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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice chappy😃 bt update soon dis tym plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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m writing now ,started at 10:30 am 😊..unfortunately it is taking me long time to complete as m out of ideas
Edited by hans1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Take ur time but plz update today
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Take ur time but plz update today

yeah lol 😆 sure
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4A-Where words fail.. Music speaks

Lavina: "Jo"? My head felt like as if it has been microwaved in a tin foil ,L: "r u ok"? J: hmm yeah..where is he ? L: Who jalal?he said he'll be back as he had some work to do..u noe the whole time he was holding your hand and was waiting for you to wake up J: did he really do that i mean he doesn't even know me L: i dunno the way he looks at you *sighs*, he genuinely cares about u jo..i was surprised ,maybe he is not who i thought he was..i was dying to talk to him find answers about the weird things which i saw today aftn "say something cheerful" L: hmm ya jo..salima invited us to her party at asiz house..she wanted you to come..J:i dunno lavi..L: oh no excuses,ur going to come..this ll be our first party together she pouted Jo: ok i'll come..Lavi: thnk u 🤗the whole time my traitorous eyes was waiting for some one..suddenly..the door burst open shivani: sis r u ok? jo: m fyn ...wait how did u noe that m here..S:the bro of ur classmate jalal,mirza he informed me..she blushed..i was looking at her for more explanation..J:and? she blushed more S:and nothing sis ,he told me that ur in this room..i was about to ask more q's when she deliberately changed the topic,ll deal with her later.S: enough about me sis,i heard that jalal carried u here ,she wiggled her brows..it was my turn to blush ☺️ L:oh datz only half of the story..she started narrating the whole event..traitor..jalal where r u.. Jalal: looking for sum1..? jo: no..i was just glancing at the door Jalal: glancing or waiting.. he grinned Jo: what is that in your hand.. Jalal: very clever, u can't dodge my q's forever. This is for you, he thrust the food packet in my hand...figured that u might be hungry. .the aroma from the packet filled the room. Jo: thanks n i mean it.. he smiled.. Jalal: after you finish that ..your coming with me ll drop u home shivani: yeah n ill drive our car jo: no u wont shiv: c'mon sis Jalal :where r ur car keys? Jo: in ma bag y? he didn't explain he took the car keys n handed it over to ma sis Jo: she didn't get her license yet Jalal: My bro is gonna drive your car , don't worry his driving skills are good n he turned to shivz "and u can go with him", she blushed n left the room something is definitely going on between those two Lavi: oh that reminds me kapil will be waiting for me bye jo and dont forget about the party she winked at me and left the room we were alone in the room i glanced at him jo: so...J: so...

Jalal's Pov

Say something jalal ..don't stand like an idiot ...u were once a king remember..i broke the silence Jalal: what party? she stared at me Jo: the party at ur home... salima's party how can i forget that jalal: oh yeah the party i forgot about that ..u shud come jo:of course ,ill come otr lavina wouldn't forgive me der goes ma chance of asking her to come with me..she silently started munching her sandwich jo:its spicy she smiled..i couldn't help watching her eat the food..she savoured each bite..i wish i could exchange places with the sandwich...she stopped eating..jalal:what happened ..jo:i can't eat with u staring at me like that ..guilty jalal:sry ill wait outside it is better for her and me..i was annoying her..on top of that ma traitorous mind wouldn't stop giving me flirty suggestions and thoughts..i was about to go ..suddenly i felt a tug at my hand..Jo : don't go jalal..for the first time she called me by name..it gave me chills ,i wished she would call me like that forever..i looked at her and the place where she held my hand ..i smirked,she blushed and she removed her hand quickly jo: i mean ur so rude jalal..will u leave a sick girl alone just like that..jalal:no i wouldn't 😃 especially when she is interested in me ..jo: no m not 😡 by the way i wanted to ask you did you see some kind of silver chord ..and i saw a weird thing ,we both were dressed like medieval indian king and queen..i dunno i saw many things..as much as i wanted to tell her the truth..i couldn't...m sorry jodha jalal: maybe it is because of your fatigue jodha: m sure i saw it..i interrupted jalal:it is cause ur tired and the part where we dressed like king and queen..maybe it's your weird way of fantasising me..ya Allah i made her angry ,she opened her mouth to say something but decided against it..but she gave me "ill find out whatever ur hiding " look.. j:so ur coming with me or u want me to carry you..jo:no i can walk..we walked to the parking lot..jo: wow cool car ...J: thank you.she proceeded to open the door i stopped her..jalal:wait, i opened the door and gave her a mock bow..shahzadi Jodha sahiba..she laughed n punched me gently...the ride to her place was awesome,fantastic..we spoke a lot about our favourites,and i got to know a lot about her she love chocolates,books,n she learnt taekwondo when she was young.. we reached her place,it was grand and as i expected we were received by her father ..jo: oh dad this is jalal asiz my classmate,jalal my dad...well ,Mr mehta looked like a typical beautiful girl's dad,i mean tall hefty scary looking dad..we shook hands..Mehta: thank you for giving her a ride..and he gave me a" don't mess with my daughter" look, it could even kill a vamp..his mobile rang ..M: jodha where r u manners invite him inside for tea..i have to attend this call..phew saved by the call jo: well uh come inside jalal..well folks another fact..vampires cannot enter the home unless they are invited
so think twice before u invite a handsome guy ..it was time for my hunt..if i don't go now,den i cant control my bloodlust Jalal:i have to go jodha..maybe next time..see you at the party..Jo : wait well dis is the second time she touched me.im in heaven. jalal:it seems u started liking me ?Jo :yes a little and thank you..😊 jalal:no need to thank me ,we are friends ..i proceeded towards my car..jo: since when? jalal: since 4rm... right when you fainted in my arms i smirked..Jo: jalal she pretended to be angry jalal :bye jodha v'll meet again at the party..i was feeling lil ill after leaving her ,like she is the air i breathe..maybe this i what the researcher was referring to, it will be difficult for me from now on ..but im happy that i got her back...
Edited by hans1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4B : Where words fail...Music speaks

