OS : Akdha's remarriage PT 8 *UPDATED* ON PG 27 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: --Janvie--


😆Selvi🤗
You too eat lots of chocolates yaar,Aaj toh din hi chocolate khaane ka hai.😛 😆And kam pade toh buy Free me from Our Sweet ki dukan,Sweetystubborn.🤣
Oh You too read Dard-e-Ishq?!Thik hai I'll update Soon,I was also thInking to start a Mordern Day Akdha story.Lets See.😳
And Ok Dear will PM you when I update.🤗


🤗🤗dheeere dheere in filmy slow motion hug😆
januuu ofcourse i read it😳
and yes yes please update it sooon😃
haan haan will have it tomorrow pakka😆

thanks dear🤗 bye😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Wow this is beautifully written
Pls continue soon and pm me when you update... cant wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Awesome update !! TENZIN DEAR !!
Very emotional one !! 😭 Every word in the chappie was so true !!
I liked it very much !! n a big wala Thank u ki tumne itni pareshaniyo ke bavjood mujhe pm kiya !! Hugs n kisses to u for this chappie n pm 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
wonderful update sweety
i loved this one so much
so finally she is awake
out of topic
i love your current signature
i have stopped seeing after the leap
thank u for supporting somehow
i feel good when i see your signature
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: rima4ever

wonderful update sweety
i loved this one so much
so finally she is awake
out of topic
i love your current signature
i have stopped seeing after the leap
thank u for supporting somehow
i feel good when i see your signature


Thanks my rima 🤗🤗 And concerning my signature , me also dear I am not watching it after the leap 🤢🤢 Without rishbala together , means Vivian and Drashti together ,
MADHUBALA EK ISHQ EK JUNOON has no meaning 😭😭 The show has lost everything 🤢🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn


Thanks my rima 🤗🤗 And concerning my signature , me also dear I am not watching it after the leap 🤢🤢 Without rishbala together , means Vivian and Drashti together ,
MADHUBALA EK ISHQ EK JUNOON has no meaning 😭😭 The show has lost everything 🤢🤢

good to see some one in this forum support rishbala 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
loved it. please continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
I'm loving this.❤️ Do continue soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Sweetu ... update dena... kab milenge Jo and Ja... kyu itna tadpati hai... jaldi update dena baba

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OS : AKDHA'S REMARRIAGE
//PART 2//
After that Moti left , Jodhaa difficultly gets up from her bed breathing heavily at each of her intense efforts , she doesn't call moti for help as she adviced her to do as she hates depending on someone and being useless moreover she is a rajvanshi queen and they know very well how to fight against their sort , she gathers all her strength by struggling to get up from her bed despite the striking pain and after a while , she looses her balance and falls on ground , tears rolling down from her eyes , she struggles and hardly manage not to scream in pain as the few droplets of poison left in her stomach fusioned with her blood , giving her an atrocious pain barely able to control , despite her injury and weakness , she gets up and slowly steps forward Kanha's idol , which was unoccupied by her for a month , she lights up all dias infront of the statue , folds her hands infront of and thanks Kanha for giving her side during this battle , to permit her to save her husband's life , to let her fulfill her promise that she has made to her parents , to let her plainly fulfill her wife's duty and finally thanks him to giving her an opportunity to live again , for permitting her to see the world once again even if it was needless for her!!! She delicately gets up and forwards the window to take a fresh air after a month of torture and darkness , she hasn't worn any heavy jewels , she is just wearing a simple purple chaniya choli , opened her hair , enjoying this instant of peaceness and freshness , cold breeze passes through her face , making blow her hair which were put aside , she smiles glowingly at this warm welcome of the nature when suddenly she notices a shadow appearing on the wall coming from the doorstep of her chamber , she turns back to see Jalal standing there , with a guilty and sad face , entirely a month after she is seeing his face , she manages not to let appear any emotions on her face and forced herself to keep it neutral as possible but her heart is against her mind and is shouting that she has deeply suffered of his absence during all these time and that she can't lie to herself while her mind is constantly torturing remembering her his harsh words , he hasn't believed her and promised her that he would never step in her chamber and that he is disgusted and restless at the fact to constantly see her face , her aching pain spiced up with the battle between her heart and mind makes her helpless , her vision begins to become fuzzy due to tears formed inside her eyes before it starts to roll down from her eyes , she speedly turns her back , she rubs the corner of her head feeling dizzy and faints due to weakness , before falling on ground , Jalal rushes to her and she falls in his protective and warm arms , tears roll from corners of her eyes and reach inside Jalal's palms making him feel as a miserable scoundrel , he feels as a thunder has pierced deeply inside his heart , as someone has torn his body apart , he carefully rubs them with his hands and carries her delicately to her bed!!!
BGM : KYUN HAR PAL BEHCHENI HI HAI
TU HI NA DANI SIRF MERI HO PAL TO PAL KI KHUSHIYAN
PHIR YEH HAI KYUN DARMIYAN
He carefully deposes her on her bed and covers her with a blanket , he doesn't call a bandi as he usually used to do to take care of her , this time he is going to take entirely care of her by himself , he is the one guilty and responsable of her current sort , he kneels down infront of her bed , seeing her in bad condition and weak , his anger against himself engrossed , his anger new no bounds , he clenches his teeth and tightly hold his fist , tears deliberately slide down upon his cheeks , he rudely wipes them , he doesn't even deserve to shed tears , he slowly approaches her and murmurs desperately : "HOW I WISH TO RECIEVE YOUR PAIN , TO SUFFER AT YOUR PLACE , YOU AREN'T THE ONE WHO DESERVES THESE SUFFERINGS , IT'S ME ONLY ME THE ONE WHO DESERVES THESE , IF I HAVE A POWER , I WANT IT TO SERVE FOR CURING YOU , NURSING EACH OF YOUR INJURIES AND PAIN ONE BY ONE , BRINGING YOU BACK AT NORMALITY BUT AS FAR AS I CAN'T DO THIS" , he opens the cap of his knife and deepened the sharp top of it inside his skin , even after that he doesn't quit Jodhaa from his eyes , nor he screams in pain , he just stays there in this position lifelessly looking at her condition , teary eyed while droplets of bloods slide from his knife!!! He murmurs lowly : "I know that the pain from which you are suffering isn't comparable to mine but still I want to feel a bit of it , feel your pain upon me , on myself" After that , it's his turn when his vision becomes blurred and he fallen asleep beside her!!!

Precap : Jodhaa nurses Jalal's wound and he asks her to remarry him 😳😳

P.S : I am just going to tell you guys that "HAPPY TIMES WILL COME SOON " 🤣🤣 and guys , if you want me to pm you then send me buddy request 😃😃 I am doubtful after this update 😆😆 people may get afraid of me after this 🤣🤣


Edited by sweetystubborn - 11 years ago

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