OS - Meri Aashiqui bas tum hi ho (after 3rd feb epi)

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drveena

@drveena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

hi nancy...🤗... thanks...😊

too goood...👏... mere paas prashansa karnae kae liyae words kam padh rahae hain...👏, if any body opines otherwise they would be dishonest and lying...superb...keep it up waiting for the next part...

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kabhiasya4ever

@kabhiasya4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

okay nancy...i m reaaalllyyy veryyy sorrryyy as i cudnt read any of ur stories since past many days but this one took my heart away and yes i want the second part sooner

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

oh god...😲

first of all let me tell u dear...😳

that its my favourite song from my most favourite singer ...😃

ARIJIT...oh i love him yaar...

i m so so addicted to his songs...☺️

even i was planning one of his songs imagining my AKDHA in it...👏👏👏

Rula diya nannu...tune mujhe rula diya...😭

the way he took care of her...⭐️

my god...today dargah scene gave me goosebumps 😳😭

and if i see this one...i ll get faint...😃😆

plz continue soon...it is lovely...😃

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Az3003

@Az3003

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Jaan I literally just got home!!😛😛😛 I couldn't wait to read this so I left everything to log in and I wasn't disappointed!!👏👏👏 OMG JAAN HOW DO YOU DO IT??? 😲😲😲This is the most brilliant reindition of this track that I could ever have the privilege of reading!! 👏❤️👏My Jaan I am so honoured to just be commenting on the thread of a literary MAESTRO like you!! 🤗In fact... That is my new name for you!! You are my MAESTRO... The wiz the malika of writing!!!

🤗

The anguish, the pain, the suffering of Jalal literally seeped into my soul Jaan!!😭😭 Jodha's bravery and her sacrifice was so unbearable not only for him but for us as well!! 😭😭But we can't help but feel proud of our Rajput firebrand!!! 👏👏👏My Jaan how did you do it?? How did you turn one of the most vital and excruciating scenes in the history of this seriel into one of the most beautiful OS I have ever read??? 😲😲😲👏👏👏My gosh Jaan I love you so much!!🤗❤️ I'm so lucky to be able to talk to you everyday becoz I need writing lessons from you!! 😳😳😳😳Jaan you Jalal moved me to tears😭😭😭 He was not the Shehensha at that point, he was must a helpless husband, even willing to beg the hakims to save his Begum!! Jaan no1 could have done justice to his feelings and his dialogues except YOU!!!👏⭐️🤗❤️ YOU YOU AND ONLY YOU my foremost love my MAESTRO JAAN👏⭐️👏⭐️ I give you a standing ovation from here in SA👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏... This was utterly brilliant!! Here is my fave part (I loved the whole thing tho!!):

He asked Kanha -- Bacha lijiye unhe.. Bacha lijiye Jodha Begum ko.. (his tears were out again).. Vo to aapki ibaadat karti hain..unhone kisi ka kya bigada hai..jo unhe ye saza mil rahi hai..
Agar kuch saza deni hai to humein dijiye.. (he was literally begging now).. Ye sab humari vajah se hua hai.. Humnein apne gusse mein aakar naa jaane kya kya kaha hain unhe..Lekin vo sirf sehti rahin...
Har baar humein aagah kiya unhone..lekin humnein bevakoofi ki hadein paar kardin..
Phir bhi unhone bas humare baare mein socha..yahan tak hi apni jaan ki bhi parvah nahi ki.. Kripya unhe bacha lijiye...Agar unhe kuch hua..to hum..to hum..(he could not complete his sentence)..

He folded his hands..and bowed down his head in Kanha's feet...

Ye SHahenshah aapke saamne sir Jhukakar Jodha Begum ki jaan ki bheekh maangta hai.. With this he completely broke down..

His heartfelt prayer, his begging his humility, his desperation to save Jodha brought tears to my eyes Jaan!!!! 😭😭😭😭My Jaan... I always run short of praise whenever I review your work!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Anything I say just doesn't seem to cover the genius and the masterpieces that are your writing!! I am so happy I read this immediately!!😛😛😛😛 Your version of this amazing track will remain in my heart forever and always!! Love you my MAESTRO JAAN!!! 🤗⭐️⭐️⭐️🤗And please... Lessons dedijiye hume😃😃😃

Ever your humble admirer and no. 1 FAN🤗❤️

Azra🤗❤️

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Az3003

@Az3003

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

I'm sorry Jaan Plz don kill me for the bad review!! Jo dimaag mein aaya likhdiya meine... My hindi still needs lots of work😆... But I promise... Mauka milthe hi... I'll send you a solid review!! 🤗 But just know that this chapter surpassed anything I could have ever dreamed of!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOU MY JAAN🤗❤️ Also... YOUR SONG CHOICE WAS AMAZING!!! Pichle post mein itna bak bak kiya... But I forgot to tell you that your song choice was pure perfection!! 🤗Maaf kardijiye Jaan!! But you are PERFECTION PERSONIFIED!!!

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

JAAN LOVE U!!!!!!!!!! SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE UPDATED MY COMMENT ON PAGE 1...LOVE U SWEETY

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SIVARANJANI

@pranavvikas

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

It was so touchy
pls continue awesome

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: dishika
It was just amazinggg 😊 😊 😆 update soon

Thanks so much Dishika!😃

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: mithrasayee
wonderful..

Thanks yar!😃

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: drveena

hi nancy...🤗... thanks...😊

too goood...👏... mere paas prashansa karnae kae liyae words kam padh rahae hain...👏, if any body opines otherwise they would be dishonest and lying...superb...keep it up waiting for the next part...

Omg Thank You sooo much Aunty!!! 🤗 I am sooo touched with your comment..!!😳😳 Aww!! Thank you so much !!! 🤗