~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr! - Page 89

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Lashy!!
I have just finished reading the whole story, all 30 chapters and i must say u r such good writer 👏 u wrote so well about theirs feeling and i loved how their relationship grew, awesome just awesome, the last chapter was sooo good emotional yet caring and passionate too!!

Please update soon, cant wait to know what happened next!!
The only thing that worries me now is how her family will take it and what all they will have to go thru to be together😔 Nevertheless please continue soon!!
Please pm me if possible!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This chapter has left me speechless... The way you play with words so that the reader feels as though they themselves are feeling the emotions felt by the characters...

The way Jalal expresses his pain, the way Jodha supports him through this tough time of his, Oh and of course...Their first kiss- 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

You should try professional writing...
(If you already haven't... In that case, tell me the name of the book(s) you have written...) I swear I'll be the first one to buy the book...

Edited by AkDha_Fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lashy - the chapter is awesome. Seeing Jalal loose his emotional support in the beginning, Jo being there for him emotionally and their first kiss was so awesome. I was travelling in the weekend and I might have read the chap 10 times on my little Iphone screen :) I still cannot get enough of it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
@J2lover
I jst have 1 word for u...ULTIMATE!!! Aftr reading d update n then d comments I feel am too immature to evn comment on ur post...
Please please please please don't think so...I love love love reading all comments.. and these were the specialest of the specialest 😳

but I gotta tell u...u r one of d very few writers...who touch my heart...i literally cried 2dae...d whole update...
Many have told me this.. and I am so touched.. 😭.I feel I've succeeded as a writer if I've done so.. but, I am sorry if I caused any of you heartache!

n then..at last I was teribbly surprised at myslf as I ended up...smiling uncontrollablly...
Awww😳
i got d meaning of ur ff's title 2dae...its seriously not jst PASSIONATE AFFAIR...its..its...far more than that...
Yes..☺️ it IS NOT just as passionate affair between the two... the meaning will become clearer as the days pass..

can I plz ask u a favour if u don't mind..can I knw ur name...i mean...i would lyk to suggest ur name to d publishers..😆😆😆 .hehe..jst kidding...nw wat else can I sae...plzz plzz jst update soon...as I evryday crazily w8 for ur update...
awww ☺️
n nw coming to d characters...n this chap...i thnk...evrythng is said...i jst wanted to say..that I have never ever seen or heard such a romantic n sensual outburst..☺️☺️.awwwiiieee...shooccho passionate...n those feelings n thoughts of a typical middle class gal...jyst perfectly described...👍🏼👍🏼
Many times I try and put myself in her shoes.. before getting those emotions out ..helps that way.. thanks
n last but not d least...our brave prince...uff..😳😳😳.he's such a darling...aftr gng through soo much he is such a desirable descent man...omg!! i was jst in love with till nw...but nw am CRAZILY in love with him...at d sme tym I have immense respect for him..😉😉.he is extremely brave...can't find words to xpress more.😃😃..! I was actuaaly feeling his pain..😭😭
Yes, he is a star.. he definitely is.. 😳 I can't believe you called him prince..
.but koi nai...HIS GAL was der for HIM...DOES ANY THNG ELSE MATTERS..😳😳.N LASTLY R.I.P ROBBIE..love u darling!! 😊 😊
Thanks so so so so much!
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loool...abhi bhi IF 😆

vacation enjoy karni hai ki nahi...

And secondly.. Check ur WA msgs... Ull kill me 🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago
@sparikh
Oh no Robbie no more; Jalal has gone through many tragedies in his short life. Glad Jodha came over & spent sometime with him.

-Sona
Awww thanks Sona...😳

@ALAKHNANDA
thanx 4 the update.
Thanks 😳

@Srividhya68
Wow
Super...Awesome updates...Love it...Cont soon
Thanks so much 😳
Edited by lashy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
@baubles

Gosh di..what do I even say any more!!! I've fallen short of words..how do I even describe such a beautiful chapter in mere words! It's a milestone of sorts..Jalal sharing his past with Jo, the kisses taking their relationship further, Jo discovering a new side of herself and of course the relationship between the two evolving so beautifully n steadily into a stronger and a more unbreakable one with every chapter..❤️
Awww...🤗 I love the way you've put it across...

