~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr!

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#891

@goldenmoon

awesome update...

Thanks dear 🤗

@ Hena

You r the best writer dear ..u shud know that ...i read all the pending at one go ,,,lovee u sooo much ...u write with so much intensity that i have to be glued o the lappy ...❤️⭐️⭐️

m ssoo lucky that m ur reader ...😳
And I am so lucky to have a reader like you 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#892

@zaidi98

amazing beautifull update ..

sad dat jalal pet is no more ...

love the way jodha make jalal mood g8 ..

n the way she console him...

Yes she's been his pillar of support all through.. 😃

jodha jalal kiss... 😳 😉

superrbbb update ...

w8ng 4 next ..

Awww thanks dear... 😳

@dodoneha

wow😲😲 dis update was phenomnly awesome👏👏 just superb👍🏼👍🏼

Thanks so so so so much 🤗

jalals past nd his anguished pain really touched my heart... i had tears😭 in my eyes when he opened up his past 2 jo... d relationship which he shared wid robbie... nd jo filling up d void in him after robbies demise... it was all so damn emotional.⭐️..

Thanks so much yaar.. 🤗

i loved jo rendering emotional support😊 2 jalal nd den dat kiss...

Awww

i hope dat jalal returns d favour when jo would need it (maybe after d recognition of dat stalker)😳

Awww of course he will... he did remember after that drink spiking incident when she was all lonely and insecure...

actually, both of them are very loving, supporting, caring and passionate lovers...☺️

u r really an awesome writer di⭐️👏...thanks 4 d pm😳 nd plzzz update asap😉

Thanks again.. 🤗

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Alakhnandaa

@Alakhnandaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#893

wn is the nxt update cmng plz update soon ...show mai to jodha jalal ka bhai behen ro pyaar dekh ke mai torturd ho gayi hu

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

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Posted: 11 years ago

#894

Hats off dear!! This part was one of the best,in fact best-est that you have written!!! never imagined that this turning point of story wud have such poignant back-story. It was brilliant the way u incorporated the death of Jalal's father, it's subsequent repercussions on his psyche, entry of Robbie, how it is helpful to the traumatized youngster, till his death and Jalal baring his soul to Jo, leading to their first intimate interaction,... all was wonderfully brought out by you ! 👏 ⭐️

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INDU

@GOTforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#895

Omg di at last u made dem to kiss each other Yay. ...such a relief for me in exam tym by reading ur FF. ...love u di...m late to review but exam🤗

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alapi

@alapi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#896

yar such a luvly update😊i jst wanna🤗 fr dis...u r such a darling writer😊👏👏👏👏👏👏out of dis world type😃it was jst fabulous😳nd srry fr de late reply,actuallyy i ws out of station...will b waiting fr de nxt as how jo faces ja nd hw ja teases her😆...

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#897

Originally posted by: rishbala3018
Hi Lashy!!
I have just finished reading the whole story, all 30 chapters and i must say u r such good writer 👏 u wrote so well about theirs feeling and i loved how their relationship grew, awesome just awesome, the last chapter was sooo good emotional yet caring and passionate too!!

Please update soon, cant wait to know what happened next!!
The only thing that worries me now is how her family will take it and what all they will have to go thru to be together😔 Nevertheless please continue soon!!
Please pm me if possible!!

Wooow Preet thanks so much .. I find it such a big compliment when someone tells me they've read everything in a go...🤗

Yes, they will have to face a lot of trials and tribulations not unlike many couples have to face these days (with some drama of course!)Thanks once again...

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Preet

@rishbala3018

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Posted: 11 years ago

#898

Originally posted by: lashy


Wooow Preet thanks so much .. I find it such a big compliment when someone tells me they're read everything in a go...🤗
Yes, they will have to face a lot of trials and tribulations not unlike many couples have to face these days (with some drama of course!)Thanks once again...

U r welcome dear!! It was such a wonderful story, i cudnt leave in between!!
Please update soon yaar!!

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#899

@agun

Lashy - the chapter is awesome. Seeing Jalal loose his emotional support in the beginning, Jo being there for him emotionally and their first kiss was so awesome. I was travelling in the weekend and I might have read the chap 10 times on my little Iphone screen :) I still cannot get enough of it.

I am so so so happy... thanks so much agun... 🤗

@AkDha_Fan

Wowww what a beautiful set of compliments yaar...I was touched immensely..

I loved the picture you've put here as well... 🤗 Thanks so so so much sweetie...

This chapter has left me speechless... The way you play with words so that the reader feels as though they themselves are feeling the emotions felt by the characters...

The way Jalal expresses his pain, the way Jodha supports him through this tough time of his, Oh and of course...Their first kiss- 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Yes, it was a hallmark chapter in many ways.. thankfully, the response has been positive so far...🤗

You should try professional writing...(If you already haven't... In that case, tell me the name of the book(s) you have written...) I swear I'll be the first one to buy the book...

Loool I haven't tried professional writing ... but, yes I'd first like to finish Njapa successfully with all of your blessings and support😳

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#900

@cjs369

wow!! what an amazing update...

Thanks so much 🤗

you took us through the difficult and most painful part of jalal's life... the grief of his abbu's death, which was suppressed, came out once again when recounting it to the love of his life...we all wept along with Jodha at the pain Jalal endured as a child...n now having lost his one friend/brother who had stayed by his side and shared all his pains thru the difficult times of his life...makes us hurt too for him...
Awww...so eloquently worded.. thanks a ton...🤗

and that first beautiful passionate kiss binding these two in their love for each other forever...beautifully penned...
Thanks so so so much

you write so beautifully every feeling, every reaction that one lives it oneself along with the characters of the story...welldone👏

I am genuinely touched.. 😳