SEVEN Shots~Laal Ishq~*HOLI SPCL* ESP UPDATE*SR* ON PAGE 38(COMPLETED) - Page 23

I got addicted to ur writing!! Mashaallah Kya shayri thi mein toh completely lost thi iss superly duperly update mein...I was so lost in the chapter that my mom called me twice or thrice I didn't notice...and phir vo room mein agai then I notice and I was lyk Haan mamma bolo...and my mom was lyk itni Der se awaz lga rahi hu kha khoi hui hai and I said Mujhe apki awaz sunai hi nahi di

Di frankly speaking jab jallu vo lines bhul gaya toh I was lykhey bhagwan Kya hoga is Ladke ka mirza ne itni mehnat Kari h sare set up mein aur isko lines yaad nahi ho rahi(hoti bhi kaise Apne love of life se confess karna asaan tode na hota h😉) and Mujhe Main hoon Na ka scene yaad agya jab sushmita ati h aur shahrukh usme khoya hua hota phir complete silence and suddenly vo gana gata h "chaand mera dil chandni ho Tum..."🤣

Aur jo usko ched rahi thi I was lyk Kyu pareshan kar rahi h use Kyu tadpa rahi h 😒

Uske baad jo scenes likhe h Apne vo toh amazing the...got totally lost in AKDHA land

Papers are on the way toh sirf relax karne Ke liye if log in karti hu iss se zayada relax kabhi nahi hui ya khau exicted to read further😉

Di sirf kiss nahi Hume ek beautiful si SR chahiye aur jaldi

While reading I was blushing hard to enquire what next

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so i m back with the last update of this story...

though i said earlier that it will be an epilogue but now i have decided to give u guys a special update...

it is probably the longest chapter of this story...

and consider it as my thanku gift to all my lovely readers for appreciating and loving this story so much...

you guys stole my heart with ur response...

and more than that when i shared my problem with u all...

i was so delightful to see the genuine concern my readers and friends showed for me...

i received so many pms wishing me and giving me strength to face my problem...

i couldn't reply to all of them...as my life was so messy...

i felt really sad that i have not been able to response to your reviews or pms...

so as an apology and as a thank you...

i decided to give u guys this special SR update...

i hope u will like my effort...

thank you bhavu, nannu, aayesha, megha and every reader who read this story more than once...

i m overwhelmed...

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(It was late night and Jalal and Jodha were lying on the shiny marble flooring of the terrace...with Jodha's head resting on Jalal's stretched arm that was wrapped around her back... near his shoulder... with her hairs resting on his chest...her forehead kissing his cheek...both were busy looking at the moon...It was the favorite treasure for Jodha as she always loved staring at the moon...late nights...and today it was more pleasant than ever due to the warmth of the comfortable pillow of his arm beneath her head and the sweet music of his heartbeats as her hand was placed there... Jodha spoke in a soft voice..."ye chand kitna sunder lag raha hai na shenshah?" ...Jalal instead of looking at the moon...stared over her face..."hmm...wakai...behad khubsoorat"...After some time...suddenly the clouds came in b/w and Jodha was not able to find the moon...she exclaimed in disappointment..."are ye chand kaha chala gaya??...abhi to yehi tha...?"...Jalal smiled at her innocence..."hmm...lagta hai Badal ki bahon me chup gaya sharmakar..."...with it he tightened his grip on her back...and put his another hand on Jodha's waist...turning her towards him...taking her completely in his embrace...Jodha blushed heavily..."acha...ab ye badal kaun hai...?"...She said it with her fingers playing with his necklace...and her eyes lowered...Jalal slowly lifted her chin up by his index finger...making her look in his eyes..."itni jaldi bhool gayi Jodha...hum hai aapke Badal...aur aap humara chand...humari kajri..."...winked at her...Jodha suddenly remembered the sikri trip and their disguise and asked in surprise..."aapko yaad hai abhi tak??"...Jalal kissing her forehead..."apni Jodha se judi koi bhi cheez hum kaise bhool sakte hai...aur phir wo to humari zindagi ka sabse yaadgar safar tha...use bhulna to namumkin hai humare liye...waise Jodha... aapko salim chishti sahib ke lafz yaad hai??"...Jodha's cheeks went all red due to shyness...of course she remembered...how could she ever forget those words of his...she hid her face in Jalal's chest...)

