~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr! - Page 86

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

@ Pals di - Di is off on a vacation next week... No update till then...

But no probs... Have an amazing holiday di... Uske baad we want update...

Originally posted by: Pals2411

You bet.. Read it the second time...will go again.😆I was just checking my mails and I get your PM... I start reading it...I got all sad for Jo being so sad for Jallu and Robbie...and then I read further to know how he has not responded to Jo.. and then I read further about Robbie being no more... and so gloomy... and then Jallu not even looking at Jo due to the pain he is undergoing due to Robbie's death... and about his father's death...terrible...

Yes... it was meant to be an intensely emotional romance... not the flirty light-hearted kind...but, then its incidents like this that show us why and how they're meant to be together forever!

but Jo still trying... and then she tells him something that prompts that sudden kiss😆... and then another (mutual but more so for Jallu's sake),,... and then another (willingly, now even Jo desires that)😉... and then she leaves all shy/blushing/discovering a new self and more😆... The kiss came at the right time...relieving Jallu somewhat from the sadness while progressing their relationship to another level...

Actually, you're spot on about the three levels on intensity here... a stepwise bursting out of emotions..😳

Mere faltu comment mein jyada dam hota hai Lashy😆...It is a sudden outburst of emotions... like Jallu and Jo😉...How do I analyse this... There is so much to write but I cant make up my mind🥱

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Oh my God !
U know what di.. Sojji could manage to send you that clip... But frankly.. I would not be able to send a clip... I literally have tears in my eyes right now.. And I dont hv the courage to speak ryt now...Damn!i am sobbing...
🤗🤗🤗 hope this makes you feel better... as I let you know... I am sorry I brought tears to your eyes and at the same time.. I'm turning a bit selfish as a writer and having earnest happiness that I managed to move you so...

love you a lot re

And suddenly after all the sad things... We get not one but Three kisses... The first one out of nowhere...secondthe proper one...n third out of passion...
Yup!
Omggg... I m dead... Only my Shraddha di has the talent to write such wonders... Damn.. This chap was beautiful di...
🤗
At the end of this chap.. My eyes are moist... But I do hv a smile/grin as well...

That was EXACTLY what I was hoping to achieve 🤗
Will comment in detail later...

Love u so much ❤️

Love you moreee

Originally posted by: lashy

loool Choti, Lil Don and Sam.. I can sense the excitement...

And currently, I'm actually in a lot of mess at home right now.. so many problems... I'm off on holiday from tomorrow... I am yet to start packing...aaj shopping jaani hai... my health has taken a turn for the worse...

And I had to write this more-than-usual-intense one and put it up by today...😆 but, phew.. I guess I managed to do it well-enough.. at least, I am gauging so from your reactions...

My thoughts - as a writer - on what happened at the end -

Their feelings at the end was a culmination of what happened from the start.. yes, it was an emotional bonding between two people in love - one giving support (Jodha) and one seeking support (Jalal)...a form of intimacy that served as a liberating experience for him since he is unable to breakdown/tear up or express his grief...so, in a way she underwent the 'grief' for him...

Their kiss was a form of intimacy that two people shared - something that started from the heart and then morphed into something more physical, as Jodha began experiencing a new part of her - a side to her she was unaware of - that she was (capable of) getting physically attracted too - not just him!

I hope this is how I managed to convey it! I could have put all this in the update too - but then, 4200 words is quite time taking by itself and don't want to tire the readers with neverending updates 😆

Another subtle undertone the last scene portrayed was also a journey of a conservative middle class girl rediscovering herself step-by-step. She is now doing things that she would have considered 'taboo' just 6 months ago! I guess that's why the saying 'Never judge another till you've been in their shoes yourself'

Originally posted by: lashy

@ Sam

i'm away on holiday for easter break this week.. so might take a few days more than the usual 4-5 .. hence, unable to say...🤗

and one more thing sweetie.. 😳when you said you wouldn't like this chapter as much as the previous ones...I made a guess that you prefer light-hearted romance to more drama...

The thing is, as I've said before.. I've tried taking this story as it would affect me/someone I know from a traditional background going through what she's going - i.e. against the 'norm' of her usual daily life... (keeping her initial characteristics of Jo in the serial true to herself)

So, while there has and will be light hearted moments... there cannot be no drama (warning😆)

only thing that i'd try and take care is to ensure there is not a point when there's no logic whatsoever (some illogic tho chalta hai) and that the character growth is truer to their original selves...

Btw, true love stands the test of time in trials and hardships too...

^^^ lamba warning this, no?

😆😳

Originally posted by: flemingo

No yaar, I love drama. In fact thrive on it. Not for nothing my friends call me dramebaaz 😳

I said, I thought i wouldn't like the part coz I could see Robbie's imminent end in the last one. You know, I can take anything absolutely anything except one's pet's demise. (sounds strange na. but have personal reasons. Will share with you sometime.) Ergo, the apprehension. But you proved me wrong. I ended up loving this part just like all the others.

Btw, have a wonderful holiday !! Don't worry about us. Even if you post next part later than usual it's ok. We'll wait patiently. 😭

PS - It is all lie. I won't be able to wait patiently. But it's ok. Take your time sweety. Family first.

Sam

I cant wait patiently Already feeling separation pangs Finished reading the second part ---- 7 times... I don't have the heart to read the sad first part (done twice)... Will go again for second part😛...But will also be waiting for the next part