~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr! - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
Di.. My investigation till now tells me this..
Texter - Anand
Ms. Giggles - Nikita (cant be Shazia.. vo to 15 saal ki teenager hai..😆)
Kya pata..shazia bhi ho sakti h!😆😆
Lol Don't kill me for my poor investigation.. I m still investigating.. will soon edit my comment if I suspect someone else..!!😆😆😆😆
Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago
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@ Sojji Begum

Heya my sweetheart 🤗
What a chapter, you blew me away with it!!
Suttam po... ok here I come running behind you to catch you... Sooouuummmyyyaaa
And tell you the best part, the part I loved most in it...the fact that NJAPA Jalal and Jo are real and normal people who talk it out, any issue, and matter..no MU even if any lasts long and that makes my LOVE these two characters as my own...and the fact that they are fiesty, headstrong and yet the world's most adorable couple just makes me love them more...❤️❤️By the time I finished reading in was totally in Ja-Jo land, simply because it was all so real and imaginable!!😳😳
Phew! That was too long ille...😆😆And I LOVE YOU for creating these two..there are few characters I love so much!!❤️❤️
No it wasn't too long and I totally loved your comments cos they are totally real and imaginable too 🤗

Coming to the chapter...this Sharif...gosh!! I wish Jalal had somehow got the perv out of that place and Jo gives him two tight slaps atleast!!😡😡😡
Gosh, I felt so terrible for Jo the whole while...so helpless! I shudder to think what that perv would have put her through had Jalal not been there!😲
Well said... but then again, look at it sensibly.. he doesn't know what's happened to Jodha and his concerns are for her health first...he can always come back to Shareef later.. besides, when he's already beaten the guy up in public before and this fella's not learnt his lesson... doing it again only means Jalal is losing here.. better he come up with something else that'll permanently keep him away!

I suppose she didn't realise the extent to which this perv would fall..plus so engrossed with Miss.Giggles and her jealousy..her eyes and mind were more on the opposite side of the table than next to her.😆
Yup!

And then, Jalal..WHOA!! I was almost cheering for him!! His stern NO and that back-off glare...and the way he protected Jo's dignity in front of on-lookers and him reprimanding her for letting perv sit next to her inside the car and ofcourse mouthing her dialogue back to her and making her smile...he was bang on with every word!! And my respect for him grew some 100s of times more!
Heee heee...

Enjoyed every bit of the jealousy from both sides...too too good!😳
Jo's sudden feisty avtar in the end...brilliant!! These two love each other so much, high time Jo atleast gives it a thought.. 😳😆
You think?
Ok...I better put an end to this comment somewhere or I'll be going on and on..the best chapter ever!! And update sooonn..the bugging will start today itself though!!!😆😆
Love ya loads 🤗
Love you more...🤗

@ Sneha...
🤗
I loved this chapter. The first part was a riot. Specially this sentence "Both were blinded by jealousy - yes, to a certain extent by the flower vase in the centre - but, mainly by jealousy." Please! Let Jodha say every thing on her mind without filter. Pretty Please😳
Awww ok... lets see what we can do about it, haan?

@ Shreya
How much I wish our school books were as interesting as this story...😆
Awww ...trust me they'd never give me the job though... cos my endings will always be happy romantic ones!😆
Ugh... Shareef...😡 Oh and now I understood the hand hold too... Thank goodness it wasn't what I was thinking...🤔Anyways, Amazing chapter!! Kept me on the edge of my seat till the very end!!👏👏👍🏼
Thanks dearie.. I told you..not always what it seems... whatever the story, I'd never fiddle around with the crux of their personalities and using Shareef to jalaafy Jalal is not something Jodha would do since she's so self-respecting... (even if she didn't know he was this disgusting)
And this Jalal is too good... Loved the way he protected Jodha when she was almost unconscious... C'mon Jodha!! Are you really blind?? The poor guy truly loves you, it isn't any old crush or something!!🥺
Awww don't cry dear...
And, I'm sure that "Ms. Giggles" must be his cousin or something... At least I sure hope so!
Heee hee hee...

@ Divya
Hey Sunshine...how are you 🤗
Writer-e-khaas, loved part 24! I enjoyed their jealousy so much- unlike the Ben track which was so distasteful. Jealousy ho to aisi
Benazir.. please yaad bhi mat dilaa.. 😆
My favorite line:

Both were blinded by jealousy - yes, to a certain extent by the flower vase in the centre - but, mainly by jealousy.

Had it not been so, the usually 'perceptive' Jodha could have grasped that Jalal's participation in his conversations were purely formal. Had it not been so, the 'smart' Jalal would have had no trouble noticing Jodha's hidden disgust in her interactions with Shareef. On the contrary, everything appeared exaggerated for both - a smile was beginning to resemble a giggle and a giggle a laugh - a mere brush resembled a touch and a touch something more!