Jalal: - (teased her more...after seeing her response...) aapko nahi lagta...ke unke lafzo ko anjaam dene ke liye hume kuch karna chahiye...

(Now Jodha was not able to handle it anymore...she pushed him slightly...that made him land back on the floor...she got up swiftly and ran towards the terrace railing ...blushing heavily...in this process...unknowingly her dupatta came out of its grip...as Jalal was holding it...she noticed it only when she had reached by the terrace side...Jalal looked at her dupatta left in his hand...and smirked slightly...brushed it against his lips and got up...his eyes turned full of desire...seeing her enhancing womanly form...getting highlighted in the perfectly fitted...Mogul top and narrow skirt below...he reached near her and encircled her waist from behind...kissed on her cheek...)

Jodha: - (shyly) acha...ek baat puche aapse shenshah...??

Jalal: -(with closed eyes...lost in smelling her sweet fragrance) pehle to aap hume baar baar shenshah kehna band kijiye...bahut begana...paraya sa lagta hai...Jalal...Jalal kahiye bus...

Jodha: - acha baba...theek hai...Jalal...ab puche apni baat hum??

Jalal: - (nuzzling her neck) hmm...Jodha??

Jodha: - (with little amazement and hesitation) WO...wo kavitaye...wo sab...sachmuch aapne likha tha kya Jalal...??

Jalal: -(opened his eyes with a startle...his smile vanished instantly) kyu??...pasand nahi aayi kya aapko??

Jodha: -(putting her hands over his hands) esi baat nahi hai Jalal...hume...hume bahut pasand aayi...magar jahan tak hum aapko jante the...aap ese to nahi the...hume nahi pata tha ke aap itna acha likhte hai...aur aapki likhavat*handwriting*...wo bhi kitni sunder thi...na jaane aur kitni baaten chupakar rakhi hai aapne humse...

(Listening to Jodha's words...Jalal's grip at once loosened on her waist as he realized that she thought it was written by him...a sudden sense of guilt aroused in his heart...he broke the hug...and moved away with a depressed face...Jodha got shocked with this...she hastily moved towards him...and put her hand over his shoulder..."kya hua jalal??...humne kuch galat puch liya kya?...sach me hume aapki shayariya...aapki likhvat bahut achi lagi...hum sach keh rahe hai..."...this made jalal feel even more guilty...he had realized very well that Jodha dint know that he was an illiterate...but how would he tell this to her...what would she think of him after knowing that...she was such a proficient and well educated women...how would she react after knowing...that instead of being the almighty king...eventually her husband was an illiterate...their love had just started...he just dint want any rift among themselves...but he was not able to hide anything from her as well...so he gathered all his strength and after a minute of silence...turned around and looked at Jodha with teary eyes... Jodha got so worried seeing this sudden change of expression...she was wondering about the reason of it and was about to ask...when Jalal spoke up himself..."hume muaff kar dijiye Jodha...magar wo shayari humne nahi likhi thi..."...Jodha perplexed..."aapne nahi likhi??...matlab??...hum kuch samjhe nahi...?"...Jalal with a dull face said..."matlab...khayal to humare hi the Jodha...magar...likhavat...likhavat Mirza ki thi...us khat me bhi aur UN surago(chits) me bhi..."...Jodha with amazed and hurt expression..."devar ji ki??...magar kyu??...aap khud bhi to likh sakte the na..."...Jalal..."nahi likh sakte the hum Jodha...chahker bhi nahi likh sakte the hum..."...Jodha was confused...she asked all clueless..."lekin kyu Jalal...kyu nahi likh sakte the aap??"...Jalal finally decided that he had to tell her the truth...he spoke with his eyes lowered in shame...."kyuki...kyuki hum anpadh hai Jodha...likhna padhna nahi jante..."...Jodha's eyes wide open in shock to hear this reality...she remained silent for sometime...Just staring at him...Jalal continued...and tried to explain a bit..."hum bahut chote the Jodha...takareeban 14 saal ke...jab humare abbu ka intekaal ho gaya...humare kandho per puri saltanat ki zimmedaari thi...jungi taaleem aur siyasati hunar sikhte sikhte...padhai likhai kab piche chut gayi... pata hi nahi chala...hum sabko yehi wajah batate aaye hai aaj tak...magar sach to yehi hai...ke humara man kabhi kalam aur kitaab me laga hi nahi...bachpan se hi shamsheerbaazi, ghudsawari, teerandaazi, nishanebaazi...aur alag alag tarah ke jungi hunur sikhna hi humara junnon raha hai...hum jante hai aapko janker ajeeb lag raha hoga per..."...but before he could complete his sentence...Jodha stopped him in midways by putting her fingers on his lips...as she felt how tensed and ashamed Jalal was looking while telling her all this...she couldn't see him like that...Jalal looked up at her with a startle...Jodha smiled at him and said..."you don't need to give me any explanations Jalal...aur hume kyu ajeeb lagega bhala...hmm??"...Jalal shocked with her casual reply..."aapka shauhar ek anpadh insaan hai...kya isse koi fark nahi padta aapko jodha??"...)

