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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: arvifan1

Wow the story is awesome...Loved it...totally new concept and amazing story 😳


please update soon 😊

and thanks for the pm


thank u 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Vow I Sammy... U rock sweet heart..👏👏👏 I loved all the twist in the story... the way describe each situation...dialogues are superb!!!! Everytime with new chapters... this story is getting more and more interesting... can't wait for more...😃 update soon !!!


thak u didu some more twist are on the way😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wednesday ko update hogi😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 5

Hazaro zajbaat is chote se dil mein umad pade

Kuch cah ke bhi hum na keh paye

Kuch cah ke bhi hum na sun paye

At Jodha's home

Now will u please tell me why u broke this deal asked really very angry Bharmal. Scared Jodha: Dad I m telling u and she narrated whole talk which she had on phone.

Really disappointing Jodha at least u can discuss this with me once before breaking the deal. They are not at fault whatever had happened was the conspiracy of someone and they are also sufferer not fraud u have done a big mistake Jodha Now I have correct this mistake and according to agreement jo bhi is deal ko bina kisi solid reason ke tode ga use samne wale ki condition pe agree krna hoga so now I have to agree on their condition

But Dad just listen to me please said Jodha with sadness

No Jodha end this here and let me correct the things

Bharmal called Surya and asked him to arrange meeting again as soon as possible

Ok Mr. Bharmal I will try and inform u said Surya.

Both hearts were busy fighting with their feelings

At Jalal's place

Jalal was working on his laptop and making some calls

He heard a knock at his door

Surya u don't need to be formal come in said Jalal without looking at Surya.

Jalal Mr. Bharmal wants to meet u again, I know u don't want to meet him but u should meet him

Listening after Surya's words an evil smirk crept on Jalal's face

Ya Surya I should meet him u arrange meeting at Sharma enterprises I will go to meet him. His clever mind has planned all the things.

Jalal's self talk

Be ready Miss Jodha u will have to pay for my insult and my company insult. I will make your life worst than hell.

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Whole sharma family was sitting at dinning table and eating silently.

This silence was interrupted by Bharmal , Jodha tomorrow we are going to sign the deal and this time I don't want any mess ok they are coming for meeting so u must be present there as ur signature is also required.

Unhappily she agreed with the condition that he will not disclose her real identity and walked toward her bedroom after dinner.

She tried to sleep but her thoughts about him doesn't allow her to sleep his eyes, his smile, his voice and his face

Yaadon mein tujhko rakhun
Baatein bhi teri karoon
Itna deewana hoon tera
Ho ho raaton mein jaaga karoon
Din bhar bhatakta rahoon
Main toh yahaan se bas wahaan

I hate u Jalal just hate u my Dad trusts u but I dnt and I will not let u spoil my company u just wait and watch.

This morning Jodha wake up earlier then others and leaving a note on dinning table she moved out.

Her car stopped at hospital. It was her routine whenever she faces any problem taking big decision she comes there. She reached at private room of hospital and slowly opened the door. Scene there was usual scene of hospital, room was full of machine required to help a patient survive but the love and sadness in Jodha's eyes was not usual. So much love for stranger person is rarely seen.

She seated on stool beside patients bed. Tears started flowing from her eyes.

Uncle I know u can listen so stop acting and just get up. I know u are tired from sleeping at one place so just get up don't u want to see this world again. Come on don't be so lazy. She felt someone's hands on her shoulder. Aunty aap vo toh mein bs aise hi uncle se baat kr rahi thi.

I know Jodha how much u love your uncle and how eagerly u want him to wake but now I have lost all the hope and just leaved all the things on god with tears in eyes said the lady

No Aunty God doesn't exists agar hote toh jo uncle ke sath hua vo kabhi na hota. She took the blessings from both and started to leave and stopped in middle and said please don't tell Dad that I came here.

Lady nodded with assurance.

At Sharma enterprises

Mr. Bharmal welcomed Jalal and they moved toward conference room but Jalal eyes was finding someone else he when he was not able to control more he asked to Bharmal, where is your PA.

Bharmal replied with tensed look she is in her cabin. Oh ok said Jalal smiling evilly his mind.

They proceeded for meeting. Bharmal asked Jalal about any condition he wants to put. Jalal felt like his prey is going to fall in his trap without any much effort. He said I want Jodha . Mr. Bharmal and Surya was shocked with his words and seeing thim like this Jalal added mera matlb hai I want your PA to work with me it's a request if u don't mind as u know we are running at loss so we have shortage of good employees and I think Jodha is hardworking employee. Mr. Bharmal was still in shock but controlling himself he said, its not possible because...

But before Bharmal can say further Jodha cut him while entering the conference room, "I am ready to work under Mr. Jalal".

