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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Wow..
Its really great.
Amazing and fabulous update.
Jodha finally back...
Jalal walks the 1000 stairs of the Devi Maa temple to ask for Jodha's Life.
Jalal in love with Jodha.
Precap is interesting.
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.

Thakss a lot dear for ur appreciation...
Updating the next part in few minutes...
Hope u like it too... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Angel-

Oh my, this has been written beautifully. Do continue soon. Love all the parts! x 👏

Thanq u so much dear... :)
Hope u loved the next part updating in few minutes...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Thanq u soo much guys for your appreciation...
Updating the next part
Enjoy...
Words of his guard was echoing in his ears as if he got the best news of his life...
He immediately ran towards the exit of the temple to reach his palace and to meet the love of his life nd watch her smiling face which gives immense peace to his heart...
His heart was racing like hell to see his jodha and in his hurry he fell from the stairs and was attacked by an sharp and edgy stone on his forehead,due to this he start to bleed...
In jodha's chamber
She suddenly got up from her sleep and shout sehenshah and her eyes have tears of fear,fear of losing the most precious person of her life...
She try to get up from the bed to reach her sehenshah as her inner conscience was telling her that something is wrong, her husband was not fine he was in immense pain as she was feeling pain in her heart which now only beats for him only...
With collecting all her strength she got up from the bed..
As she was leaving her chamber moti comes there and stops her by saying kaha ja rhi ho jodha...
Tumhari halat abhi achi nhi hai tum bhahut kamzor ho jodha yahi aram karo...
She was not ready to listen anything even grom her best friend and was walking out straight from her chamber...
She was running like a mad wife to reach her husband who needs her...
She fell 2-3 times on the ground due to her weakness but always gather her all strength to reach his hubby..
She found him every where but he was no where to be seen...
She saw mughal guards and ask them sehenshah kaha hai...
Guards reply ji huzur woh waha devi maa ke mandir mein hai...
Jodha could not belive what she just hear...
And thinks sehenshah woh bhi mandir mein..
She ran towads the temple as fast as she can...
On the stairs...
Jallal was in semi consious state due to unbearable pain he was feeling from swelling on his feets and then his sudden fall from the stairs...
His body quit there to move further but his heart was not ready to quit because he want to see his wife he was craving to see her angelic face...
His soul was waiting to meet his soul mate to meet his jodha...
By gathering all his love for jodha he stood up and again started to come down...
It seems like an never ending journey for both of them...
He was coming down fast to meet her and she was going up fast to see him fine...
The curosity of meeting each other gained with every step they take...
Jodha was stunned as she saw drops of blood on every stair... Her heart was paining...
She understands what he has done for her only to save her...
And finally they are there...
There was a stand still for both of them...
It feels like everything was so beautiful when they both see each other...
Jallal could not belive that he was seeing his jodha in front of him... She was looking very pale and weak but still she manage to look beautifull...
A relaxing smile comes on his lips but it fades soon as she saw tears in her eyes...
On the other side jodha was heart broken by seeing his condition..
His forhead was bleeding his foots were swelled and bleeding like hell...
She ran to him very fast and hug him very very tight...
As if she is not ready to leave him not only for a second...
Jallal could not believe what is happening...
His heart was racing with an unmeasureable speed...
He felt like all his pain has gone now...
It was only and only pleasure...
His whole life was hugging him very tight right now...
Keeping his thoughts aside...
He hugged her back and put his one hand on her head...
Then the silence break between them...
Jallal saya pata hai jodha begum hum kitna dar gae the...hum hume samajh hi nhi aa rha tha ki hum kya kare... Hakim sahiba bhi haar man chuki thi tumhari jism jese aag ki taraf bukhar se jal raha tha or tum upar unki dawaio ka bhi koi asar nhi ho rha tha... Hamari toh jese saasein hi tham si gai thi jodha apko yun behosh or bejaan dekh ke... Par hume vishwas tha hume vishwas tha ki ap hume ese beech rah mein chor kar nhi ja sakti thi... Hum jante the ki ap aaengi laut ke hamare pas zarur aaengi...
Then he stops suddenly and hear her sobs...
He trys to see her but jodha was not ready to leave him to break the hug... She feels most secure and safe in his manly arms...
Jallal ceassed her back and said kya hua jodha begum ap ese ro kyo rahi hai jodha... Bataiye na jodha... Hum apko ese nhi dekh sakte jodha begum kuch toh kahiye...
She finally breaks the hug and said yeh kya kia sehnshah apne... Apni halat dekhiye kya bana di hai apne... Hume bachane ke liye apne,apne pran kyo sankat mein dale... Apse zada hum dar gae the apko yuh dekh ke... Sehenshah ap hamare liye toh apna dhayan rakhiye... Puri praja apse itna prem karti hai unke liye toh apna dhayan rakhte ap...
Just then he stops her in middle and asks or ap jodha begum?
Jodha was shocked by hearing this but couldn't help herself to blush hard...
Just then she saw his injuries and hold his hand to make him sit on the stair... And she sits on the next stair to heal all his wounds...
She take her dupatta and tear it apart in two... And from one part she cleans all his wonds which he has on his feets and forhead... Then from the other part she tear another 3 pieces and cover his both feets and forehead... He was watching her without any blink and was super happy toh see her caring for him...
Being in pain he said thanks to his wounds so that he was able to see the caring side of his wife...
Jodha in her hurry to cure his wounds forgot that she was not wearing her duppata... She was only wearing her long beautiful red skirt and choli...
Jalla was so lost in her caring nature that he also didnot notice this...
But the suddenly she stand up and turn her back towards him and cross her hands towards her breasts and was feeling dam shy...
Precap - romance blooming between jallal and jodha...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww... sweet update do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: No_more_ghrina

