OS : Akdha's remarriage PT 8 *UPDATED* ON PG 27

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OS : AKDHA'S REMARRIAGE
PROLOGUE :
You have been humiliated
Bad mouthed , insulted , disbelieved , you have been disgraced by everyone after my ill-behaviour , anger and hatred toward you
You went through the worst to save my life , drinking the poison, by putting your life at death's doorstep and the one who is responsible for all these , it's only and only ME !
To fix all them up , I decided to REMARRY YOU !!!
Are you ready to fulfill this wish of me???

THAT'S THE PROLOGUE OF MY NEW OS 😃😃 I KNOW , IT'S A BIT WEIRD 😕😕 BUT YOU KNOW GUYS , IT'S JUST TO GIVE SOME CLUES FOR YOU ON WHAT'S THE STORY IS ABOUT??? DO LEAVE YOUR THOUGHTS AND FEELINGS ON THE PROLOGUE , LEAVE ALSO YOUR SUPPOSITIONS ABOUT THE STORY 😳😳
INDEX :
Part 1 : PG 2
Part 2 : PG 7(Not recommended for sensitive people 😆😆)
Part 3 : PG 9
Part 4 : PG 11
Part 5 : PG 13
Part 6 : PG 19
Part 7 : PG 20
Part 8 : PG 27


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Your signature s FACTU FACTu FACTu...bringing tears n eyes while readg it...vivian @RK s d best..dunoe dis new show..how it gona run..but fr me MB s over wid his death..and dis wil b drashti s new show bas...

P.S: udane wrong forum nu solliruvanga..unmaiya solla entha forum iruntha ena..(for peopl who know tamil...) 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: haskatie

Your signature s FACTU FACTu FACTu...bringing tears n eyes while readg it...vivian @RK s d best..dunoe dis new show..how it gona run..but fr me MB s over wid his death..and dis wil b drashti s new show bas...

P.S: udane wrong forum nu solliruvanga..unmaiya solla entha forum iruntha ena..(for peopl who know tamil...) 😛


