~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr! - Page 84

Originally posted by: Pals2411

I think I need to send PM to Pari now...🥱

im trying to get one done by sunday girls cos im off for a weeks holiday,after that 😳

Originally posted by: lashy

im trying to get one done by sunday girls cos im off for a weeks holiday,after that 😳

What😲 Week long😲 But you will take a big break afterwards na😲 You purposely didn't tell us this news kya😲 Take your laptop along and keep typing whenever you have time😡...I can't sit without my regular dose of new update...😡🤢😭 ...No excuses please

Shraddha, Liked part 29 a lot. Took me a while to post as I was trying to adjust to what was happening to my favorite show :)

But your OS is as consistenly good as ever.

Here were the highlights for me:
- Loved Jodha admitting that Jalal liked heels
- The mischief in Jodha of sending the heels text when he was in the lecture
- Liked how Jalal told Jodha about the importance of trust in friendship
- two way street that I always want
- Loved how Jodha can read Jalal here and recognized his sadness
- Sweet of Jalal to still come to celebrate their first Holi- at the same time love how Jodha felt his majboori and sent him off

Every time I read your OS, I can't help think why the show can never show the same emotional connect and perception :) Thank God we have your OS for that.

Originally posted by: divyavm

Shraddha, Liked part 29 a lot. Took me a while to post as I was trying to adjust to what was happening to my favorite show :)

But your OS is as consistenly good as ever.

Here were the highlights for me:
- Loved Jodha admitting that Jalal liked heels
- The mischief in Jodha of sending the heels text when he was in the lecture
- Liked how Jalal told Jodha about the importance of trust in friendship
- two way street that I always want
- Loved how Jodha can read Jalal here and recognized his sadness
- Sweet of Jalal to still come to celebrate their first Holi- at the same time love how Jodha felt his majboori and sent him off

Every time I read your OS, I can't help think why the show can never show the same emotional connect and perception :) Thank God we have your OS for that.

What was that Lashy😆😭😳😳😲...Loved it ...Just read it once...But I couldn't resist writing this faltu comment...(Analysis baad mein)...Half of the part is so sad and gloomy due to Robbie's death and the next half is simply😲😳 I mean Jallu-Jo kiss (that too more than once😉)...Haila...Jo gayi kaam se ab😆 ...Need to read again and again...Sorry will come back again...

Originally posted by: Pals2411

What was that Lashy😲...Loved it ...Just read it once...But I couldn't resist writing this faltu comment...(Analysis baad mein)...Half of the part is so sad and gloomy due to Robbie's death and the next half is simply😲😳 I mean Jallu-Jo kiss (that too more than once😉)...Haila...Jo gayi kaam se ab😆 ...Need to read again and again...Sorry will come back again...

Originally posted by: lashy

25 hours to write a chapter and 5 minutes to read re... ye 🤣..anyaaay hai ye.. at least mere liye thodi acting kar le.. ki aur thodaa waqt lag gayaa padne mein...

just kidding... every time i see a 'faltu' (in your words, not mine) comment... i go ☺️cos i know you loved it

You bet.. Read it the second time...will go again.😆I was just checking my mails and I get your PM... I start reading it...I got all sad for Jo being so sad for Jallu and Robbie...and then I read further to know how he has not responded to Jo.. and then I read further about Robbie being no more... and so gloomy... and then Jallu not even looking at Jo due to the pain he is undergoing due to Robbie's death... and about his father's death...terrible...but Jo still trying... and then she tells him something that prompts that sudden kiss😆... and then another (mutual but more so for Jallu's sake),,... and then another (willingly, now even Jo desires that)😉... and then she leaves all shy/blushing/discovering a new self and more😆... The kiss came at the right time...relieving Jallu somewhat from the sadness while progressing their relationship to another level...Mere faltu comment mein jyada dam hota hai Lashy😆...It is a sudden outburst of emotions... like Jallu and Jo😉...How do I analyse this... There is so much to write but I cant make up my mind🥱

Oh my God !

U know what di.. Sojji could manage to send you that clip... But frankly.. I would not be able to send a clip... I literally have tears in my eyes right now.. And I dont hv the courage to speak ryt now...

Damn!i am sobbing...


And suddenly after all the sad things... We get not one but Three kisses... The first one out of nowhere...secondthe proper one...n third out of passion...

Omggg... I m dead... Only my Shraddha di has the talent to write such wonders... Damn.. This chap was beautiful di...

At the end of this chap.. My eyes are moist... But I do hv a smile/grin as well...

Will comment in detail later...

Love u so much ❤️

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Oh my God !

U know what di.. Sojji could manage to send you that clip... But frankly.. I would not be able to send a clip... I literally have tears in my eyes right now.. And I dont hv the courage to speak ryt now...

Damn!i am sobbing...


And suddenly after all the sad things... We get not one but Three kisses... The first one out of nowhere...secondthe proper one...n third out of passion...

Omggg... I m dead... Only my Shraddha di has the talent to write such wonders... Damn.. This chap was beautiful di...

At the end of this chap.. My eyes are moist... But I do hv a smile/grin as well...

Will comment in detail later...

Love u so much ❤️

😆😆 Princess, even I don't know how to analyse this chapter...Itna sadness that I felt like crying...but after that I was just ☺️...Three kisses in a row...😆...Yeh kaisa chapter hai😆😭😳😊

You are the most wonderful writer and person I have met, you know that?

I am so touched by this chapter di.. I feel like hugging you... I wanna congratulate mycute lil rodents chocopies V V to hv got such a darling mom...

This chapter I think was the best so far (and this statement is surely gonna change in the upcoming chaps I know) ... Not only because it had the passionate kisses...but the way you hv portrayed their relationship... Ja has opened to Jo...which he never does to anyone... The way Jo supported him...

I am seriously at a loss of words... I am so teary right now... The paras where u hv described how Ja was alone..and Robbie was his companion... I could feel my throat getting choked... Ja had to end his miseries...how could he see him insuch pain...

Damn...

This was heart rending chap di... U hv nailed this one... Its very rare that an update can make me teary... But this one had made me cry ...

Excellent writing...

Obviously the pasdionate kisses...the waist clutching...the caressing of tresses...omg...GM activated 😆
Loved it di...

Hats off to u...