OS - Meri Aashiqui bas tum hi ho (after 3rd feb epi) - Page 8

Originally posted by: kabhiasya4ever

okay nancy...i m reaaalllyyy veryyy sorrryyy as i cudnt read any of ur stories since past many days but this one took my heart away and yes i want the second part sooner

OMG😲 Thanks a ton yar! Its totally fine if you are busy..but I am defo waiting for your comments on my other stories..😛 But Thanks a ton for liking this.!!! 🤗 Love you 🤗

Originally posted by: Pallavvi

oh god...😲

first of all let me tell u dear...😳

that its my favourite song from my most favourite singer ...😃

ARIJIT...oh i love him yaar...

i m so so addicted to his songs...☺️

even i was planning one of his songs imagining my AKDHA in it...👏👏👏

Rula diya nannu...tune mujhe rula diya...😭

the way he took care of her...⭐️

my god...today dargah scene gave me goosebumps 😳😭

and if i see this one...i ll get faint...😃😆

plz continue soon...it is lovely...😃

Awww Pallu..Thanks a ton my sherni..your comment made me smile and m soo happy..

Originally posted by: parinika

Mindblowing

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: lashy

He asked Kanha -- Bacha lijiye unhe.. Bacha lijiye Jodha Begum ko.. (his tears were out again).. Vo to aapki ibaadat karti hain..unhone kisi ka kya bigada hai..jo unhe ye saza mil rahi hai..

Agar kuch saza deni hai to humein dijiye.. (he was literally begging now).. Ye sab humari vajah se hua hai.. Humnein apne gusse mein aakar naa jaane kya kya kaha hain unhe..Lekin vo sirf sehti rahin...
Har baar humein aagah kiya unhone..lekin humnein bevakoofi ki hadein paar kardin..
Phir bhi unhone bas humare baare mein socha..yahan tak hi apni jaan ki bhi parvah nahi ki.. Kripya unhe bacha lijiye...Agar unhe kuch hua..to hum..to hum..(he could not complete his sentence)..

He folded his hands..and bowed down his head in Kanha's feet...

Ye SHahenshah aapke saamne sir Jhukakar Jodha Begum ki jaan ki bheekh maangta hai.. With this he completely broke down..

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After some five or ten minutes, He heard a feeble "Shahenshah.." in the silent room.. He was shocked.. He knew..that word was spoken after a great struggle but yes..it was spoken..
he heard it right.. he immediately got up and ran back to the bed..He saw her closed eyes moving with much difficulty..She was looking so weak..

Her lips had just uttered Shahenshah.. How terrible and happy he felt simultaneously.."Even after taking this drastic step..all she says is SHahenshah".. His head shook in despair..

And all they could say is - Sorry Shahenshah... She is sinking.. May be her inner strength helped her to utter some words..but very little time is left with her..
We are so very sorry.. As we had said, that She would live up only for some hours..

Jalal was not at all ready to hear this.. He got hold of the vase on the table and threw it at the wall with all his might...

He shouted - NO!! Never!! This cannot happen..She cannot leave without talking to me.. She needs to answer me.. She needs to open her eyes.. She has to live..

DO Whatever you can..but you cannot tell me that she is leaving..Go and search for anything that you need..BUT BRING HER BACK TO CONSCIOUSNESS RIGHT NOW!!!
This is my order..

He got up and covered her body with double blankets.. He went to her feet and started rubbing them in desperation.. He did not want to lose her..
His eyes were all upon her closed eyes..much opposite to what he had said the day before..👏

Finally he had realised that He felt so vulnerable..because she was NOT just "Somebody"..She was KHAAS..He felt for her..
He liked her..He more than liked her.. He had always felt a strange feeling when she was near.. but he was sure he felt for her..
Did he Lov..Love Her?? Can Love make somebody so vulnerable.. Was he in Love??.. He was shocked but calm enough..

Beautiful dear.. just beautiful...I've highlighted the bits and the lines that I really liked above..as I've said before you can capture emotions very very very well!🤗

I especially want this bit to happen maybe tomorrow - Jalal talking/complaining to an unconscious Jodha of how much she's troubling him...*sigh*

Acha..to ye tareeka nikala hai aapne humein pareshaan karneka.. Jodha Begum aankhein kholiye..
Varna sach keh rahein hain..Bahut badi saza denge hum aapko humein is tarah chot pahuchane ka.. Kyon chup chap leti huyi hain..
Maariye na taana..Kahiye..Ki aap sahi thin..aur hum galat..Kahiye na ki aap jeet gayin..aur hum haar gaye..boliye na..(he was loosing his confidence)..

He had continously caressing his begum's forehead..talking to her every now and then like a mad child.. telling her all sorts of silly things..

asking her to respond to him.. The only thing he had not asked her was why she did this for him..

Hats off to you!!!!😃

Excellent read..I mean we all sort of guessed how yesterday today and tomorrow is going to proceed, but you breathed life into it..

Kudos Nancy! Keep it up! 🤗

OMG DI...😡😡 Thanks..I will reply in detail later...but what are you doing on forum..I said you go and rest.. migraine ko Mazak samjh rakha hai kya...kitni ziddi ho aap...oh gawd..

Originally posted by: lovergirlalina

Namyyy meri jaaannn 🤗

upPPdaAattEee plzzz 😳

waiitng foh d update 😊

Sure... Thankss so much alina.. I read ur review...thanks a lot..🤗 i'll quote it now..😃

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

UN RES ...

