AkDha SS: Yeh Laal Ishq /Last Chapter 12b page 45/ - Page 22

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Replies in black 😊

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Waooow outstanding update surbhi ... just loved it amazing ... superb 👏
Thankyou so much varsha di 😃
Your praises boosted my morale!
the best part of this update which made me rofled cum blush was this

Jalal "Ek shart par"
"Kaisi shart?"
"Kal raat aap hamare saath apne kamre mein rahengi"
Jodha hesitated, she didn't know what to say.
"Aur agar humne mana kar diya toh?"
Jalal smirked "Toh fir aaj dadisa ko karvat lene mein zara takleef ho jayegi"

bwuahahah 🤣... my jalal is sooo cute , passionate & daring ... OMG i sooo much loved this daring answer of his ...☺️

Thankyou so much for liking this jalal, i hope he stands on your expectations 😆😳

btw when can I expect hot SR of these two love birds ...
Um i guess in next to next update, which will be the last update :)
Thanks alot for commenting and liking this one :)

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thanks..loved the new chapter...amazing...

Originally posted by: spvd

part 10
nice part...
shes know how to trouble him...
but he never gives up...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: Mansi98

Nice update👏

loved it❤️

update soon😊

n thanx for d PM😊

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Surbhii.. firstly sorry for commenting late as I was stuck up in work.. You had viral fever too, huh!! I pray and hope you are fine now. If not, get rid of that disgusting guest soon, it's no pleasure tending to unwanted guests for long 😉.
No sorry please _/\_ Thats completely fine and you're not late! I haven't updated yet. And thankyou I am good now just a little throat infection. I will soon kick these guests -_-

You wrote an update amidst all the fathoms, so I don't complain on the length this time. But definitely coming ones should be longer 😃. And you are planning to end this in 2 or 3 chapters? Why dear? I'd recommend you do it if you are too much occupied, but not under the impression that we are getting bored. I just love your writing, your Jodha and Jalal as they both are sensible and realistic. I'd always look forward to reading more of them. So, even if you end this please pick up some other track and describe it in your own style. That's a bigger relief from watching illogical characters on screen.😉
Next time i hope you won't get to complain for the length :X Yes the coming update will be the last second one of this SS, lol thankyou so much di, its nice to know about the review of my characters, i actually don't want to drag this unnecessarily i want to keep it short and sweet, as my jodha and jalal are not like one in the serials so this separation is not month long, i hope you understand. Frankly speaking i don't see JA anymore, lost habit, especially during that war sequence..so i will try to write something out of the league, not related to the script, like you are doing.
Coming to this update, WoW!! Ja and Jo nearly kissed, but missed, haan?? 😆 Translate to me that dadisa ko aaj karvat line.. I didn't understand due to my poor Hindi knowledge 😕. I loved the way Jalal tricked her to be with him next day. What's in store darling? What has the moon planned for them? A SR? 😳 If so, I'll be eagerly waiting for next chappy, it as it should be an awesome read in Surbhi style. ⭐️

Love u loads and update soon.. 🤗
Ya kissed but missed :D Now you got it right! You will see now whats in store :) Ab mai kuch nhi bolungi :X Aap mujhse sab bulwa loge :X
I hope you like it :)
Love you too! Your comment brings a smile on my face, always!

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Saumya tum jalal ho kya forum ki 🤣 hahaha har din tumhari begumo mein izaafa hota hi hoga fir toh 😉 khair tum toh mujhe rahim lagti ho! XD XD
Arey tum toh ek line bhi comment krdo mujhe chalega 😎 I am cool you know ;)
Aur ofcourse apan dost hai, yeh koi puchne waali baat hai? 😃
Ya i will definitely do scrap or pm :)
Viral toh gaya par abhi throat infection hai, cold stuff se abhi bhi mai dur hu Bas aaj tera hi naam lungi mai pura din 😆
Aur tu fikar mat kar, long comments dene ka stress main tere sar nahin daalungi, tera hi thread hai, kabhi bhi aajana 😳
*TightWalaaaHugg*

Originally posted by: princess_saumya

Yeahh u know I have 9 begums...!!! they r difficult to handle...!!!🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

OHH Main rahim wow...!!!! soo cute huin phir toh main...!!!! 🤣

Na main toh bade wale comment hi dungi tu chahe le ya na le...!!! main toh dungi..!! yo!!

OHH MADAM COOL...!!!!😆

OHH viral gya na khush reh!!!

cough and all toh chala jaegha bas saumya ke naam ki mala jap lio..!!🤣 🤣

AAPKO KISNE KAHA KI YE APKA THREAD HAI ITS ALREADY MINE AAP KYA BATAOGE MUJHE...!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

CHODO MUJHE CHODO NA...!!

SANS NI AA RAHI MUJHE ITni JOR SE GALE LAGA LIYA APNE TOH..!!

CHODO CHODO CHODO...!!!

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Cute! Haha behti ganga mein haath dho liya saumyaa tumne toh! XD
Haa thike mai le lungi comments, itna bhi senti na ho!
Hahaha thread tera, toh log ab tujhse hi updates maangenge, de diyo XD XD
Nahi chodungi boss, bulaale apni begumo ko, tujhe mujhse le jaaye! XD

Originally posted by: princess_saumya

Ohhh Main update duin...!!! Hann...!!! chal de dungi...!!! chinta mat kar haan par response kaam ho jaega dekh lio...!!🤣🤣

Bulati huin apni begum ko abhi!!

SALINI BEGUMM...>>!!!!! JALDI AIYE,,,!!

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Hahaha aap toh serious ho gayi! 😆
Salini begum :O