Ahaaa... I knew it as I wrote it that it'd be yours and Minoo's favourite

What an interesting twist to get Jodha-Jalal closer together ... Can't wait for fiesty Jodha's response!
Thanks 🤗

@ Preeti
" hmmm now who is miss giggles? 😕
Not someone you don't know... ab guess karo..."

In the serial maybe a cousin or close childhood friend ...but ( if referring from the original then)
Only Salima is missing from the trio ...but the way you call her giggles pls don't tell me it JAVEDA 😆
PS another person I can think of giggling / laughing is Resham 😉, kahin woh to nahi
No no no dear.. story characters only.. not cross-bringing any more characters from serial/history..😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

@PanCake_

Awsum update

Thanks😳

@ Bhavu

Lashy Lashy Lashy... I am in different world... I have no words left to say anything... speechless... No one can write like this... I have read all three part 22 23 and 24... Your word drugs me... My heart is singing❤️... Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan ... Me koi aur duniya me chali gayi hu... I love Jalal and Abdul's friendship... I hate Renu... I have a feeling she is going turn out to be villain... Chippu... disgusting ... Drug my JO... Thank God Jallu was their...When I read chapter 22nd I was thinking... They need one or two more meeting and that it... Jalal is completely gone case... and now Jo and her Jealousy...lol... I have no word... I don't think she will be able to hold herself for long... Jalal's possessiveness...and protectiveness... (my girl) Awww...Superb... Awesome se bhi upar...bestest... # 1 STORY... Trust me... Not even single word I am saying is overrated... This story is closest to my heart... Everytime I read this story ...I go back to my college golden days... U R THE BEST WRITER ON IF... NOT ONLY ON ..JA BUT IF... U know what Lashy... U R out of the comparing league... No one can come near your writing skill... The way U right story is unique... It is better than novel... Sometime some words I need dictionary but so I always copy chapter and read on word so... easily find meaning of the word...LOVE U SO MUCH...U THE BESTEST AUTHOR I EVER EVER READ... Lashy I am sure you are keeping secret from us... you have written many books... Please tell me that you are professionally writer... aur aap nahi ho to me bahot disappointed ...kyu nahi ho... Apka itna sara talent kyu waste kiya😲 you have god gift... Sachi me aaj meri zatak gayeli hai😆 Pata hai aapki story padhna mere liye khatre se khali nahi hai... muje pyar ka bukhar chad gaya to me gayi kam se😆 LOVE U LASHY...🤗 MERI SARI PENDING COMMENT EK ke baad ek LIKHUNGI... BUT YE TO PADNE KE BAAD KA NASHA HAI...I AM IN DREAMLAND...😆

Oy sweetheart, mujhe itnaa bhi mat chadaa ki neechee aanaa hi mushkil ho jaaye...🤗 I've written OSes and 1 FF before...but yeah, that's it..😳

Btw, trust me I LOVE LOVE LOVE Padne ki baad ka taazaa taazaa nasha.. more than comments per se... I get to see the true emotions of the readers then na... no bigger drug for me... I do that only to stories I read to... imm after having read it I write it.. helps me blurt out all I felt then and there... Love you loads dearie.. 🤗

Tumhe Renu kyun nahi pasand.. just curious...is it only because you keep comparing her to Ruqs character from the serial...😳


@ Khush

Arreee lash I love your FF but when I mean love love love means I really liked loved adored it 😉

I know re.. 😆

Dhamka mat u are copying cvs in "building up" patching after fights 😡 😆

Loool... wat? 😆

Bas meri maa please take this love story forward now with u know what 😉

Abhi aage hi jaayegi chintaa mat kar.. 😆

@ Nams

Di.. My investigation till now tells me this..

Texter - Anand

Ms. Giggles - Nikita (cant be Shazia.. vo to 15 saal ki teenager hai..😆)
Lol Don't kill me for my poor investigation.. I m still investigating.. will soon edit my comment if I suspect someone else..!!😆

Good guess...but, one point doesn't add up if its Nikita, though... 😉

Edited by lashy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

@ Lil Don & Nams

Heee hee thanks pallavi...so hopefully this chapter was worth it...you know, I wasn't sure of this chapter for some reason... I mean I was quite confident of previous ones..like the breakup waalaa and the football one..but, this one I must have redited about 25 times last night...

