~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr! - Page 87

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Posted: 11 years ago
⭐️👏DI!! I LOVED LOVED LOVED THE CHAPTER A LOOOTTT ⭐️
JODHA IS SOO WORRIED FOR JALAL 😳]

ROBBIE... KYU ... 😭
😭
AWW... JALAL BECHARA 😭


'We could try out a surgery...' 'No, he's too old for surgery' 'There is a new medicine in the market' 'The cancer is too advanced for any chance of a recovery' 'He looks better today' 'No improvement today'

THIS PART HE MUST Hve felt soo helpless 😭

LOVED THE WAY SHE CONSOLED HIM 😊
THE KISSS 😳😳 AMMAZINGG 😳

If life took away, life gave back too! Abbu had passed away - but, God had given him Robbie. He'd taken away Robbie - but, not without handing him an angel like her in place.

THIS LINE WAS SUPERRB ❤️

IT WAS A BEAUUTIFUL CHAPTER ⭐️❤️

UPDATE SOON PLZ 😃


Edited by SARA4444 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
actually i wanted to know too. does his mother know thet are dating?
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Posted: 11 years ago
I jst have 1 word for u...ULTIMATE!!! Aftr reading d update n then d comments I feel am too immature to evn comment on ur post...but I gotta tell u...u r one of d very few writers...who touch my heart...i literally cried 2dae...d whole update...n then..at last I was teribbly surprised at myslf as I ended up...smiling uncontrollablly...i got d meaning of ur ff's title 2dae...its seriously not jst PASSIONATE AFFAIR...its..its...far more than that...can I plz ask u a favour if u don't mind..can I knw ur name...i mean...i would lyk to suggest ur name to d publishers...hehe..jst kidding...nw wat else can I saee...plzz plzz jst update soon...as I evryday crazily w8 for ur update...n nw coming to d characters...n this chap...i thnk...evrythnb is said...i jst wanted to say..that I have never ever seen or heard such a romantic n sensual outburst...awwwiiieee...shooccho passionate...n those feelings n thoughts of a typical middle class gal...jyst perfectly described...n last but not d least...our brave prince...uff...he's such a darling...aftr gng through soo much he is such a desirable descent man...omg!!i was jst in love with till nw...but nw am CRAZILY in love with him...at d sme tym I have immense respect for him...tooo much extremely brave...can't find words to xpress more...! I was actuaaly feeling his pain...but koi nai...HIS GAL was der for HIM...DOES ANY THNG ELSE MATTERS...N LASTLY R.I.P ROBBIE..love u darling!! 😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh no Robbie no more; Jalal has gone through many tragedies in his short life. Glad Jodha came over & spent sometime with him.

-Sona
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gosh di..what do I even say any more!!! I've fallen short of words..how do I even describe such a beautiful chapter in mere words! It's a milestone of sorts..Jalal sharing his past with Jo, the kisses taking their relationship further, Jo discovering a new side of herself and of course the relationship between the two evolving so beautifully n steadily into a stronger and a more unbreakable one with every chapter..❤️

I've told you this before and I say it again..till date ONLY and ONLY J.K.Rowling has been able to get me so close to a story, it's characters and made me connect with and love them like my own and experience their pain and their happiness like they are my own...and the only story that has made me connect with and love it and the characters just as much, if not more is NJAPA!!! I feel so so so blessed to have got to read such an amazing story..love you!!!😳❤️🤗

Well, can't decide where to start from...I had sort of prepared myself for Robbie's end, but it still made me tear up..😭
But what made me cry was the photo and the most touching convo that followed...I could just imagine the expectant eyes of Robbie, hoping Jalal would get him out of his misery..and what Jalal might have gone through in that one second itself is unimaginable..😭😭
And his past and everything he has had to endure..so so emotional..😒
And somewhere it all together showed how important a place Robbie had in his heart an his life..such a pure, beautiful relation between them..😭🤗

As for Jo, she's been the biggest support for him throughout this..comforting him, speaking to him, doing everything she could from her side..and the way she took care of him today and comforted him and made his pain hers showed how much love she carried in her heart for him! A companion, like Robbie was earlier..who would be with him through everything! She really did shed tears that he couldn't himself..loved that part! And yes, the cutest formula anyone could have come up with...wanted to give her a hug for that!🤗 ❤️❤️I can see why Jalal couldn't resist any more... 😳

