FF##AKDHA 400 years of solitude## updated ( page 12)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear friends, like many ppl in our forum even i'm angry with jallu for hurting and mistreating jo badly..yester while i was watching the new promo..a thought struck my mind..what if jo dies,what if jallu never gets chance to apologise...den i thought y not make jallu a vampire...den after 400 years of loneliness he meets his begum jo's doppelganger ( paranormal double of a living person) sort of got inspired from vampire diaries ,twilight , n my fav show PKYEK..😊i want to collaborate all the concepts and make a beautiful love story..so friends ll juz post the prologue ,in the end itz in the hand of readers,if i get a good response ,ill continue the story..if not ill think of another storyline.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue:

On a melancholy winter's night,a handsome man was staring at the portrait of his beloved,a lovely lady with liquid brown doe like eyes,her long lovely ebony hair,her beautiful warm smile unknowingly gives warmth in his heart clad in rajputani dress..



Jalal:It's been 400 years jodha, i still remember the dreadful night,
the night you sacrificed your life for this monster..I'm paying for my deeds jodha ,living each day with the guilt, remembering the dreadful things i have done to you.if only if i had trusted you (sobs..).After you left me, i decided to give up my life ,i went on a battle against the barbarian clan in the north along with my brother Mirza (dunno guys i badly wanted him to be in my story so decided to make him a vamp 2😃),mughals suffered a heavy loss , me and my brother were badly wounded ,then something strange happened ,a handsome man and a woman took pity on us and he promised to save our lives ,he bit my brother and me and converted us into a vampires.Since then we are like a family .But living forever without you is a punishment for me Jodha Begum..

Mirza sees his brother staring at babhijaan's portrait he very well knew his bro was in pain..
Mirza: Brother it's time for us to go on a hunt ..M really thirsty
Jalal: you go ahead...but promise me dat u wont feast on deers and rabbits ok
Mirza:ya ok bro ..thinks to himself..(my bro has a strange fetish for deers).
Jalal (stares back at the portrait): coz i noe jodha begum ull never forgive me if i hunt innocent animals..

to b contd..



Edited by hans1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1: History repeats again
Jalal's pov

I dreaded mornings especially college.. See being a vampire has pro's and cons..each vampire have distinct gift : my special ability..is dat i can read other people minds..but believe me its not dat cool ..you'll know my pain if you sit in the cafeteria and listen to voices that babble like a gush of river inside my head.

As usual my brother makes me wait ,ah! there he comes ..
H: So who is going to ride this beauty (BMW) today..?,J: none can handle dis car other than me..lil bro (H pouts) now don't give me that look (H pouts more) fine take the car keys..but drive it carefully
H:Dont worry ill drive carefully ,now hop in we are getting late..

Finally they reach the college, we are popular ,popularly known as hot aziz bro's ,itz not a surprise if ma lil bro is already surrounded by swarm of ladies..me at other hand,generally refuse attention..H: bhaijaan i want u 2 do me a favor..just take my mobile
J: if itz about one of your ex gf's forget it,how many times do i have to tell you not to mix with humans ,its dangerous.Ever since my brother read a book bot mystical facts..hes acting strangely..he even quoted about rebirth of doppelgangers after 400 years..i just brushed it off,ma he strangely considers it to be true,"H: bro if vampires are not myths..den doppelgangers are not 2,my shivani will come back to me one day" ever since that day he started dating woman who looks like shivani ,at the end of the day ,he realises it won't work ,me as a big bro i have to clean his mess
H:plz take dis phone contact no 19 she is little difficult i promise that will wash your car for a month
J: deal
jalal walked towards the department of architecture ,he called the girl ask her to meet near the entrance ..
jalal feels pity for the girl as G:(what does his brother want with me ..oh god ,does M wants to stop seeing me) starts crying
j: as you know my brother might have explained you that how it dint work between you two,look plz dont cry,u deserve some1 who loves you,one day u'll get a guy who will care about you more
G:(Omg! he is so kind and at the same time hot maybe i should try him 🤢) jalal reads her thoughts and panics J: No don't even think of it (girl blinks ) start a new life,his instinct tells him that somebody was watching him,when he turns back he finds no one,he leaves the weeping girl ..

