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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3 - Sawal, sawal aur sawal

Jalal is walking in his bageecha. His mind filled with lot of unanswered questions, unknown feelings. From the day he laid his eyes on Jodha, his life has totally changed. None of my begums ever dared to face me before the wedding but this Jodha darely stood before me and made two requests. Every woman I met was willingly surrendering to me, but Jodha never let me touch her. She says she does not love me. What is this love? How does it feel? Why is she so brave? From where does she get such courage to stand in front of me without any fear in her eyes? And now what, why she is so restless about my life? Why do her eyes show that she cares about me? Why should she sacrifice her life for me? What if there was no medicine for that poison? Did she think that before drinking it? Is she the same woman who pushed me when I went to her? Why did I feel a huge pain in me when I saw her brave eyes closing?

Jodha was still lying unconscious. Hameeda, Salima begum, Ruqqaiya begum and moti are anxiously waiting for her to open her eyes. Jodha is slowly regaining her consciousness. She could feel that she is flying and somebody is holding her. Who is that somebody? She could not see the face properly. She is trying to focus ; it looks like Shehenshah her Shehenshah. Thank God he is safe. She just wants to lift her hand and touch that face once, but her hand is unable to move.

Suddenly she could not see anything, everything is dark. Where is Shehenshah? Where is he? Is he with Benazir? Oh that Vishkanya, what did she do to Shehenshah? Jodha's mind is running, she wants to find Benazir and Shehenshah. She wants to find them, but everything is dark. Suddenly she sees someone coming towards her. She can hear some loud noise. She is checking who is it..its none other than Benazir. Mubarak ho Jodha, humne Jalal ko katam kar diya. Ab hum jeetgaye aur tum haar gayi. Ab Jalal ko koyi nahi bacha saktha tumhara Kanha bhi nahin.

Jodha shouts nahiii, tum mere Shehenshah ko kuch nahi kar sakthi ho. She keeps blabbering in her sleep. Shehenshah hum aapko bacha lenge, aapko kuch nahi hone denge. Hum hein aapke liye sirf aapke liye.

Hameeda and all others are worried seeing Jodha's state. They call for hakim. Hameeda holding Jodha's hand, Jodha beta Jalal ko kuch nahi hua, woh teek hein. Aapne Jalal ko bacha liye. Who bilkul teek hein. Jodha beta vutiye.

Edited by kpranavi05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
wow awesome ff 👍🏼
pm me when u update
Edited by sw123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb!!!! I am loving this sooo much !!!!👏👏👏👏
Keep it up dear !!! You write exceptionally well.. I am really liking this!!
Thanks for the pm!!😳
All the three chapters... MINDBLOWING !!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WoW!!
Awsme ff!
Plz pm me when u update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing!!! Wonderful!!!!!!!! I read all the chapter... you are an awesome writer please pm me when u update
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hey! just read all the chapters!!! i really like this ff. please pm me when u update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Thank you all for wonderful comments. Here is the 4th chapter. Hope you all like it.

Chapter 4: Jodha regains concious

Jodha slows opens her eyes and looks around. She can see blurred faces and can hear familiar voice praying "yah allah tera lakh lakh shukr hein". She turns towards that voice, the face is blurred and she can hear her name Jodha beta aap teekh hein? Kaisa lag raha hein abhi? Jodha tries to move, but somebody stops her from doing so. Jodha begum abhi mat vutiye, abhi vutenge tho sir chakra jayega. Aapne poora din kuch bhi nahi kiya aur voopar se aapne jeher peeya haa. Thodi der aur aaram kijiye aapke liye kuch halka khana leke ayenge.

Jodha can slowly make out the faces. She can see ammijan, hakim sahiba, saleema begum, moti, ruqqaiya begum and other ladies. Her eyes were searching for Shehenshah, but couldn't find him. She gets tensed, what happened to Shehenshah why he is not here. Jodha turns to Hameeda begum and asks ammijaan..Shehenshah?

Jodha beta Jalal bilkul teek hein aur Benajir ko bhi pakad liya hein. Bas aap aaram kijiye, sab kuch saaf saaf hum baad mein batayenge. Jodha thanks Kanha for keeping Jalal safe. Her heart is aching to see him once. Hameeda banu asks everyone to leave so that Jodha begum can take some more rest. Everybody leaves and Moti brings something to eat.

Jodha: Moti hume kuch bhi khaane ke mann nahi kar raha hein, bus ek baar...

Moti: Kya ek baar Jodha? Kya karni hein aapko ek baar? Aapne tho itna bada sankat apna sar pe liye. Aapko bejan aisa pada hua dekh kar humara tho jaan nikal gayi thi. Shehenshah tho aapko dekh bhi nahi paaye tho. Bus aapko is kamre mein rakh kar chale gaye.