awww... sweet update do continue

thankss dear.. will update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
thankss alapi dear..
will update soon...
Edited by sunshine17 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
thanq u guyz for liking...
here is the next chapter...
jallal saw that jodha was not comfortable as she wrap her dupatta on his wounds... but he was so mesmerised with her beauty.. her bare back was challenging him to control himself... but it was getting near to difficult and then to impossible with each passing second... but he knows from inside that the little bond which started to build between them will reach to an end forever if he dares to touch her without her approval.. so by controlling all his emotions he remove his coat and cover her from her back so that she can feel secure...
jodha was shocked and touched by his gesture... he will always manage to surprise her... she turns towards jalla and said shukriya sehenshah with soft smile n her lips... jallal said yeh hamara farz hai jodha begum.. ab chaliye jodha begum mehal mein sab pareshan ho rhe honge... jodha nods her head..
they started to get down from the stairs.. but both their hearts are talking...
jallal said kash jodha begum hum apko bata sakte ki hamare dil mein apke liye kya ehsas hai.. woh ankahe ehsas allah kare hum jald hi bata pae apko.. fir chahe apka jo bhi faisla ho hume manjur hoga...
jodha said hum jante hai sehenshah apke dil mein kya ehsas hai hamare liye... par hum bhi hamare ankahe ehsaso ke bare mein apko apke izhaar ke baad bataenge.. hum tabhi apko batenge ki hum apse kitna prem karte hai... ki hum apna sara jeevan sirf apke sath bitana chahte hai...
and with this thought she smile.. jallal saw this from corner of his eyes and asked kya hua jodha begum ap muskura kyo rahi hai...
jodha scared a bit as she know shw cant tell the truth... the reason behind her smile was only and only him...
but she said ese hi sehenshah bas apko yuh hamara dhayan rakhta hua soch ke hasi aa gai... jallal knew from her expressions that she is lying but he know her ziddi begum so thought of asking it later and said mischievously hum muamle ki tehkikat jodha begum apse mehal mein jake karenge ap apne sauhar se jhuth nhi bol sakti and laughed loudly...
jodha was lost in his giggling and smiling as he looks like an child while laughing with his pure heart...
the stairs ome to an end as they reach to the last step when jalla said apke sath waqt beet-te pata hi nhi chalta jodha begum.. kash yeh sidhiya thodi or hoti...
jodha blushed and smile with his little try of flirting with her... she knows he do everything only to make her realise the love he has for her...
they reached to the exit of the temple...
jodha turns towards the temple and fold her hands by closing hr eyes for praying seeing jodha doing so jallal do th same...
jodha said hey devi maa hum apka jitna shukriyada kare kam hai ki apne hume sehenshah jesa pati dia... bus hum jalad se jalad unse apne ehsaso ke bare mein kehna chahte hai or ek nayi shuruvat karna chahte hai unke sath ek khushi ke sath...
jallal said apn hume jodha begum deke sab de dia devi maa bas jo jodha begum ne manga ho usse pura kar dijiye...
jodha opens her eyes first and smiled by seeing him praying in the same way as she was doing and was lost in his handsome looks.. he always attracted her towards him..
jallal opens his eyes and see the angelic beauty in front of him...
before he could say anything atgah sahib came between and asked ap dono theek toh hai na sehenshah and was shocked to see jodha wearing jallal's coat but understands as soon as he saw jodha's duppata on jallal wounds...
he said chaliye sehenshah sab apka mehal mein intzar kar rhe hai...
he said ap chaliye atgah sahib hum ate hai jodha begum ke sath...he said jo hukum sehenshah...
there was no palki for jodha and only one horse for both of them...
jallal said aaiye jodha begum ap ispe baith jaiye hum apke sath sath chalte hai...
she said nhi sehenshah apke paro mein abhi jakaham hai ap baithiye hum apke sath sath chalte hai...
nhi jodha begum ap bhahut kamzor hai ap baithiye chup chap...
jodha with hesitation said chaliye hum dono hi baith jae hai r mehal chalte hai...
precap- roamnce glooming.. love is in the air...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
nice update yar..plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: alapi

nice update yar..plz continue soon

Thanq u dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Thanks a lot...

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