My dear SHEHENSHAH, from yours and yours only - JODHA...

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: munnirony
Lovely write up dear. I really want to hear jodha's feelings. Ok she is hurt nd angry but the fact is she loves him. So she needs to open up. Wht I feel tht jodha cant take the fact tht the person who had done so much for her had mistrusted her. Yes any man would have behaved in the same way which jalal behaved but for jodha jalal is not like any other man, he is different. Nd also she refused to return back to agra not only bcoz of her self respect but its her fear to loose jalal. She feels if once again jalal goes away from her she wont be able to tolerate. So before jalal goes away from her, she went away from him. Saturday outburst was not her real feelings its more of her fear.

True Shreya...but there needs to be a better way to show those emotions... at least, not when he's physically hurt and asked forgiveness 28498 times... so, they're making a mistake there..if it had been like the movie where he asked apology once and left then your point makes absolute sense.. 😊

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Wow lashy 👏 I love it. U describe her emotions beautifully. Lashy why aren't u the cv of JA 😭

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Antara123

@Antara123

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

hey lashy... that was just fabulous. just as i was grumbling over the fact of a boring track... i read your post and my interest has been renewed... keep it up!!!!!

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Jeevitha.P

@Jeevitha.P

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

by the way sorry for the off topic post but it is really nice to c shaymala aunty replying to your post...lovely to c her and read what she writes.

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TheIronLady

@TheIronLady

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Akka 🤗

Wonderful!

You already know I'm a fan of your writing and this piece of your work is beautiful and delicate. 😳

It is penned down beautifully and what a way with words akka.👏

And about the onscreen Jodha, I want more than this. I dont know why may be I am greedy?😛 Anyways, this letter could help cvs redeem her character, especially the part of acknowledging how big Jalal's heart is.

Edited by TheIronLady - 11 years ago

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preeti.r

@preeti.r

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Brilliant shraddha ...👏... This was so good.

I loved the following lines the most

"However, I must say for the first time in my life - pardon, my insolence - that Ammijaan has overlooked an important fact. It was not only I that brought about such changes in her son, but her son that has brought about similar changes in this young queen too! The large heart that the Shehenshah of the Sultanat possesses, that is capable of forgiving others for their faults and seeking apologies for his own, has taught me many-a-lesson in humility. "

No words to describe the justice you have done to the torture jallu has been going thru. She should realise the his value in her life .

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kundra

@kundra

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Loved it. We can only dream something like this happens. Jodha will never leave her ego behind and realize her mistakes.

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Nikki

@NikkiReed

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Lashy what a wonderful writer u are... I loved ur OS to core... 👏 the words u choose for jodha in the letter is just awesome... I can't believe ki someone can write this good... Express her feelings so well... So beautifully u described it... I wAs awestruck ki someone could write this awesome... Loved it to core... I m not able to find words to express my feelings... Bit I can surely tell I'm in love with this OS... 😳

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alapi

@alapi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Lashy a big wala hug frm my side,jst take it yar 🤗
wat a splendid job yar...its a MASTERPIECE which u hv written😊u r a fabulous writer, i actualy dont hv wrds yar seriously...u r a class👏👏👏👏
so badly i want jo to behave like this...lets see if it happens...
btw dear if in future u rit any novel or anything jst let me knw i will b honoured to read dat😊
ab tune bht badi wali hope de di h forumwasis ko...i'll try to b positive nw...
btw hv u written anything like dat during ben trak plz meko link do maine ni read kiya h