Jodha was looking around. It looks different, this is not her hojra. It is Jalal's. Where is he?

Jalal was with Adga saab and discussing about the war. Adga saab was explaining how Hakim Mirza and Maan Singh were at the war but Jalal was only thinking about Jodha. Kya vusko hosh aayaki nahin?

Suddenly a baandi comes and says, Shehenshah Jodha begum ko hosh aagaya hein.

Adga saab: Shehenshah aap jaake begum sahiba ko dekar aayiye hum baad mein baat kar sakthe hein.

Jalal: Nahin Adga saab vuski jaroorat nahi hein. Aap boliye.

Adga Saab: Ye jung humne jo socha vusse muskil lag raha hein Shehenshah. Hume patha nahi Hakim Mirza aur Maan Singh isko sambhal paayenge.

Jalal: Teek hein kal hi hum khud ravana honge.

Jodha eats something and regains little energy. She wants to meet Shehenshah but he is nowhere to be seen. After few hours of rest, Jodha moves back to her room.

Precap: Will try to add some romance 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Chapter 5:

Hakim shahiba comes and checks on Jodha and gives her medicine to have good night sleep. Jodha wanted to go and search for Jalal but Moti insisted that she has to sleep and she can meet him tomorrow morning.

The next day morning, Jodha was feeling better and energized. Hameeda begum and Saleema begum come to check on her.

Hameeda: Ab kaise ho Jodha beta?

Jodha: Hum teek hein ammijaan. Bus hum abhi Shehenshah se milne hi jaane vale the.

Hameeda: Arey beta kal nahi aaya Jalal aapse milne? Humne tho vunko sandhesh bej diya tha?

Jodha (with a sad face, eyes looking at the floor 😭): Nahi ammijaan voh nahi aaye

Hameeda :Lekin aaj tum Jalal se nahi mil sakthi ho beta, woh jung ke liye jaa raha hein. Humse vida leke voh Ruqqaiya begum ke paas gaya tha. Ab tak nikal gaya hoga.

Jodha : Kya jung mein jaa rahe hein. Hum turanth jaa kar milkar aayenge ammijaan. Hume kshama kijiye paranthoo ek baar milkar aayenge

Jodha does pranam and runs to meet Jalal.

Jodha runs to Ruqqaiya's room but there is no one to be seen. Jodha turns back and sees Ruqqaiya begum coming inside.

Ruqqaiya : Arey Jodha begum aap yaha, ab aap kaise hein?

Jodha: Pranam Ruqqaiya begum hum teek hein, hume Shehenshah se milna tha..ammijaan ne bathaya ki yaha hein..tho..

Ruqqaiya: Haan lekin voh abhi abhi jung ke liye ravana hogaye hein. Ab thak tho mahal chod kar chalegaye honge.

Jodha was almost in tears, she just wanted to meet him once and tell him sorry and explain him everything why she had to do such an act.

Ruqqaiya: Jodha begum aap mahal ke chath par jaaye, shayad aapko vunki savari nazar aayegi.

Jodha: Sukhriya Ruqqaiya begum.

Jodha runs towards upstairs. She pantingly comes on top of the mahal.;she can see Jalal sitting on the elephant and almost at the fort gate. Her eyes were filled with tears, they were unstoppable.

Kyon Shehenshah ek baar bhi hum se milkar nahi gaye? Ab aap kab aayenge, kab tak hume intezaar karna padega aap se kshma maangne ka, aapko ek baar dekhne ka?

Moti comes there and is surprised to see Jodha crying inconsolably.

Moti: Jodha kya hua? Kyon aise ro rahi ho?

Jodha: Patha nahi moti, ye aaso ruk nahi rahe hein. Hume Shehenshah se bas ek baar milna tha. Paranthoo voh bina ek baat bole, ek baar mile aise chale gaye. Naa jaane ab kab aayenge?

Moti: Jodha voh jaldi hi aajayenge, aap chintha math kijiye. Shehenshah vijayi hokar turanth aapki baahon me aajayenge ;)😉

Jodha: Chup kar Moti, tumne phir se suru kar diya.

Moti: Aapki bechaiyni dekar poora harem ko samajh mein aagaya ki aap Shehenshah ke pyaar mein poora doob gayi hein.

Jodha: Ab tum ek baat aur boli tho hum tum kabhi baat nahi karenge.

Moti : Teek hein baba, chalo abhi kuch khalo. Hakeem shahiba bhi aayi hein thumhe dekhne ke liye.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Hi Friends,
I updated two more chapters - 4 and 5. Now ready for comments - both juthiya and compliments.
and please let me know if you want me to continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic update hai.
Loved how moti teased Jods.
Ruqs telling Jods to go to terrace to see Jallu was really sweet.
Update soon

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