jodha's pov

Its weird joining a college in the middle of the year..my dad started another chain of our Mehta family business in dehradun ,so our family decided to settle here til me n ma lil sis finish my college..jodha hates being the new student
jo: shivani we are getting late get ready soon..otherwise ll leave without you..
Mr Mehta: Jodha i have bought a new car for you hope youll like it
Jo:thank you dad i appreciate it,cant wait to try my new car..shivani come fast otr u have 2 face first day at coll alone
S :jiji watz d hurry cant u just wait for 2 more minutes ,i was packing my bag
MR M: ok girls stop fighting ,hurry up and jodha drive carefully
Jo was thoroughly mesmerized by this small town .Everything was so beautiful.Everything was green: the trees, their trunks covered with moss, their branches hanging with a canopy of it, the ground covered with ferns. Even the air filtered down greenly through the leaves.On the way they saw a small kanha temple.they stopped visited the temple and den contd to coll..
Jo and shivani reached coll on time ,jo:shivani ll accompany u till architecture dept n help u in filling the forms..and den ll find ma class
S:thnxz sis lets go we are already late.shivani went inside the office
while something stopped jo ,she heard somebody weeping,she found a girl weeping and a handsome guy toking to her she heard some of their convo "no don't even think of it,start a new life" ,and he left her juz lyk dat who does he think he is ,just because he is handsome doesn't mean that he can have women under his feet ,jo thought itz at her best interest to steer clear of him ,coz guys like him ll only break ppl's heart.


Part2:
in cafeteria
MH:brother,look bhabijaan ! j: what!he turns and is shocked to see a girl who luks exactly like his beloved they both share an eyelock













Edited by hans1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow,what a diff concept..so jodha's rebirth and along with her even shivani.cant wait to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Do you know Pkyek is My fav show too?!And Now JA too!!!😃I'm so happy to read this concept,It's so interesting and reminds me of My Abhay-Sid and Pia-Misha ❤️ 😳 I just loved it,Can't wait to read further.🤗 And OMG Jodha misunderstood him like before.😆Jodha Begum is always prejudiced and holds hatred on MU's when It comes to Jalal be it in 16th or 21st Century🤣 Lots of Hugs and Love to you on starting this Merged theme concept on My two MOST fav shows.❤️ 😳🤗Pls Do Continue this yaar.😃 😳 😳 I'll even send PM's to some of My Pkyek frnds to check this out.😳Pls Do Continue.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...i really loved it...plzzz continue ...update sooonnn😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very unique and different concept
i too love pkyek and twilight
not much a fan of vampire diaries though
please continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akdha-fan

quite interesting... do continue!!

Thanxz a lot buddy ,will cont soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchal_c

wow,what a diff concept..so jodha's rebirth and along with her even shivani.cant wait to read more.


thanks yaar 😊 .originally i didn't think of including shivani character..but m a big shipper of mirza-shivani couple,i want mirza to be happy atleast in my story..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Janvie--

Do you know Pkyek is My fav show too?!And Now JA too!!!😃I'm so happy to read this concept,It's so interesting and reminds me of My Abhay-Sid and Pia-Misha ❤️ 😳 I just loved it,Can't wait to read further.🤗 And OMG Jodha misunderstood him like before.😆Jodha Begum is always prejudiced and holds hatred on MU's when It comes to Jalal be it in 16th or 21st Century🤣 Lots of Hugs and Love to you on starting this Merged theme concept on My two MOST fav shows.❤️ 😳🤗Pls Do Continue this yaar.😃 😳 😳 I'll even send PM's to some of My Pkyek frnds to check this out.😳Pls Do Continue.🤗


OMG another PKYEK fan 🤗 although i can't promise my FF to be as good as PKYEK r TVD. r JA.ll try my level best 2 make u guys happy..the only problem is i don't know shuddh hindi r urdu words well,so ll b posting the story in english...thanks a lot for encouraging me😊

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