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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept..cont soon.😛
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interesting concept.
Cont soon.
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nice concept... wow... continue sooonish...
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My Spicy Bhelmix... Itna hot ... concept... Jaldi update kar... aur please muje pm karna bhulna nahi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow dear ! the prologue is so interesting ! 👍🏼
Nice concept !! Do continue it !! N update soon...
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OS : AKDHA'S MARRIAGE
//PART 1//
Entirely a month has passed after all troubles and misfortunes happened in Agra's palace , everyone is still under shock and speechless that they don't have words to explain properly what has really happened!!! Not a month ago , when everyone was still celebrating excitedly their Shehenshah's wedding and welcoming his new begum in the palace , to be part of Mughal royal family infact they were just celebrating his death , and the one who was desperately trying to save his life and demanding their supports , they bitterly reject her. What she hasn't done? Bearing everyone's insult and during those days , public humiliation has become a habit for her , it has become the part of her daily life , even if it was inside the palace , in courts or at Meena bazar's market. No one has believed her , even try to trust her or find out the truth , not even Mallika e Azam Hamida begum who usually considered her as her favourite bahu and support her in any situations , when she has asked for her support to save Jalal's life , her son's life and her husband's , Hamida has strictly rejected her by harshly scolding her for lying and playing with the fact that she used to believe her the most. The one who has warmly welcomed her open arms in the palace as her home , who has participated in making her life better to live at Mughal's , in Agra , with whom she has been attached and was considering as her biological mother , she also has deeply hurted her , when she really needed her support , she has turned her back to her. She was constrained to drink the poison to reveal the truth of Benazir infront of everyone and after unconsciously fallen in Jalal's arms , before falling completly unconscious and dying , she has gathered all her forces to difficultly spell her last words , which were still echoing in everyone's ears : "I SUCCEEDED . . . I SUCCEEDED . . IN FULFILLING MY DUTY . . . . TO SAVE MY HUSBAND'S LIFE . . . THAT WAS MY WISH . . . EVEN IF I MUST EXCHANGE IT . . . WITH . . . MY . . . . . . LIFE" then she has fallen completly unconscious and fainted in his arms!!! The one whom everyone used to disregarded coldly , wickedly calling her "THE RAJVANSHI RANI" , that was that same woman who saved all women in palace from becoming widow , who has saved the throne and the Empire , who has saved it's honour , who has saved the whole SULTANAT from a big misadventure!!! Since that day , whole Agra was ashamed and has lost their face , everything has been replaced by the silence , it's the only way to ask forgiveness without loosing their faces. They are spellbounded by Jodhaa's courage and braveness who has taken such a drastic step without any regrets and fears , they recall her motto : "TO FULFILL THEIR PROMISE , RAJVANSHIS BOW INFRONT OF NOTHING , THEY CAN EVEN FACE THE DEATH FOR IT " Whole a month has passed now , during which most reputed hakims around of Agra and itself comes from anyside to save Jodhaa . After weeks of anguish , distress , fear , agony and prayers of everyone , she is barely saved!!! She is still weak but the most important thing for everyone was that she was out of danger finally , god has heard their prayers. She is there , lying lifelessly on her chamber's bed and has just escaped death , when she opens her eyes , her bed is surrounded by a crowd of people but firstly , she sees Hamida begum , Jiji Anga and Gulbadan begum , all three teary eyed , a slight smile on their face that's of relief. Hamida approaches her and gently caresses her face , tears are unstoppably rolling down from her eyes , she is sobbing recalling the way she has rejected Jodhaa , she caresses her forhead and lowly says "FORGIVE ME JODHAA , MY CHILD , I AM YOUR MURDERER AND RESPONSABLE OF YOUR SORT NOW , IF ONLY I HAVE TRUSTED YOU , YOU WOULDN'T HAVE TO FACE ALL THOSE TROUBLES" she begins to sob profusely wipping her tears with her dupatta and is about to leave when Jodhaa holds her hand and nods in a "no" and slowly says "IF I HAVE TO COME ALIVE JUST TO HEAR THOSE OF WORDS FROM YOU THEN I WOULD PREFER TO NEVER OPEN MY EYES TO SEE THE WORLD AND DIE FOREVER. . " , Hamida puts her hand on her mouth nodding in a 'no' and they share a warm hug , Hamida happily smiles wipping her tears and asks Jodhaa "DO YOU WANT TO DIE LEAVING ME WITH REGRETS FOR WHOLE LIFE JODHAA?" , tears roll from Jodhaa's eyes and she poses her head on her shoulders with hug. Hamida thanks god for bringing back Jodhaa to life , she asks everybody to leave as Jodhaa needs to rest and firmly orders moti "WE ARE GOING AS JODHAA NEEDS SOME REST , TAKE GOOD CARE OF HER" , moti bows her head in obedience and the crowd behind slowly begins to apart and leaves while Jodhaa looking at each of them leaving as her eyes are looking for someone , to check his presence but unfortunately her hopes soar , the one whom she was wishing to be present wasn't , due to weakness by constantly moving at anyside of the bed to verify , her head begins to ache , moti speedly intervienes near her , putting a pillow behind her head and asks her to rest as she is still weak. Jodhaa does and lowly asks her "WAS HE THERE?" , moti confused by her question , confusely asks her "HE? WHO HE? WHO SHOULD BE THERE JODHAA?" , Jodhaa a bit irritated answers "MOTI , WHO HE? OBVIOUSLY I AM TALKING ABOUT SHEHEN. . . " , Jodhaa stops herself recalling his words "EVEN IF YOU ARE TAKING YOUR LAST BREATH , I WOULDN'T STEP INTO YOUR CHAMBER , HONESTLY , I AM BEING DISGUSTED TO CONSTANTLY SEE YOUR FACE JODHAA" , tears fall from the corners of her eyes , recalling his harsh words melted with her excruciating pain , she clutches tightly her bed's sheet to control her pain , when moti surprisingly asks bringing her out of her thoughts "OBVIOUSLY HE? WHO JODHAA? TELL ME" , Jodhaa closes her eyes with tears and hopelessly responds "NO ONE MOTI , NO ONE , JUST FORGET IT , I AM REALLY TIRED , I WILL TAKE REST" , moti ignoring the real meaning smiles and says "WELL JODHAA , TAKE REST , IF YOU NEED ME IN ANY HELP THEN CALL ME , I WILL BE THERE AT YOUR SIDE WITHIN A SECOND OK?" , Jodhaa nods in a 'yes' with a faint smile and moti leaves to do her works.

Precap : After a whole month away from each other , finally Jalal comes and reaches at the doorstep of Jodhaa's chamber!!!
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HOW WAS IT SWEETIES 😛😛??? PLEASE LEAVE YOUR FEEDBACKS AND VIEWS ON THE STORY , THAT IS BAD OR GOOD , CRITICS ALL ARE WELCOME 🤗🤗THEN IF YOU REALLY LIKE IT , DO HIT LIKE 😳😳

❤️❤️ Sweetly ❤️❤️
😃😃-Tenzin 🤗🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Plz plz continue soon
Tanx for the pm

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