Jodha:- (with a wide proud smile) kisne kaha ke humare pati anpadh hai...gyan to gyan hota hai Jalal...ab chahe wo kitabo se padhkar arjit kiya gaya ho...ya apne anubhav se sikhker...aapka anubhav hi aapki shiksha hai jalal...apitu aaj to hume aur bhi adhik garv ho raha hai aap per...ke aap dusro se kitne bhinn hai...koi kitabi gyan na hote hue bhi...bade se bade vidwaan aur budhimaan bhi aapke budhi kaushal ke samne ghutne tek dete hai...chahe baat uchit nirnay lene ki ho ya phir vaad vivaad ki...aapka ek tark saamne wale ko niruttar kar deta hai...aap to sachmuch bhgvan ki bahumulya kriti hai jalal...aur hum apne aapko bhagyashaali mante hai ke aap hume humare jivansaathi ke roop me mile...aur haan...hum jante hai ke humare pati kaun hai...wo is samagr bharat varsha ke shenshah hai aur unki budhimatta aur samajh atulniya hai...isliye khabardaar agar humare pati ko anpadh kaha to...{who told you that my husband is an illiterate??...after all knowledge is knowledge...it doesn't matter from what source it has been gained...some acquire it by reading books while some achieves it by exploring their experiences...and the experience that u have gained from the hardships you faced is the your actual education Jalal...infact...today I m feeling even more proud of you...that how different you are from others...instead of not having any theoretical knowledge...you easily make the wisest of the wisest people to bow down in front of your facts...whether it comes to take any rational decision or any sort of debate...just one argument from your side and u left the person in front go speechless...u are indeed a precious and extraordinary creature of god...and I feel immensely lucky to have you as my life partner...and yes...I do know who my husband is...he is the shenshah of this entire Hindustan and his skills and competence is incomparable...so don't u dare call my husband an illiterate...you get that!! }

(Jodha uttered the last words with so much proud and command with excitement gleaming over her face...that made Jalal chuckle a bit...but he couldn't stop his tear filled eyes to flow down his cheeks...he looked at her with utmost affection...she made him feel proud on his illiteracy...what a magician this girl is??...he wondered to herself...he cupped her face and said in a heavy voice..."acha meri baaghin saahiba...ab itni bhi taareef mat kariye ke hume guroor hone lage khud pe...tum to koi jadugarini ho Jodha...humari haar me bhi jeet ka ehsaas kara deti ho tum hume...hum shukraguzar hai us khuda ke jisne hume aap jaise humsafar se navaza hai...jo humari har taklif...humare har gum ko...khushi me badal dene ki kuvvat rakhti hai...bus isi ki to kami thi humari zindagi me...today I m feeling so complete Jodha...thank you for coming in my life...thank you for completing me...I love you Jodha...I just love you so much...Promise me...whatever the situations be...you will never leave me...I won't be able to survive without you"... Jodha...with tender care held his one hand with other wiping out his tears..."promise...until I m alive...I will be yours and yours only..." ...Jalal with little stubborn voice..."No...not only for this birth...promise me you will be there as my life partner for the next seven births and even beyond that..."...Jodha giggled...."Ok baba...promise...anything else??"...Jalal with an innocent face..."Yes...promise me that u will always held me with care...support me like this...I can't imagine myself breathing without you Jodha...I love u like crazy... "...Jodha with assuring tone...Smiling widely..."Ok...promise...next??"...)

