A POEM BY ME FROM JALAL'S POV

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Posted: 11 years ago
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WHY ARE THERE SO MANY RESTRICTIONS,
WHY BETWEEN US IS THIS FRICTION,
EVERY MOMENT OF MINE IS YOURS
WITH YOUR MEMORIES IN IT MY HEART STILL SORES
JUST YOU IS WHAT I WANTED
BUT THE THE PAIN OF LOOSING YOU KEEPS ME HAUNTED
SEEING YOU LEAVE MY HEART SHOUTED SILENT SCREAMS
MY EYES GETTING OVERFLOWED WITH TEARS' STREAMS
YOU ARE MINE THAT IS WHAT MY HEART BELIEVES
THE THOUGHTS OF YOU COMING BACK PROVIDES ME WITH RELIEVE...



I THINK THIS IS SUMWER VALID 4 JODHA TOO...


SO HWS IT PLS TELL ME

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Posted: 11 years ago
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niceee poem dear...i wish jodha padhe or we get our akdha back soon...
continue with more soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really nice..n sweet poem..
make it more
m sure if jo wl read this


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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it so so much...plz write more.

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