...the most constant, practical, sensible, romantic, caring, witty,...and the list goes on... in many respects close to my all time favourite Mr. Darcy from P&P. Even though Jodha (again like lizzy in P&P) is very much the good, intelligent, fearless & beautiful heroine...it is Jalal that lingers on my mind long after I finish reading the story.

The stalker finds a honorable mention in this chapter too..he has to ruin the romance for the beautiful couple 😡😡 and make us restless till you update the next chap...

Cannot wait for the next one Lashy...

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Preet

@rishbala3018

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: lashy


Hi Preet🤗
Thanks so much dear for commenting..it was meant to be a light hearted chapter - setting the ball rolling for things to come..But, glad you liked it...

Waise, I was busy writing this past couple of days so am yet to catch up on my reading.. will read your beautiful FF by tomorrow

Aww u r welcome dear 🤗
Please give romantic time to them both with less tension from the stalker!!
Will wait for ur comment on my FF 😃
Will b updating mine in next couple of days!!