HORRAY!!!👏👏👏 I HAVE GOT THE HONOUR TO BE FIRST ONE TO COMMENT ON THIS... THIS IS THE BEST.. BETTER THAN SERIAL.. BETTER THAN ANY WRITEUP

😲😲😲OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM SHOCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲😲😲

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️NANU THE ROCKSTAR SUPER STAR⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

👏👏👏MINBLOWING!!!👏👏👏 SUPERB👏👏👏 HEART TOUCHING👏👏👏

CRYING😭😭😭 SOBBING😭😭😭 PAINFUL😭😭😭 HEARTBORKEN😭😭😭

😃DIVINE😃PURITY😃LOVE😃FAITH😃EMOTION😃ANGER😃CARE😃

S😳P😳E😳E😳C😳H😳L😳E😳S😳S

SWEETY THIS THE BESTEST DIVINE PURE... UNBELIEVABLE AMAZING OS

THIS IS CALL PERFECTION... U R BORN TO BE A WRITER

NANU YOUR AUTOGRAPH PLEASE... EMAIL ME I KNOW YOU WILL BE A VERY POPULAR WRITER👏👏👏

I HAVE EVER READ... I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS PIECE...

YOU HAVE NAILED IT... WITH MANY EMOTIONS

I HAVE READ THIS OS FOR MANY TIME ALREADY

I LIKE EACH EVERY PART OF THIS OS SO HARD TO PICK ON ONE...

BUT STILL I WILL TELL WHEN I CRIED...LITTERLY WITH TEARS

He said to her with trembling voice and yet with a smile - Acha..to ye tareeka nikala hai aapne humein pareshaan karneka.. Jodha Begum aankhein kholiye..
Varna sach keh rahein hain..Bahut badi saza denge hum aapko humein is tarah chot pahuchane ka.. Kyon chup chap leti huyi hain..
Maariye na taana..Kahiye..Ki aap sahi thin..aur hum galat..Kahiye na ki aap jeet gayin..aur hum haar gaye..boliye na..(he was loosing his confidence)..Kahiye na..Boliye Kuch..
(he started crying hiding his face in her palms..)

⭐️NANCY IS THE BEST...NANCY IS THE BEST... NANCY IS THE BEST⭐️ 🤗LOVE U JAAAN🤗 🤗LOVE U SO MUCH🤗 🤗LOVE U VERY VERY MUCH🤗 🤗SWEETY KEEP WRITING U HAVE GOD GIFT🤗

OMG😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

Originally posted by: lovergirlalina

Ma sha Allah MA sha Allah how beautifully u've written my princess. ⭐️⭐️⭐️Take a bow 👏👏

I was waiting for U to wyrt an OS on dis & finally I gawT it.. 🤗 🤗 YyiiippPiiEEe 🥳m chOoo HapppYYy..

Everytym u surprised me with ur stories though it was SS, FF, OS, DEAD LOVE ow anything elz !!! 👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

D way u xpress jalal'z feelings & emotionz were juz suuuppeerrrbbb & O/S 👏⭐️

I loved how jalal caresses his loving, beautiful wyf jodha & how he feelz guilty foh his deeds, his pain of loosing jodha & how she'z waiting foh his wyf to response him back...AkDha senz were in d room was wish to c dis on d show too.. 😉 !! while reading I gawt tearz in my eyez..😭😭😭 loved each & every bit..⭐️⭐️ it was heart wrenching. 😳🥺 u nailed it perfectlyyy jaan... 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

And d song !!! what to say abt it !!! 😕 1 ov my favr8 song which m humming dese days 😛😃 ... d song was juzz simplyyy foh dis situation.. 👏

Uh made me speechless 😳😳😳... m reading dis OS again & again...😃 😉

And uh knw what I was literally crying 😭😭 when I came 2 knw abt ur hand injury I want 2 talk bt u didn't lift my call.😡🤢. though ur hand is awryt bt still u've rashes in ur hand.. after dat also u came here & wryt d OS meanz kya kahun..🥱🤔 Hatz off ..👏👏 M speEechlesss !!!!!!! 🤢 (TOUCHWOOD) May Almighty Allah Bless U jaan . 😃😊U r d bestest & aWesOme writer I've eva seen & I mean it..👏 Glad to have U... 👍🏼 ❤️ 👍🏼 Love U juz d way U r... ❤️🤗 🤗 🤗

NamrAta gOeL RaWkZzz !!!!! 👏⭐️ ⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏

Someone had said.."To love is to be vulnerable".. i think i know who said dis😛 😛 Its trU.. En i knw dis is ua status on WA 😆😆😉

P.S. looking fwd to d 2^nd part... plz update jaan ASAP... 😳😳

OMG OMG OMG...😲😲😲😲

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

OMG OMG OMG...😲

Gawddd Alina... 😲😲😲

OMG..Thank YOU SOOO muchhh...😃😃

You made me cry with this perfectly emotional review😭😭😭

I am speechless...and I can only say I LOVE YOU😳😳😳

Thanksss a lot for this..!!!!! You made my day..😃

YA ALLAH yeh kya khrahi ho namyy 😲😲 ... rulaoogi kya mujhey... 😒

Everytym uh made me speechless with ur updates 🤢🤢 . I was mesmerized by reading ur stories..😎 😎😃😃 u r way beyond any words my jaan.. 👏👏👏👏 I feel like calling U & talking to U foh hourz.. earlier I didn't knw u can wrytt soo perfectlyyy n brilliantlyyy.. 😉😳 hatzz off ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏what to say M ur FAN as I told u @ nyt too.. m ur trU FAN 🤗 🤗 ... & ya I Love U tooO jaan... ☺️ ☺️