Jalal's POV

So many things happened in one day..it wud be better if i inform my dad about it..as i was walking towards his room ..i saw mirza daydreaming outside on porch..ill deal with him later..i pushed open the heavy teak door saw my dad resting on armchair reading a book..he looked regal and elegant for his age,Mr Asiz: what jalal u look happy today,did u meet some one spl,ur mom will be over the moon if she hears this news, said my dad without raising his eyes from the book Jalal:how did u noe about dat dad ? A: jalal ,even though m not ur biological father,i've raised u and been with you for so many years,and above all i consider u and Mirza as my own sons,so naturally i know everything about you,and i also know that something is bothering u, pray temme wat it is?i narrated the whole event to my dad..he was not surprised , judging by his reaction ,i think he knew that this would happen..Jalal: dad u knew all along this would happen A:s jalal i was angry,frustrated..how can he hide this from me..all these years ,i've been suffering without her Asiz : Jalal take the book from the shelf..i did as he told..Asiz:now don't judge me jalal,i did it for ur own good,i dint want to create false hopes for you,i already know how much you love her,the prophecy jalal it is always not reliable..very long ago,the golden age thats what we call,there were evil spirits levithians they look like us,but they gain strength by sucking the human soul...then the Ancient one who had great magical powers,created the child of night..gave him a sword of imperial gold..which could disintegrate these monsters..but the army of levithians was too big ,he alone could not handle,the child of night wanted to create a army of his own(children of night)..his bite could turn the mortal to di immortales,thus an army was created..the great battle took place..the monsters disintegrated, but they rose again ,cause these monsters lived on the misery of humans,they could only be destroyed by the power of love..it has been said that the child of night fell in love with a beautiful maiden,together they defeated the army,such was the power of love..the child of night made his love immortal ,together they ruled the children of night and protected the humans,..years passed some started to rebel,few of his own who were tired of his rule rebelled against him,betrayed by his own kind..he left the throne with his love..the children of night fought for power amongst themselves..few who believed in the king survived,like us..now it is believed that the evil started to rise again..and the prophecy "the king who lost his love will become a child of night..and after 400 years..when evil starts to stir,his love will be born again..the king with his love will slay the dark army with the imperial sword..but with a great sacrifice"...the word sacrifice doesn't sound good to my ears Jalal:what sacrifice dad? Asiz:It might be nething
prophecies are always twisted,the word sacrifice doesn't mean death always..Jalal:very reassuring dad,m not worried about my life m already dead,m worried about her,i don't want her to be involved in this mess A:prophecy can mean anything jalal,i beg of you to forget about this,and concentrate on protecting her,as u said u already formed a bond with her. they might be after her..and i believe that my son wont fail me.Jalal:i wont dad...Asiz:good,and i believe that your goin to attend party tonight with jodha..Jalal: s dad , i have to get ready ,so dat i can pick her up from her house ,i smiled..i went to my room got dressed..went outside just in time to see my baby brother dressed and waiting for me beside the car..M:so bro,all decked up to meet your lady love my face felt hot Jalal:shut up bro so i assume that we are riding together to Mehta's Manor..Mirza:s bro, cant wait to see her..i chuckled Jalal: Mirza,b4 u start planning things..i want to give u Mr Mehta alert..he doesn't like us..so bundle up ur second base thoughts and throw it in a river..Mirza: ya ur ryt ,i met him 2 ,his one "dont mess with my daughter" look could even kill a vampire..we reached her place..and der i was, standing like a nervous teenage kid ,because she is jodha,not juz jodha my jodha..Mirza: so wat r u waiting fo bro..go and ring the bell ..Jalal : dont juz chicken out coward..i rang the bell ,praying ,well if vampires could pray,that Mr Mehta wouldn't open the door..














Edited by hans1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww they are so cute
Awesome update
Plz plz update as soon as u can maybe even 2moro

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Posted: 11 years ago
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fantastic👏...m liking the mixture f my all fav. show...u r n awsome writter...will be waitting for the next chappy😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Aww they are so cute

Awesome update
Plz plz update as soon as u can maybe even 2moro

thnk you. ..and thnks for your zeal.ll update tmrw
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnk you 😊

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