~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr!

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
And you know what Shra di and Pals di.. The best thing about this FF is that its SOOO Subtle and realistic..!😳 SO much of my taste..😳😃 and much contrary to what I write in my stories...!😆😆

Princess, even I like subtle, romantic, realistic kinds. So so my kind and I told Lashy about this too😃 But I like yours too. 😛 Dramatic but very 😳😳😳. Now don't start underestimating your writing skills or I will go😡😡 Feeling so proud to find good-hearted & talented buddies like you and lashy in this forum😃😃 Hope some day we will meet. Pata nahin kab. Maybe some day😃

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: Pals2411
Princess, even I like subtle, romantic, realistic kinds. So so my kind and I told Lashy about this too😃 But I like yours too. 😛 Dramatic but very 😳😳😳. Now don't start underestimating your writing skills or I will go😡😡 Feeling so proud to find good-hearted & talented buddies like you and lashy in this forum😃😃 Hope some day we will meet. Pata nahin kab. Maybe some day😃

Oh my darling di 🤗 I know you like realistic ones..!😛 Mujhe pehle se pata hai bas..😳 And lol, I am not underestimating my writing skills.. Because theres NO comparison b/w mine and di's writings..! Baap re.. I cant even think to compare.. Where is hers 👍🏼 ...and wheres mine 👎🏼 .. I just LOVE her writing.. My inspiration she is..!!😃😃 Awww di.. We are more lucky to have found you...!! You are just so adorable.. and same here.. I wish we three could meet one day.. I get to talk to shra di out of IF..but really wanna see u once and tlk to u..!😛😛

Hope we meet some day..!😃

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

😲😲 diii what an update 👏.. i simply loved it.. 👍🏼 👍🏼 kya likhti ho aap..🥳AwchUmmm ⭐️ aap jiju ki hunar ki malika hoo..👏😃 cheapu was so irritating n d way jodha slapped herself 😆😆 d way he was touching her & irritated her she pissed off.. 😳😳 n i loved ja-jo scenes .. i've read dis chap 5 times & i still can't get enough of it..😳 seriouzly dis is d best FF i've eva read ⭐️ A Huge round ov applause foh writing dis brilliantlyy..👏👏👏 🤗🤗
dis is my fvr8 chap till now 👍🏼

i dnt hv lot more dan to say update plzzz 😉😉😆

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sorry was posting rfm my mobile

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: lovergirlalina
😲😲 diii what an update 👏👏👏👏.. i simply loved it.. 👍🏼 👍🏼 kya likhti ho aap..🥳AwchUmmm ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ aap jiju ki hunar ki malika hoo..👏😃 cheapu was so irritating n d way jodha slapped him 😆😆 too good 😛😃 loved ja-jo scenes .. i've read dis chap 5 times & i still can't get enough of it..😳 seriouzly dis is d best FF i've eva read 😃😃⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ A Huge round ov applause foh writing dis brilliantlyy..👏👏👏 🤗🤗
dis is my fvr8 chap till now 😃😊😛👍🏼

i dnt hv lot more dan to say update plzzz 😉😉😆

@ Red - Lol Alina..! When did Jo slap cheapo?😕 She made it clear na.. say anything WITHOUT touching me.. upar se she laughed out loud na upon his rubbish theories.. not only was he a fool but delusional as well..!!😆😆😆

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
@ Red - Lol Alina..! When did Jo slap cheapo?😕 She made it clear na.. say anything WITHOUT touching me.. upar se she laughed out loud na upon his rubbish theories.. not only was he a fool but delusional as well..!!😆😆😆

aiyyoooww .. aww thnxxx foh correcting me namzz 😆😆
kuch zyada hi behgayye update mein 😳😳
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sorry was commenting frm my mobile re 😭😳

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SUMESHNI

@SUMESHNI

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Awesome amazing update

Plz plz continue soon

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

So finally they are back together in the car.☢️ bomb's ticking... kuch kuch hota hai Shareef and his delusions..how thick skinned can he get. After so much of snubbing he still lingers around🐷

I loved Jo's 'paagal Aadmi' curse'🤣

and I liked how you described the way their own jealousy amplified some select happenings around them.

Trust you to weave magic with words that if feels like its happeming around here...

Shariff and his lecherous glances towards Jo. He spiked Jo's drink?😡 In front of Jalal🤪

Jo finally will spill out some of her heartfelt emotions and Ja will tease her no end

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riyasp

@riyasp

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#248

U know dear I am not a ice-cream lady, but the one which I like is natural.

Your ff is like natural ice-cream . After eating one you will be tempted to have one more flavour.

It was so beautiful so beautiful...so beautiful...I don't have words.

I will be eagerly waiting for your next updates...🤗

Yesterday night I was tempted to write these lines.

Mujhe neend na aaye, ho
Mujhe neend na aaye, mujhe chain na aaye

Update de do lashy lashyyy

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Heyya di...🤗

What a chapter, you blew me away with it!! By the time I finished reading in was totally in Ja-Jo land, simply because it was all so real and imaginable!!😳😳

And tell you the best part, the part I loved most in it...the fact that NJAPA Jalal and Jo are real and normal people who talk it out, any issue, and matter..no MU even if any lasts long and that makes my LOVE these two characters as my own...and the fact that they are fiesty, headstrong and yet the world's most adorable couple just makes me love them more...❤️❤️

And I LOVE YOU for creating these two..there are few characters I love so much!!❤️❤️

Phew! That was too long ille...😆😆

Coming to the chapter...this Sharif...gosh!! I wish Jalal had somehow got the perv out of that place and Jo gives him two tight slaps atleast!!😡😡😡

Gosh, I felt so terrible for Jo the whole while...so helpless! I shudder to think what that perv would have put her through had Jalal not been there!😲

I suppose she didn't realise the extent to which this perv would fall..plus so engrossed with Miss.Giggles and her jealousy..her eyes and mind were more on the opposite side of the table than next to her.😆

And then, Jalal..WHOA!! I was almost cheering for him!! His stern NO and that back-off glare...and the way he protected Jo's dignity in front of on-lookers and him reprimanding her for letting perv sit next to her inside the car and ofcourse mouthing her dialogue back to her and making her smile...he was bang on with every word!! And my respect for him grew some 100s of times more!

And finally coming to the lighter parts I loved...best of all 'MY JODHA' and 'MY JALAL'...it's like they belong to each other, makes me blush!☺️🤗

Enjoyed every bit of the jealousy from both sides...too too good!😳

Jo's sudden feisty avtar in the end...brilliant!! These two love each other so much, high time Jo atleast gives it a thought.. 😳😆

Ok...I better put an end to this comment somewhere or I'll be going on and on..the best chapter ever!! And update sooonn..the bugging will start today itself though!!!😆😆

Love ya loads 🤗

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
@ Red - Lol Alina..! When did Jo slap cheapo?😕 She made it clear na.. say anything WITHOUT touching me.. upar se she laughed out loud na upon his rubbish theories.. not only was he a fool but delusional as well..!!😆😆😆

Loolll..how I wish she had!!!😈 I can do the honours if necessary... blasted perv!

And his theories..well...Jo should have hit him on the head with whatever she had in her hand..playfully of course..😳(😈)