Jalal was amazed with these sudden words of Jodha. He was shocked how this girl can agree so easily is there something going in her mind. Whatever but its good for me I don't have to work much to get her ready. I will make sure that your every day becomes your worst day of life he talked in his mind.

I know Mr.fraud what are your intention but I m no less then u, one day u will regret for this for making me work under u said Jodha in her mind

Both of them gave each other an evil smirk.

But Bharmal was not happy with all this, he asked Jodha to come with him as he wants to talk about something important.

In Bharmal's cabin

Jodha, why u said yes, how u can work under him when u are 51% share holder and owner of this company. Kab tak tum yeh sach chupa paogi moreover your signatures are required for this deal so your identity will be disclosed let me tell him.

No Dad, please don't tell him. Its good opportunity for me to learn with different people and about the matter of signature and identity leave it on me I will handle it.

But Jodha . Dad now I m grown up so please let me live my life in my own way said a stubborn Jodha.

Accha ok said Bharmal accepting his defeat.

Both of them again reached to conference room.

Bharmal told Jalal we are ready to sign this deal and Miss. Jodha is also ready to work with you. Jalal was very happy for his first win but he rarely knows what is going in Jodha's mind.

Jodha had already sign the paper in Bharmal's cabin and now Bharmal has also sign. They handed the file to Jalal but Jodha's heart came to her mouth when Jalal started to open the file she was afraid if Jalal will see her signature then the truth will be definitely

Come out so she got an idea, Mr. Jalal as I m going to join your company so I have right to know on which post you are appointing me and what will be my salary she said this to distract Jalal's mind and it really worked. Jalal handed the file to Surya and looked at Jodha and said, have patience Miss. Jodha, Surya will tell u everything and u will have to join office from tomorrow.

Though they hated each other but destiny is busy in bringing them close.

Surya requested Bharmal to come with him for few more formalities. So now Jodha and Jalal were alone there.

Jodha in her mind: this is the perfect time to ask him about his intention. But she was not able say a single as when she looked at him she found that he was looking continuously at her.

Both were lost in each others eyes.



Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare
Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhaara
Taj tumhara

Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare
Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhaara
Taj tumhara
Suno na sangmarmar ki yeh minaare

Bin tere maddham maddham
bhi chal rahi thi dhadkan
Jab se mile tum humein
Aanchal se tere bandhe
Dil ud raha hai

Suno na aasmaano ke yeh sitaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare


Just then Bhramal and surya came there.

Everything is completed Jalal lets go said Surya breaking their eye lock.

Ya lets go Surya and they made there way towards exits

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Jalal's POV

I want to take revenge from her. I want to hate her but whenever she is near to me I don't know what happens to me. She attracts me towards her like magnet. I feel like I m spell bound my words don't support my action.

Whatever I will not spare her; she will pay for my insult I have control my thoughts.

Jodha's POV

He was the person of my dream but dream never comes true life is not so fair always. I know what he is doing and his intention also but I m not able to hate him my heart don't believe that he can be bad.

But truth is truth Jodha.

Next day at Jalal's company

Jalal's eyes were stuck at beauty in pink dress. For a minute he has forgotten everything. Jodha was standing infront of him in formal dress baby pink shirt and trouser (dnt mind about dress color as I have very bad taste) , her long hairs, her beautiful big blue eyes,

But he controlled himself and said, yes come in.

Go to Surya he will tell u everything he said to Jodha without looking at her. And smiled evilly in his mind

Ok! Said Jodha and she goes to Surya's cabin giving an angry look to Jalal.

She knocked at the door.

Come inside Jodha said Surya.

Jodha entered in cabin and greeted Surya.

Surya told her all the instruction and her salary. And one more things, Jodha don't take the words of Jalal on your heart sometimes he become arrogant. These words are really strange for Jodha as it was her first day and a good friend of Jalal is warning her but more shock is on way as now what Surya is going to say is not so easy to accept.

Precap: A new entry in life of Jodha and Jalal

What do you think about this uncle and aunty who are they

Guess ...

If not u will know it soon

Thanks for reading this another faltu update by me please hit like and comment as they are the only way of my survival while writing

Ise pehle sade ande pade bhagooo ...

Edited by samy18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
superb samy

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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Nice teaser. Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Vow Interesting... Who is this UNCLE AND AUNT 😕 Suspense ... Update karo Jaldi se...LOVE U SWEETU😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
wow awesome FF👏
read all parts in one go
continue soon and pm me when u update
Edited by sw123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
SUPEEERB YAAR ...JALDI UPDATE DEDO 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
PLEASE UPDATE CHAPTER😛 5 AND DO PM ME, YOU ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER. 😛

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