And of course, the kisses..the first one took her by surprise but she gave in for him, because he needed it...the second one, she wanted it as much as he did...and what I loved the most in the whole of this, the beautiful way in which you've described the whole part..the emotions that went into it, the passion, the love, the longing...so amazingly written, could visualise every bit of it...☺️

And lastly, Jo realising that there's this side to her too..one which has desires, passion...Jo is still discovering herself, a new Jo within her!😳😎

The best couple ever..NJAPA Jalal and Jo...perfect for each other in every sense!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Ok then, a one week wait coming up...will try to not bug you, but that's a lil difficult. 😆😆
Anyway, enjoy your vacation to the fullest and come back fresh with a fresh update..Love you loadsss🤗🤗


Edited by baubles - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pals2411

...Princess, even I don't know how to analyse this chapter...Itna sadness that I felt like crying...but after that I was just ☺️...Three kisses in a row...😆...Yeh kaisa chapter hai😊

Sadness + tears + blushes + a big wide smile = Chapter 30😃

Emotional chapter hai 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

You are the most wonderful writer and person I have met, you know that?

I am so touched by this chapter di.. I feel like hugging you... I wanna congratulate mycute lil rodents chocopies V V to hv got such a darling mom...

Awww VV ko congrats is chapter ke liye? 😆

This chapter I think was the best so far (and this statement is surely gonna change in the upcoming chaps I know) ... Not only because it had the passionate kisses...but the way you hv portrayed their relationship... Ja has opened to Jo...which he never does to anyone... The way Jo supported him...

I am seriously at a loss of words... I am so teary right now... The paras where u hv described how Ja was alone..and Robbie was his companion... I could feel my throat getting choked... Ja had to end his miseries...how could he see him insuch pain...
Awww...thanks so so so so much da...Ian so glad that you felt so emotional while reading it...cos I felt emotional while writing it...big hugs ...😃
Damn...

This was heart rending chap di... U hv nailed this one... Its very rare that an update can make me teary... But this one had made me cry ... Excellent writing...
Yayyy😛

Obviously the pasdionate kisses...the waist clutching...the caressing of tresses...omg...GM activated 😆
Loved it di...
Thanks again...yayyy😳

Hats off to
Awww... Topi nikaal dee tho dhoop mein kyaa karogi😆
u...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part 30! Such emotional connect and of course, the first kiss as well!
I love how in this both Jodha-Jalal love each other for what they are and in both happiness and grief ...

- Jodha respects him for how he has grown up out of his challenging circumstances and his love for Robbie
- Jalal loves Jodha for her simplicity and straightforwardness - including her geeky formula that I found superbly cute.

They are different but yet connected.

This is truly the love forever kind!

Thanks again 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Kisses ki wajah se poora sadness gaya... I was thinking..ki comment mein sirf ye likha ki ..di loved the kisses n all..to di will say..my god..u gals hv no feeling for robbie or what 😆

But srsly... What a kiss it was na Pals di? 😳

Just loved this one...


😆😳

Originally posted by: Pals2411

😭😆...Actually mein zyada der tak natak nahin kar sakti hu...The first half I felt for Jallu ...terrible...In the second half I felt for Jo☺️...terrible...😉😆


Felt ka matlab kyaa hai😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: flemingo

MY GOD!!!!!!!!

After starting the read, I thought for once I wouldn't enjoy this part as well as your previous ones. But the way you have written this one... It's much more natural, much more intense, much more everything. God, I have no words. I just loved it.

Yayyy...thanks a lotttesttt ...and now I know the reason for your reservations too...😳

You are an amazing writer Lashy. The story as you said, is pretty run of the mill one. But your characterization is superb. By any chance you write, as in writer wala write?
Nahi...no writer waalaa and all...in fact, this is my first attempt at novel-styled writing and second attempt at a story (the first one I'd left incomplete😕)

I loved the way, throughout the whole part, they were together. Even when Jalal was sharing his sorrow, it was like he was taking her with him through that part, not narrating the story to an outsider. She was with him every step. Am I making sense? Hope you get what I want to say.[
Yes, it does dear...that's why he narrated his story in third person referring to the twelve year old as 'he' ...like he wanted her to see his past through the eyes of that boy!
Thanks sooo much...And now that I know u love drama...I'm dancing a bit more😆
Just a small qosten.. When is the next part coming?😛
In a weeks time possibly 😳

Edited by lashy - 11 years ago

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