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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#831

Omg ... Omg ... Omg ... Somebody pinch me harder !!!!! 😵 Finally my jalal meets jodha Itni tension mein thi , ki bas poocho mat ... Aaahhh ... !!! Kya relief mil gaya ... Yaar Mera jallu ko Kitna Rona pada ... 😭 jab us ko pata chala ki woh ek ladke ki maa hai ... Omg my heart sank ... Thinking kahi woh baccha salim toh nahi ... Lekin jaise hi aage padhate gayi ...I was feeling relieved ... Ki woh jodha ka baccha nahi hai ... Warna tumhe bahaut Sade hue tamatar , ande sab fek ke maarti bhavii 😆 ... Thank god Bhavii tune tamatar fenkne jaise kaam nahi Kiyaa 😆 Rather bahaut saari jhappi lene ka kaam kiya hai ...🤗🤗🤗 ... Senti chapter tha 😭 But I am very very very very happy ... Jalal n jodha's emotions very beautifully penned ... I was in tears ... Yaar 😭 Lekin ye Khushi ke aansoo the ...

Lekin bhaviii 😡 SR hote hote reh gaya ... Mujhe laga tha 6 din hut mein hi bahaut Adhik ahem ahem hoga (6 mahine ka bhadas nikalenge dono ) nahi ... Upar upar se niptake , latka diya ... Koi baat nahi mein wait karungi ... I want hot n wild SR ... Epic SR ... 😆

Ye precap ... ???? Kyun meri jalal ko sata rahi ho ... Ab bas bhi karo ... Pehle hi no ahem ahem N no jodha for 6 months,Bechare ki haalat pe kuch toh taras khao , ... Pakka remarraige hoga na ... Is me kuch gadbad kiya ... Ande , tamatar sab ready rahega ... 😆

Haan lekin ek baat toh maan na padhega ... The description of the two epic love birds meeting was sooo awesome to read ... Waooow ... I was on cloud 9 visualizing their great Milan ... ... You are such a great writer bhaviii ... Aur doosri baat jodha ko Kya laga ki alag language mein baat karne se jalal nahi samjhega ... 😆 Bewakoof jodha ... 😆

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#832

Mar dala sweetu. .kya update likhi hai. Kaise kiya yar. .i m flng lyk m in heaven. .m nt alive. .in some odr world. .zinda hoke phr cmmnt kr ti hu. .
Sari trishna bujha di tune aaj. .
RES :-)

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yurimehta11

@yurimehta11

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#833

unres di whole update is wow jalal injured hoke jodha k paas pahunch gaye thanks to abul mali warna pata nahi kitne aur din jodha ko dhundhta jodha k talk with kanhaji is superb jalal recognise her touch di yahi to mai chahti thi dil jeet liya aapne to aur jab aapne likha jodha ek bacche ki ammi hai to mujhe laga mugal saltnat ka waris jalal jodha ka beta aa bhi gaya but thank god its not like that and tadap tadap is mine favourite sad ho song too. aur ab ye aur bhi jyada favourite ho gaya hai rula dala aapne to aur baaki hut scene k liye I am blushing and I am waiting for remarriage of akdha jaldi karo

Edited by yurimehta11 - 11 years ago

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anamika87

@anamika87

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Posted: 11 years ago

#834

OMG u r a fab writer

story is going in a very exciting direction

plzz update sooon, don't make us wait for so long!!

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onaisa

@onaisa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#835

Jodha and Nandu are gone means ...did she leave jalal N went away

no yaar cumon plz ab undono ko saath leaaaooo

BTW it ws a nyc romantic N emotional update

thanx u sooo much fr d PM

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#836

superbly written.loved how u portrayed their pain,their misery.jalal running bare foot n falling on his knee was one of the scene I liked the most.The scene where jalal reveals he has found the culprit was not as good as others.I mean I was not satisfied with jodha's response.she had too been in pain but her happiness didn't matched the pain she has gone through.just my mere thought.I found the scene cute where he was ready to go agra ASAP for ahem! ahem!

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Antara123

@Antara123

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#837

AWESOME!!!!!!!!! please update soon... cant wait

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Rutuja Deo

@Rutuja...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Diii This pic is edited by meee😳😳

Thank u Thank u 😳😳 for using it for Ur wonderful Romantic update 👏👏 Loved it😃😃

Wow!!!!!!!! Remarriage

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tehzeeb raina hussain

@Tehzeeb89

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#839

wow!!! really no words to describe ur update!!!

awesome plus mind blowing update!!!!

the way u describe their pain was superb...

mind blowing emotion describe...

we the readers can feel their pain...

indeed u r a fantastic writer...

waiting for their remarriage hehehe

but jaldi se update karo na ( I know i'm tooo selfish... sory but ur ff is fantastic)!!!

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#840

Di, such a beautiful update! Finally, Jo-Ja ka reunion ho gaya!😃

Jodha couldn't see Jalal in such terrible pain. She didn't want to reveal herself to him but yet she put made the lep and the food for him!😭. Jallu has sixth sense and recognises her even with her veil on her face!😉. He recognised her scent as well!😳. I also liked the variation of language you gave to Jodha! Thanks to her slip up, he recognised that it was none other than Jodha in front of him!😆

Bechaara Jalal, it must have broken him terribly when he must have come to know that the woman was not Jodha! He felt really guilty for touching her as well!😭. In his guilt-stricken and injured condition, he left the place to go out in the blistering sun. No pain was greater than losing Jodha to him. He didn't care that the hot sand burnt his hand. He just wanted his Jodha by his side!😭. Also, I loved the song you have chosen! It totally suited the situation they were in. I nearly cried at their condition!😭

But then as he was about to leave the place, he saw her practicing sword fighting!😃😳. And then we got our Akdhalicious moment in the sword fight!. Once Jodha turban-veil fell off, he saw her face!😃. Phir uske baad unka romance! Hayye!. I loved the way you described their romance! So beautiful! Uske baad even their romance in the room was beautiful!

Jalal seemed so vulnerable when he told her how he had been betrayed by his own people. I like the way how Jodha consoled him with a hug. She went as far as to say that she was responsible for his relations getting ruined! But as usual Jalal told her that she was the love of his life! I loved the way he told her that he didn't recognise their true colours earlier!

Yeh Jallu bhi na kitna naughty hai!😉 Ghayal hai but phir bhi he wants to do stuff!😉😆

I can't wait for them to reach Agra! Aur remarriage bhi dekhna hai! Di jaldi update!

I just loved this one! Love you!🤗