Jalal: - (in one go...with absolutely casual voice) yes...the last one...promise me that u will give me my Salim...as soon as possible...

(Jodha was in flow...so she first dint actually realized ...what he asked...and responded unknowingly..."Ok...promise...I will give u"...then suddenly she realized...she comprehended with her eyes wide open in shock..."What?"😲...Jalal smirked widely at her...he caught hold of her waist and pulled her towards him with a jerk...she landed with a thud on his chest...Jalal whispered seductively while tickling her lips with his warm breath..."Great...so just let's start the process...then..."...and with it he pushed back her hairs from her neck...removed her nose ring to clear all the obstacles b/w their lips...and first pecked over her lips softly...then slowly increased the pace...and started kissing her vigorously...At first Jodha was not able to respond to his fire...she was so much in shock to respond that instantly...she pushed him slightly...going all breathless...Jodha while gasping hard..."you...you tricked me...so cunning you are...leave me...I won't talk to you..."...Jalal held her again..."Who is asking u to talk jaan??...just keep quiet and let me do my Job..."...and with it he again tried to kiss her but suddenly it started raining heavily...Jalal held Jodha's hand and tried to move away from there to find a shelter...but her hand slipped from his grip ...he turned at once to look at her to held her again...but what he saw...left him completely mesmerized...Jodha has now moved towards the middle of the terrace...all smiling...stretching her arms slowly to pour herself completely with the rain drops...she just loved this side of nature...it felt so heavenly to her...it has been long time...she enjoyed and played in the rain...but today she was just not able to stop herself...she felt the rain drops in her palm and played with them...giggling and laughing simultaneously...Jalal was completely taken aback by this sight...his breath got stuck in his throat...he was feeling a sudden argue to touch her...feel her...embrace her and make her his forever...he stared at her with irresistible passion in his eyes...)

BG start: - KABHI JO BADAL BARSE... (JACKPOT-2014)

KABHI JO BADAL BARSE...MAI DEKHU TUJHE AANKHEN BHARKE...

TU LAGE MUJHE PEHLI BAARISH KI DUA...

(and indeed it was the first rain of the season as the spring has just started...his legs started moving in her direction without his knowledge...with his eyes glued over her...her clothes clinging to her body like a second skin...making her look more desirable...he reached near her and observed her with his obsessive stare for a while...while Jodha caressing her hairs then sliding down her hands to her neck to relish the pleasure those rain drops were pouring on her)

TERE PEHLU ME REH LU...MAI KHUD KO PAGAL KEH LU...

TU GUM DE YA KHUSHIYA ...SEH LU SAATHIYA...

(Unknown to his presence ...and lost in enjoying the beautiful April shower...she unknowingly began to twirl around him...with Jalal's eyes rotating with every move of her...intensely fixed on her angelic wet face...unable to control himself anymore...he just held her wrist that stopped her from twirling at once and pulled her towards him with a thud...stared at her for a while ...then lifted her up at once by waist...so that providing her with a closer view of the pouring sky...Jodha put her hands on his shoulders and tilted her head up welcoming the rain drops to stream down over their bodies...Jalal started spiraling around with Jodha is his arms...trying to make it the most pleasant pouring experience for both of them...as he himself was exploring something like this for the first time...Jodha stretched her arms with her head tilted up...absorbing the heavenly rain drops to the core...After few rounds of twirling and dancing...Jalal tends to put her down...that made Jodha's stretched arms to shift over his neck...He slowly started taking her down...both of them relished the pleasure but this time it was even more intense...as their wet clothes clung to each other providing not even an air space b/w them)

KOI NAHI...TERE SIVA MERA YAHA...

MANZILEN...HAI MERI TO SAB YAHA...

(As Jodha's body came down...brushing with his...few cold drops of water fell down from Jodha's lips and reached to Jalal's lips...her soft bosoms caressed against his manly hard chest...making him go wild with desires...her arms wrapped around his neck...eyes are lost in each other's...redefining the limits of intensity of passion...Jalal licked the droplet by running his tongue over his lips...that had just fallen over them from her rosy petals...Jodha lowered her eyes...going all red with the color of blush...Jalal..Without losing his grip over her waist...squeezed it further more ...as his lips reached for hers)

MITA DE SABHI AAJA FAASLE...MAI CHAHU MUJHE MUJHSE BAANTLE...

