~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr! - Page 88

Originally posted by: flemingo

Btw, have a wonderful holiday !! Don't worry about us. Even if you post next part later than usual it's ok. We'll wait patiently. 😭
PS - It is all lie. I won't be able to wait patiently. But it's ok. Take your time sweety. Family first.

Ohh I hate that feeling that something wrong is about to happen or has happened. u feel so restless, ur heartbeats increase and u feel suffocated and cannot concentrate on anything and want to get rid of it somehow and get it over with.

I know.. I HATE that feeling too

It must be hard for her not as much as Jalal but to know when, what and how to support jalal and yet give space when he needs it.

Yes.. sometimes personal tragedy is just as difficult on the people you love as it is on you yourself!

Ups and downs of hope is worse than to know once and for all.

Its horrible Ayesha.. with my mausi, my mother underwent the same..sadly, she passed away due to cancer a year ago...

Awww- my poor Jalal and robbie . u know because of my fear of dogs, i don't get really sentimental about dogs but robbie and his death did touch me and felt emotional especially after reading italicized part.

That bit was the toughest for me to write too.. I got a bit emotional when I wrote that bit.. how it must be for the actual people who do take the decision of letting their loved ones go..

Jodha is very supportive and assuring.

Yes... she's been an absolute darling..

OMG, poor Jalal- that's the biggest shock someone can have .😭WHAT?😲 he was murdered? Shraddha kitne shocks dogi tum I really do not know he dealt with all this..this is too much to handle for a young boy.

For a second, her own dad's face came to mind. HIS misfortune made her realize how fortunate SHE was to still have her father in her life. The anguish she'd kept under control so long started resurfacing. Tears gushed down her cheeks.

Please tell me she is not going to start moving away from him slowly bec of italicized part above.😕

No... after all that he's said to her.. all the more reason, she wouldn't want to leave his side.. her family is an issue they both know is going to create issues in future and they both have to fight it out together.. but, then that's the crux of the story..

Robbie was just not a pet and friend but his kid brothr, companion and confidant...'Now do you understand why I'd said I don't deal with the loss of a loved one very well?'make perfectly sense why he said that day.

True...

Despite all this, you've grown up to become such a dignified man...' This is amazing. I completely agree with Jodha. just for my jalal, ❤️ he could have gone stray or into depressions and what not but he became Jalal, all-in-one- mr.right.

Exactly!.. ...I'm super proud of him too...

I thought for a sec, this was going to scare him away that he is getting atatched to Jodha like he was to robbie and will build wall around him but glad he proved me wrong.

While one half of him had built a wall around himself.. there is still the fact that he is a practical man.. and as a small boy.. as a 12 year old if a pet could bring him out of the depression..then as a more matured 24 year old, the love of his life can surely get him out of desolation...😃 he's never going to let go of her as far as he can...

'Arre kyaa WHY' she frowned 'It's something like our sigma formulas na...' she paused 'MY well-being = Sum total of YOUR (health + happiness + love + success) / timescales...'

awww- so cute, Jodha. I am loving this Jodha too- she has been absolutely fantastic while supporting Jalal emotionally so for u jodha 👏

I am so glad my readers liked this formula.. I was hoping it didn't come across as too cheesy.. but, she needed to do something say something... and his silly 'Why?' question flustered her a bit... besides, she's an accounts/stats student so that was the first thing that came to her mind 😆

A kiss - really?😊

A peck yup😳

So jodha is debating if to go for a kiss,I knew she won't be all ready but glad did not jerk him off. see if it was not for the underlined sentence, it would have been more for Jalal's sake,she was letting him kiss but @underlined- tells that she wanted it too bec of love seen in his eyes for her.

Yes... she wasn't sure at first..😳 but really, how could she say NO to Jalal..

Reading her positive reactions, he took the lead and tenderly went ahead to delve into their first proper kiss. Just as she let out an exhilarated sigh, their lips retouched - the moment being a cathartic one for him. Her drying tears that swept off on his cheeks emotionally liberated him - it felt as though she'd shed the tears that he couldn't shed for himself. The fervent heat of her lips had just given his colder ones some much needed warmth. The simmering intensity in her gasps had breathed life into his dull spirits.

This is by far the best description of kiss I have read in JA forum which is based on EMOTIONS and not on romance, passions or desire. Shraddha, really kudos to u!👏 I am not saying other kisses described in JA forum was not best but this is one is more of an emotional kiss.

Thanks so so so so much my dear.. 🤗 I am so touched... it took me a long time to perfect it.. and even now when I read back I keep wondering if I could have written this phrase differently or that clause a bit differently 😆

Gosh, it is getting hot in here 😳@italics - u have beautifully described jodha's thoughts.

Its her 'coming of age' ..its her getting in touch with the 'physical' reactions to a relationship for the first time ..

THEY finally had their first sensual kiss.

😆

@italics- just loved that part of nose brushing past each other- uff 😳

Ooohhh - they passionated made out- ☺️ GO jODHA AND JALAL!

🥳 yeah... 😆

THE MUHAMMED HOUSEHOLD - ON THE PORCH

Observing them closely for a few seconds, she went on to touch them. They felt so different now - the onslaught had left them slightly tender - but, not in an unpleasant way.

Ohh jodha- i think almost all people especially girls feel this way.😳

Sooo cute what she did and your comment 😆

I cannot believe this is the same Jodha from first few chapters but hey this is what happens in love- a beautiful feeling to be in love❤️

Yes love does make you do the different-est things 😳

Then again, she had never ever dreamt that she'd end up with a boyfriend like Jalal Muhammed in college either! LUCKY her! not me 😭😆

Awww... here a big hug for you 🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

Felt ka matlab kyaa hai😆

It was aatma se felt re dear😳 Baki ka literal 'feel', 'felt' I am leaving for them☺️☺️☺️

Kaise samjau in nadan ladkiyon ko jo har waqt mujhe satate hai😳 Mein bechari😳

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by: J2lover

I jst have 1 word for u...ULTIMATE!!! Aftr reading d update n then d comments I feel am too immature to evn comment on ur post...but I gotta tell u...u r one of d very few writers...who touch my heart...i literally cried 2dae...d whole update...n then..at last I was teribbly surprised at myslf as I ended up...smiling uncontrollablly...i got d meaning of ur ff's title 2dae...its seriously not jst PASSIONATE AFFAIR...its..its...far more than that...can I plz ask u a favour if u don't mind..can I knw ur name...i mean...i would lyk to suggest ur name to d publishers..😆😆😆 .hehe..jst kidding...nw wat else can I sae...plzz plzz jst update soon...as I evryday crazily w8 for ur update...n nw coming to d characters...n this chap...i thnk...evrythng is said...i jst wanted to say..that I have never ever seen or heard such a romantic n sensual outburst..☺️☺️.awwwiiieee...shooccho passionate...n those feelings n thoughts of a typical middle class gal...jyst perfectly described...👍🏼👍🏼 n last but not d least...our brave prince...uff..😳😳😳.he's such a darling...aftr gng through soo much he is such a desirable descent man...omg!! i was jst in love with till nw...but nw am CRAZILY in love with him...at d sme tym I have immense respect for him..😉😉.he is extremely brave...can't find words to xpress more.😃😃..! I was actuaaly feeling his pain..😭😭.but koi nai...HIS GAL was der for HIM...DOES ANY THNG ELSE MATTERS..😳😳.N LASTLY R.I.P ROBBIE..love u darling!! 😊 😊