I've told you this before and I say it again..till date ONLY and ONLY J.K.Rowling has been able to get me so close to a story, it's characters and made me connect with and love them like my own and experience their pain and their happiness like they are my own...and the only story that has made me connect with and love it and the characters just as much, if not more is NJAPA!!! I feel so so so blessed to have got to read such an amazing story..love you!!!😳❤️🤗
I'm going to stick to the if not more bit 😆 loool...

Well, can't decide where to start from...I had sort of prepared myself for Robbie's end, but it still made me tear up..😭
But what made me cry was the photo and the most touching convo that followed...I could just imagine the expectant eyes of Robbie, hoping Jalal would get him out of his misery..and what Jalal might have gone through in that one second itself is unimaginable..😭😭
Yes... even though you know you're doing it for their good.. the self-guilt eats anyone up...
And his past and everything he has had to endure..so so emotional..😒
And somewhere it all together showed how important a place Robbie had in his heart an his life..such a pure, beautiful relation between them..😭🤗
Awww true... 🤗

As for Jo, she's been the biggest support for him throughout this..comforting him, speaking to him, doing everything she could from her side..and the way she took care of him today and comforted him and made his pain hers showed how much love she carried in her heart for him! A companion, like Robbie was earlier..who would be with him through everything! She really did shed tears that he couldn't himself..loved that part! And yes, the cutest formula anyone could have come up with...wanted to give her a hug for that!🤗 ❤️❤️I can see why Jalal couldn't resist any more... 😳
I am so happy that everyone specially loved the she shed his tears for him and that formula.. they were my favourite nuances to Jodha till date maybe on par with the The Jalal I know is no weakling line..

And of course, the kisses..the first one took her by surprise but she gave in for him, because he needed it...the second one, she wanted it as much as he did...and what I loved the most in the whole of this, the beautiful way in which you've described the whole part..the emotions that went into it, the passion, the love, the longing...so amazingly written, could visualise every bit of it...☺️
Yes... it was a journey for her and a journey for him... different journeys and yet inter related..

And lastly, Jo realising that there's this side to her too..one which has desires, passion...Jo is still discovering herself, a new Jo within her!😳😎
Yes...😛

The best couple ever..NJAPA Jalal and Jo...perfect for each other in every sense!❤️
❤️
Ok then, a one week wait coming up...will try to not bug you, but that's a lil difficult. 😆😆
Anyway, enjoy your vacation to the fullest and come back fresh with a fresh update..Love you loadsss🤗🤗
Thanks so much da 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
@PrincessNancy
Loool...abhi bhi IF 😆
vacation enjoy karni hai ki nahi...
And secondly.. Check ur WA msgs... Ull kill me 🤣
I have about an hour of net time.. so guess where I'm using it up 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

wow!! what an amazing update...

you took us through the difficult and most painful part of jalal's life... the grief of his abbu's death, which was suppressed, came out once again when recounting it to the love of his life...we all wept along with Jodha at the pain Jalal endured as a child...n now having lost his one friend/brother who had stayed by his side and shared all his pains thru the difficult times of his life...makes us hurt too for him...

and that first beautiful passionate kiss binding these two in their love for each other forever...beautifully penned...

you write so beautifully every feeling, every reaction that one lives it oneself along with the characters of the story...

welldone👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
@divyavm

Awesome part 30! Such emotional connect and of course, the first kiss as well!
I love how in this both Jodha-Jalal love each other for what they are and in both happiness and grief
Awww yes... 😳

- Jodha respects him for how he has grown up out of his challenging circumstances and his love for Robbie
- Jalal loves Jodha for her simplicity and straightforwardness - including her geeky formula that I found superbly cute.
Thanks so much dear...

They are different but yet connected. This is truly the love forever kind!
🤗


Edited by lashy - 11 years ago

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