ZARA SA MUJHME TU JHAANKLE...MAI HU KYA...

(Jodha's heartbeat ran a marathon...and she broke apart...not able to bear this pleasure...Jalal pulled her again and this time...lifted her up in his arms and started moving...Jodha...not able to look at him...just hid her face in his manly chest...)

OOO...HEY...OOO...Hey...yaaa...

(He descended down the stairs and made his way towards his chambers...all the while staring at Jodha...and their bodies drenching in the heavenly rain...amidst of all the huge thundering sounds...and lightening...raining in a full moon night was a very rare thing to happen those days...and really the atmosphere around had turned stormy yet strangely considerate...esp. for both of them ...it was looking like pearl drops are showering down from the glistering sky with the full moon playing hide and seek with the clouds...finally they reached to their destination i.e. Jalal's room...from where this beautiful surprise has started...Jalal headed towards the washroom with Jodha in his arms...He was so lost in her eyes that he dint realize where he was heading...After reaching up to there...and finding no place to move further...he put her down...still gazing at her...As soon as ...he put her down...Jodha ran towards the bathtub as the intoxicating proximity was literally killing her)

Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq (x2)

Ishq-ishq, Ishq-ishq..

(Instead of being drenched from head to toe...still her body was warming up due to those unusual sensations running down her spine...and the same case was with Jalal...The droplets of sunken water were literally evaporating out their bodies due to the liquid of hot passion taking over them...it seemed Jalal was yet not satisfied with the pouring session...he wanted to feel her wet skin over his...he looked at Jodha...whose back was facing him as she was sitting at the edge of the bathtub...breathing a little hard...he first removed his diamond necklace...then opened the doris of his Jama...he removed it and threw it aside...and started moving towards her...sensing this...her heartbeats increased even more...now even Jalal could listen to her restless heart beats...he slowly came from behind and sat beside her...)

Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa
Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa
Raha na main phir apne jaisa
Ho raha na main phir apne jaisa

(Jodha still couldn't gather enough courage to face him so she remained still at her position...he shifted towards her slightly...as soon as his bare chest touched her back...she realized in a flick of second that he was topless...as her back felt like burning due to the touch...she clutched the piece of cloth at her skirt...held it really tight...Jalal slowly raised his hand...picked a palm full of water and poured it over her neck...removing her jet black hairs at front...pulled the string of her necklace and it fell down...Jodha breathed heavily...and a light moan escaped her lips as he literally licked the water...he just sprinkled over her neck...he smirked and traced his finger at the side of her ears...removed her earrings...sucked the dripping water from her earlobes)

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq (x3)

Mera naam, Tera naam
Mera naam ISHQ!

Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq (x2)

Ishq-ishq, Ishq-ishq

(Jodha smiled a bit as this tickled her...suddenly he was feeling so thirsty...thirsty for love...thirsty for her response...he turned Jodha's face at side towards him with his index finger...and said sensually...."kiss me Jodha...please kiss me"...Jodha not able to say or do anything...just tried to run out as this sweet torture was giving her unbearable sensations...Jalal followed her and next moment...pinned her to the wall..."don't make me suffer like this jaan...make me yours please..."...Jodha breathed really heavily...Jalal wanted to know what was stopping her...he cupped her face with love..."what happened Jodha??...aren't you ready yet??...you don't need to worry about anything...if you don't want this to happen tonight...you can tell me...I have always respected your wish...and will continue to do so...because that is the most important thing for me...I will do anything...but can never force you for something...please look at me Jodha..."...Jodha slowly opened her eyes and peeped in his...which were full of love and commitment...Jalal couldn't read her eyes this time...as they seemed a bit confused rather expressionless...Though it was impossible for him to control his desires...but yet he decided to do that for her wish...as he was not able to understand her expressions...while Jodha was so touched with his concern and affection that she couldn't gather enough expressions to show her happiness...Jalal at once loosened his grip and tends to move back...when Jodha held his shoulders and pulled him back...and fulfilled his request...started responding back to his passion...kissed him hard on his lips...while Jalal just enjoyed her love...her moves...and surrendered his lips to hers...jodha pulled him even more closer almost crushing her body to him...running her fingers over her bare upper body..."so soft yet so hot"😉...she thought..."MY TIGRESS"😆...Jalal too smirked in his thoughts while enjoying her passion...Suddenly she realized what she was doing...and felling extremely shy at her tactics...she tried to move away but Jalal held her wrist...flipped her and wrapped her in his arm...capturing her neck with it...intertwined his hand with hers...and pressed it slightly)

