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kanika

@kank_dah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#201

wonderful update.jalal was curious to know nd see radha.i think both jalal nd radha have already met in past.continue soon

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akdha

@akdha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

perfect Bhavini, he remembers her eyes alone, she doesn't see him till he asked! perfect👏 both eyes met and in shock!! waiting for the next update😳

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yurimehta11

@yurimehta11

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

wow di awesome update
hats off to you
di aap itne acche idea laate kahan se ho ye ss jis tarike se start hua hai i am in love with this ss
and love this jodha her attitude is mind blowing
matlab kab humble hona hai kab attitude show karna hai aur kab logo ko unki sahi jagah dikhani hai awesome
i love the part where jodha sing song and jalal feel her pain its like two empty soul sailing in same boat
you like that good i wish you would be screenplay writer to humko kitn e acche acche show dekhne milte. i wishdi aap jodha akbar show k cvs hote to kitna accha hota
so i bow down to your talent di
love you di for writing such a beautiful ss and again get well soon

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Akanksha Sinha

@AkankshaENRIQUE

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

awesome yaar...

& thanks for pm

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Preet

@rishbala3018

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Wow Bhavini, awesome update 👏

I enjoy reading ur stories a lot, u r an awesome writer!!

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Antara123

@Antara123

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

that was AWESOME!!!!!!!! please update soon... cant wait

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aasiya49

@aasiya49

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Res di !!!! U know ap toh chamak gaye fb par !!!

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Rasika29

@Rasika29

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Awesome update 👏.

I must say you are building this suspense about Radha's past very well. 👍🏼

Waiting for next chapter...

Get well soon dear😊

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samy18

@samy18

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

res
unres
superb update di beautifully pen down loved it
so here goes a special thing for you this poem is first poem written by me and you are the first one to read i had a tough time in finding my diary where i have written this. this poem some what fits on your Jodha I hope you will like it

This world tried to fill her heart with sorrow

But she filled it with happiness.

They tried to fill hatred in her world

But she filled it with love

Her heart was crushed, her soul was hurt

A never ending war started.

Winter heated, summer chilled

But she never broke

Her strength proved, her courage proved

Power of heart won over physical

Though she stands alone, she fought alone

But she wasn't alone

and this one just written for you

Na shayari likhi na gazal

Ek kavita thi mann mein vo bhi bhul gayi

Ankhe band thi par kalam chal padi

Har tarif mein apke hunar ka zikr krte hai

Par ab labz bhi kam lagte hai

Apke khayalo ki tariff krke bhi kar nahi pate

Jante hai hum ajeeb likhte ai

Par rok kar bhi khud ko rok nahi pate

Dil cahta hai jin hathon se apne likha hai unko chum lo

Par ap itni dur ho ki kar nahi pate

Edited by samy18 - 11 years ago