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preeti.r

@preeti.r

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Drunk JO was too good , bechara jallu ... Kitna weightlifting karega 😆.

Do continue , don't stop here , want to know JO reaction and Jallu pulling her leg when she is awake

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

heyy dearr unres my comment on pg 7 😃😉

i enjoyed alottt 😆 tqq 🤗

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

pallavvy

i amn awestruck dumb

perfect story

perfect end

wish we had an epilogue

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kanika

@kank_dah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

it was superb.loved it.i wish u could also write more as to wat happens when jodha wakes up nd all.

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00093

@00093

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

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Edited by 00093 - 11 years ago

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mandy001

@mandy001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

superb...m like🤣..on her acts.

beautifully written...loved it to d core.

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

awww me blushing again... Res... 😭 jaldi update karungi😆 love u sweetu

ab me sirf blush nahi kar rahi hu... me giggling in the office🤣LOVE U SO MUCH... FOR THIS CHAPTER

PALLAVI I LOVE U... IS SE ACHHA KOI END NAHI HO SAKTA... YAAR TERE TALENT KA KOI JAWAB NAHI... U R NUMBER 1 WRITER... AUR ME TERI # 1 FAN ... ME GONE CRAZY 👏LOVE U JAAN

DETAIL ME COMMENT BAAD ME PAR MR GONE CRAZY...

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Pallavvi
yaar i swear...
i really enjoyed writing this TS...
i hope you guys too enjoy reading it...
love u all for ur overwhelming response...
60 likes for first chappy in just three days...wow...
thanku so much 🤗

pallu u deserve 1000 like for chapter 3 ...😃

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tehzeeb raina hussain

@Tehzeeb89

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

superb... awesome!!!!!!

mind blowing os!!!!!!!!!

love jodha in nasha...

kitni masoom lagthi hai...

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

I really have no words to describe how much I loved this chapter especially this entire three shot. This is 'going to be added to my fav/ list of stories. This entire TS made me really happy. Smile won't leave my even for a minute while reading this. I am definitely going to read this story whenever I feel low. thnak u so much for writing this. Jodha was so adorable and everyone else reactions were gr8 too. I LOVE IT. thx for pm. ur dialogues are always gr8.