Apna naam badal dun
Ya tera naam chhupa lun
Ya chhod ke saari aag
Main vairaag utha lun

(Jodha breathed really hard...Jalal could sense the movement of her chest that was growing up and down...beneath his arm...and her heart beats going abnormal...but he was not going to stop here...he slowly slid his other arm on her petite waist...reaching for the strings present at the side of her mogul top...as it was a mogul attire...it had three strings located at the side...he swiftly slid his hand up...opening the one located at the top most over her left Brest...he untied it while squeezing their intertwined hands)

Bas ek rahe mera kaam ishq
Mera kaam ishq
Mera kaam ishq

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq
Mera naam, Tera naam
Mera naam ISHQ!

(Jodha moaned lightly...he moved his hand little down...reaching for the second string...he pecked over her shoulder...and opened it too...now due to this her cleavage got uncovered completely...while reaching for the last dori...he left her hand...and entered it inside her top...over her revealed cleavage...this time Jodha moaned loud enough to be heard...he caressed her bosoms with his soft touch...like observing how perfectly curved they were...Jodha was breathing uncontrollably...the burning touch of his hands over her sensual spot...caused heavy goose bumps over her body..."You are so beautiful...more than any Greek goddess..."...he whispered seductively in her ears...and while saying this...he untied the last string too...and began to undress her top...pulling it out from her shoulders...pushing it down her arms...along with her golden bangles that kept on falling on the ground...giving a constant tinkling sound as they hit the floor)

Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq (x2)

(Jodha had still her back facing him...so her front body was still unseen by him...he turned her towards him...and was speechless by seeing the sight in front of him...he had never seen such a beauty...her slim...smooth...shiny skin... Igniting in him the ocean of desires...but he dint want to go fast...he wanted to enjoy every moment of their love...he was not in a hurry at all...he just wanted to feel her to the extreme before getting into her...his hands reached for her lower dress...as he unzipped it and before it could fall down completely...he covered her with a white cloth...wrapped it around her body...and pinned it to her shoulder...Jodha opened her eyes in astonishment...Jalal looked at her and with intense whisper said..."I promise to u jaan...I will make it the best pleasure experience for u tonight...the most memorable moment of our life...that will retain with us till eternity..."...Jodha blushed heavily...he lifted her up and headed towards the bathtub...Jodha had no idea...what he was going to do...and she dint want to know either... she just want to take pleasure in his pleasure...Jalal got inside the bathtub...and sank into the cold water with Jodha in his arms...to cool down the hot waves of passion that were warming their bodies)

Ye kaali raat jakad lun
Ye thanda chand pakad lun (x2)

(as he came out Jodha was beneath him...the serene water covered with rose petals adorning their togetherness with it...Jalal made her sit in the bathtub...taking the support of the side wall behind...Jodha stretched her arms...over the marble railing of the bathtub...blushing all the while...she couldn't express how much she was enjoying this new experience of being loved by someone...Jalal took some saffron paste and started applying it on her hand...then covering her entire arm...approaching towards her shoulder...he rubbed his hand over her shoulders and upper chest...drawing random patterns...caressing her soft skin...making her all red with the color of saffron)

Din-raat ke bairi bhed ka
Rukh mod ke main rakh dun

(Jodha just breathed her heart out...enjoying every bit of his intriguing touch...Jalal covered her other arm also...then cupped her breasts...licked them...massaged them but as they were under water...the paste dint seem to work on it...Jalal ran his hands along with her figure...like a sculptor will do while relishing his creation...and enhancing it...leaving passionate smooches all along...the cloth over her body due to soaking the water have now become transparent...clinging to her body...revealing her body partially to him...he smirked at her curves knowingly... ...Jodha just moaned and moaned...she was loving this sweetest torture to the extreme...she was not in a condition to reciprocate...he then descended over her...she could feel his body weight coming over her completely...he again took palm full of water and started wiping the saffron paste off her body...while pouring the water over her arms...he kept on sliding his hand to wash the paste out...licking and sucking her skin simultaneously...)

Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa
Raha na main phir apne jaisa
Raha na main phir apne jaisa

(Jodha's breathing had become really hard now...and she had started shivering uncontrollably too...sensing this Jalal decided to reduce the torture...seeing her literally suffering in pleasure...his lips reached for hers...he smooched them...bite them...and started kissing the life out of them...his hungry lips ran around her neck from one side to another...exploring wildly her sensitive spots...Jodha's hands shifted towards his locks...she could only moan his name at that moment..."Jalal..."...in a seductive whisper...Jalal smirked and looked up in her eyes that were full of passion and lust...he stroked her waist...and again dipped their bodies inside the water...this time with...Jodha on top of him as he flipped just in time...before sinking in)

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq (x3)

Mera naam, Tera naam
Mera naam ISHQ!

(even the water coming over their eyes...couldn't stop their eyes to stare in each other...he kissed her ferociously...she responded back with equal vigor...squeezing his wet body with her nails...Now it was just beyond impossible for Jalal to control himself for making their bodies one...He just came out of the water and picked her up in his arms...got out of the bath tub...capturing her delicious lips with his again...headed towards the bedroom...water dripping down from their bodies...but they were careless about it...as they were busy...kissing the life out of each other lips...Jalal reached near the bed and in no time placed her over it...he covered her body completely with his...still looking in her eyes...with droplets of water making their way from his hairs to her face...he narrowed his eyes...asking for the permission...Jodha blushed in anticipation and turned to the other side...all smiling away...Jalal knew that he had her consent...he raised his hand and began to unpin the bathing cloth from her shoulder...Jodha quickly placed her hand over his...realizing the sweet fear that she felt now...but Jalal was adamant...he was not left with the strength to control himself anymore...he removed her hand and held it against her belly...and with other hand unpinned the cloth...as he started unwrapping the cloth...she rolled in his arm as an automatic response...Jalal looked at her angelic face...she had closed her eyes tightly and was trembling really hard...Jalal understood her state in no time...that she must be scared as it was her first time...he wanted to assure her before proceeding further...he requested her to look in his eyes...No response from her...she kept on shivering...Jalal again pleaded...this time with a peck over her lips...Jodha slowly opened her eyes...and looked in his...Jalal cupped her face in his hands and said in an assuring tone..."don't you trust me Jodha??"...Jodha with teary eyes..."I do...jalal..."..."then you need not to be scared...I love you so much Jodha...I can never imagine even in my dreams...of you getting hurt...I will never do anything that give you pain..."...Jodha wrapped her arms around his neck..."I know my love...I love you too...and I...I too...want to...want to...complete our marriage...but...but I don't know...what...what am I supposed to do??..."...Jalal giggled at her innocence...."you don't need to do anything Jaan...Don't worry...I will teach you...as I have enough experience for it..."...Jodha frowned at him...and moved her face away...Jalal turned her face to him and whispered while touching her lips..."But I never felt like what I m feeling today Jodha...because I have never been in love before...and that's the only difference...I have spent many nights with many women...but never made love to any one...but today I will do that...with the only women I love... "...and with it he removed her cloths completely and slipped down his lower garment too...and entered her with a jerk with heavy push...Jodha moaned more loudly than ever...she dig her nails deep in his bare back...Jalal kept on thrusting into her...it was such a divine experience for him...the feeling of being one with her...it was so different...he too felt as if he was loving someone for the first time...and indeed ...as before it was just about lust...but today it was about love...pure passionate love...After reaching the ultimate peak of their pleasure...finally both of them collapsed in each other's arms...and spent the rest of their night like this only...as the storm of their passion passed away...it stopped raining outside too...as the nature too willing to relax seeing these love birds resting in each other's embrace...contently with a satisfied feeling inside their hearts...and that is how...At that stormy beautiful night...Jalal and Jodha finally reached to the destination of their ishq...their laal ishq...that were started with color of blood i.e. RED and now ended too with the color of love i.e. RED ...their souls...their bodies...their love...got immersed within themselves... .And the time stood still... )

Ye laal ishq...Ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq...Ye bair ishq

Ye laal ishq...Ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq...Ye bair ishq

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