3~*NOT just a passionate affair~*Pt 40 Pg2

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Di, it was really awesome!

Loved the part where Jalal sang for Jodha, even though he was terrible at it!😆

The phone call, I wonder who could it be that's troubling Jodha. But I have a feeling that someone from their group is involved.

I can sense that strong opposition would come from Jodha's family in the near future. I want to see how they overcome all opposition and still remain together!

Lovely update and please update soon.

P.S. Sorry for not commenting earlier on the other updates😊

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: rishbala3018
Wow awesome update dear 👏
Thank u so much for listening to my request and sending them to the picnic 😃
Loved the whole chapter a lot, the teasing by friends, sitting and enjoying on the swing, all of it!!
U left us on a hanger in precap:( its that stalker calling her, isn't it?? Does he have to ruin the fun everytime:(

Please update soon...its too hard to wait!!

Hi Preet 🤗

Thanks so much dear for commenting..it was meant to be a light hearted chapter - setting the ball rolling for things to come..But, glad you liked it...

Waise, I was busy writing this past couple of days so am yet to catch up on my reading.. will read your beautiful FF by tomorrow

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: lashy
@LD

🤔 ------ Itne acche setting mein sirf gaana and book reading hi soccha...

Sometimes, in the most peaceful moments lies the beauty of comfort, greatest sense of love, comfort, warmth...for them both, being with each other there felt like they were at 'home' that's what it signified... they could be like this today.. they could be like this 40 years from now.. it'd never change..

🤔🤔🤔🤔 ---- Let them enjoy reading book in their private garden after 10 years of marriage Koi nahi rokega😃... Not now☺️😳😳😳

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: samy18
i was lost in ur story i didnt realized when it ended and why it ended
thanks for such a beautiful update love u and thanks for pm
this update was breathtakingly awesome

Hey dearest.. thanks so so so so much... your words were really encouraging.. 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: najma123
loved it!!!!!!!! please update soon.

Thanks so much najma... 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

@ LD & choti

Chal yaar tum donon... I loved the swing mein donon... only if they loved each other so much could they enjoy such moments

pichle paanch chapters se it's been sensual... so there has to be break na.. 😆 every chapter mein difficult to describe how they kissed 🤣

@LD

By the way Lashy, one very important question🥱...Jallu aced in exams 👏...He didn't ask anything from Jo kya😳...Or will this make an appearance in the next chapter... Maybe Jo willingly this time ☺️ as gift😉😆😆

'Wait and watch' 😛

Edited by lashy - 11 years ago

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: lashy

@ LD & choti

Chal yaar tum donon... I loved the swing mein donon... only if they loved each other so much could they enjoy such moments

pichle paanch chapters se it's been sensual... so there has to be break na.. 😆 every chapter mein difficult to describe how they kissed 🤣

@LD

By the way Lashy, one very important question🥱...Jallu aced in exams 👏...He didn't ask anything from Jo kya😳...Or will this make an appearance in the next chapter... Maybe Jo willingly this time ☺️ as gift😉😆😆

'Wait and watch' 😛

Correction pechle chapter mein kiss nahin tha

...It was to-be kiss with

moments...Or did they kiss after the chapter ended.😕...Give us a flashback scene

😉

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Alakhnandaa

@Alakhnandaa

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

evry gl wl want a prsn lyk ur jalal in her lyf. ur writing gvs a crystal clear picture of a relationship that how it shud go.im inspired.n for ur jodha she is , a frnd , a prfct lovr .bt no where dominating nor dominatd. thanx di 4 ds update. plz update soon.👏

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Sam

@sam_0506

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Hey Lashy,

How's your migraine girl? Khayal rakhna apna. I feel so guilty sometimes after pestering you for an update. But within 2-3 days of your last update I start wondering about the next one. I guess I'm not gonna change.

Loved this one too. Especially loved their peaceful moments spent together. I'm so hooked on to this story.. you won't believe but today I've been checking IF every half an hour just to see if the udate's come!! That too on cell. Thanks tahe dil se for putting so much efforts into this.

Btw I think I know whom that unfamiliar man's voice belong to. Jodha was told to expect his call no? Am I right? If I'm then can't wait for the next part. (See I told, I'm not going to change).

sorry for all the spelling mistakes. I'm typing from cell. Will get back with proper comments later.

But love you for this story yaar.. 🤗

ps- innova is toyota's 😛

Edited by flemingo - 11 years ago