😕 What is the reason? Too much pressure to handle? Was the public demand becoming havi on you to write a lovey-dovey chapter Or where you forced by forum friends to give an update soon?(I am not one of them though)🥱🥱🥱 All the three or something entirely different😕

No no you got me wrong... its not cos of the pressures of HAVING to produce romance and all... this story's backdrop is romance in a realistic set up... The entire story (all 50 chapters) have already been pre-decided and so have the characters.. including Miss Giggles... so, even if a few readers are disappointed with a few chapters here and there I can't change the story because those 'aspects' are required for the story to move forward... when you look back at 50 chapters, one would realize it'll be the coming-of-age falling-in-love kind of story its meant to be😳

The pressures I felt for this part was because..theres a lot of subtle emotions to be depicted (from Jodha/Jalal's point of view.. not mine, as a writer's) within 2 pages... depicting how a strong woman deals with bad news in the presence of a man who's 'special' to her is tougher than depicting a more typical drama scene... depicting his initial disappointment that then becomes empathy that then transforms to cheerfulness... is again subtle...
so, its difficult to write subtle emotions - that's what I was saying...sorry if the explanation got too long..😳

Awww di..!! I understand.. But you really NAILED this chap hun.. I know why it must have been pressurising.. coz you had to write with their POVs.. which you DID exceptionally well.! The chap was not only a dreamy one but also a one which was very very important to build many more feelings b/w Jo Ja other than love..!!
Really loved this..! Both have almost realised that they find solace in each others' company..!😛Embarrassed
(sorry hun.. I fail at writing what I feel analytically..but I hope u got what I mean..😛😛)

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Posted: 11 years ago
lashy u got me there...aap ki kahaani meri thori jani pehchani hai...u may have known by now...through my reactions...
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@ Lil Don & Nams

Heee hee thanks pallavi...so hopefully this chapter was worth it...you know, I wasn't sure of this chapter for some reason... I mean I was quite confident of previous ones..like the breakup waalaa and the football one..but, this one I must have redited about 25 times last night...

😕 What is the reason? Too much pressure to handle? Was the public demand becoming havi on you to write a lovey-dovey chapter Or where you forced by forum friends to give an update soon?(I am not one of them though)🥱🥱🥱 All the three or something entirely different😕

No no you got me wrong... its not cos of the pressures of HAVING to produce romance and all... this story's backdrop is romance in a realistic set up... The entire story (all 50 chapters) have already been pre-decided and so have the characters.. including Miss Giggles... so, even if a few readers are disappointed with a few chapters here and there I can't change the story because those 'aspects' are required for the story to move forward... when you look back at 50 chapters, one would realize it'll be the coming-of-age falling-in-love kind of story its meant to be😳

The pressures I felt for this part was because..theres a lot of subtle emotions to be depicted (from Jodha/Jalal's point of view.. not mine, as a writer's) within 2 pages... depicting how a strong woman deals with bad news in the presence of a man who's 'special' to her is tougher than depicting a more typical drama scene... depicting his initial disappointment that then becomes empathy that then transforms to cheerfulness... is again subtle...
so, its difficult to write subtle emotions - that's what I was saying...sorry if the explanation got too long..😳

That means there are only 50 chapters to this story🤢🤢😭 And we are at 24. 26 more to go bas😭🤢Ouch I want to just keep reading, reading, reading😭😭 Yeh kya sun liya maine aaj😭😭 Who said explanation was too long. Just tell me, who it was. Lil don abhi jaag jayega😡😡 Don't tell me it is you😡😡😡
LASHY - A very strong demand/request - After finishing this wonderful FF. I want you to write another one. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE.

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Originally posted by: lashy

@ Nams

Di.. My investigation till now tells me this..

Texter - Anand

Ms. Giggles - Nikita (cant be Shazia.. vo to 15 saal ki teenager hai..😆)
Lol Don't kill me for my poor investigation.. I m still investigating.. will soon edit my comment if I suspect someone else..!!😆

Good guess...but, one point doesn't add up if its Nikita, though... 😉

Ya got it..! Its not Nikita then..
For instance..

Tucking the book in her bag, she approached him- her feminine appeal at its charming best. Obliging her with nothing more than a dubious smirk, he popped a gum in his mouth - while she continued enthusiastically 'By the way, your birthday comes up some time soon, right? What are your plans for it?'

'Not for another month Nikki' he corrected her - his smile dismissive 'Haven't given it much thought yet...' he paused to glance at his watch 'Anyway, I have to leave for football practise now...so, ciao!'

Holding on to a large tub of popcorn in one hand and drinks in another, Jalal seemed to be happily entertaining a young lady - a very very good looking young lady. Now, this unfamiliar babe wasn't the typical clubbing type she'd seen in his circles. Something about this lady spelt 'sophistication' - just like it did about him.

He reacted differently!! Cant be Nikita..
Ok bye.. me off to searching Ms.Giggles...
C ya in next investigation report..!!😆

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Best of luck Princess😆 Try making a list, with all sorts of permutations and combinations and post it here. At least one of them will be right😉😆
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Originally posted by: Pals2411

Best of luck Princess😆 Try making a list, with all sorts of permutations and combinations and post it here. At least one of them will be right😉😆

Lol okay!😆 Di said we know her... so finding the gal..!😆😆
Itni shiddat se to maine kabhi school books bhi nahi padhe...!😆 jitna abhi chapters padh rahi hun..!😃😆

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