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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Beautifully written , please continue
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#22
part 4 is very touching
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part 5 is superb
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
It is getting interesting. Why did not jalal meet her? I am curious. Plzzz updatesoon. Thx for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 6: Jodha's open heart with Ruqqaiya

Jodha comes back to her. Hameeda begum, Saleema begum and hekeem shahiba are waiting for her.

Hameeda: Jalal se mil paaye ho Jodha beta?

Jodha with a sad face and wet eyes😭: Nahi ammijaan woh bina humse mile hi chale gaye hein.

Hameeda: Koyi baat nahi beta who jaldi hi vaapas aajayenge. Aap aaram kijiye, phir milthe hein.

Hakeem shahiba Jodha begum ki achi tarah se kayal rakiyega.

Hakeem : Ji aap phikar mat kijiye.

Hameeda and Saleema begum leave Jodha with Hakeem Shahiba and ask her to take rest.

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It had been days and there is no news from Jalal. Jodha is fully recuperated but she is not interested in doing anything.

Moti comes to Jodha and informs that Ruqqaiya begum is waiting for her. Jodha asks her to bring her in.

Jodha: Pranam Ruqqaiya begum

Ruqqaiya: Ab kaisi hein Jodha begum?

Jodha: Ji ab bilkul teek hogaye hein. Yahan beitiye.

Ruqqaiya and Jodha sit facing each other.

Ruqqaiya : Aapne Jalal ki jaan bacha kar hum par bohat meharbaani kiya hein Jodha begum. Hume aapki sukhriya kaise ada karna hein patha nahin.

Jodha : Iss mein danyavaad ki avashyaktha kya hein Ruqqaiya begum, humne tho patni hone ka dharm nibhaya hein.

Ruqqaiya : Aur aapko hume maaf bhi karni padegi Jodha begum. Aapne humari aur Jalal ki talaq rok diya tha phir bhi humne Benazir ke kisse mein aapka saath nahi diya. Bhala bura kaha. Hume maaf kar dijiye Jodha begum.

Jodha : Nahi Ruqqaiya begum aise math boliye. Humko aapke voopar koyi krodh nahi hein. Bas aapse yehi vinnathi hein ki aap hume galath math samjiye ga. Hum aapka sthan lene nahi aaye hein. Humtho bas apna karthavya nibhana chahathey hein.

Ruqqaiya: Aapka ye nek kayal ammijaan aur Saleema begum pehle se dekh liye they..hume samajh ne mein hi der lagi hein.

Jodha smiles : Aapka yehi badapan Shehenshah ki khaas begum banayi hein Ruqqaiya begum.

Ruqqaiya smiles.

Jodha: Ek baat hum aapse pooche?

Ruqqaiya : Ji jarror..

Jodha: Aapko Shehenshah se kuch sandesh aaya hein?

Ruqqaiya: Ji Jodha begum, voh teek hein aur jaldi hi vaapas aajayenge.

Jodha felt very happy listening to this news😊.

Ruqqaiya : Chaliye Jodha begum ab hum chalthe hein, aap apna kayal rakiye ga.

Jodha : Ji pranam aathe rahiye ga kabi kabhar.

Jodha felt relieved after having heart to heart chat with Ruqqaiya. It felt as if two sisters are talking after so many years.

Edited by kpranavi05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 7

Jalal was in his tent after a long strenuous day. The Chanderi battle was going on as per their plan but it is not as easy as they initially thought. But fortunately Maan Singh and Hakim Mirza were handling it better than he expected. If everything goes according to their plan, then they should win the battle within a week and they can return to Agra.

Hmm Agra, just the thought of Agra brought back a striking pain in his chest.

Jalal thinks about Agra how he left Agra without even looking at Jodha once. How could he do that? How could he leave her without even checking how she was feeling?

But how could he meet her? With what face he can face her? How could he explain her that even though she warned him again and again he gave a deaf ear to her? And because of him, Jodha had to take such a severe step.

Even though Jalal got the news that Jodha is fully recuperated, he could not forgive himself. He was keeping on blaming himself for what Jodha had to go through; the disgrace, the insults in DEK, his hatred and finally the poison. How much can one person handle?

Hakim Mirza enters the tent and sees that Jalal is in deep thoughts.

Mirza : Maaf kijiye bhai jaan, khaane ka vakt hogaya hein. Sabhi aapka intezaar kar rahe hein.

Jalal comes out of his thoughts: Aap jaayiye hume aaj kuch khaane ka ji nahi kar raha hein.

Mirza: Jabse aap Aagra chod kar aaye hein, tab se hum dekh rahe hi ki, aap bohat koye koye lag rahe hein. Aap kisi cheez par dilchaspi nahi hein, kya hua bhai jaan. Benazir ki kiya hua dhoka lekar aap pareshan hein?

Jalal: Hmm nahi Mirza, Benazir ki jaise saajish tho chalthi hi rahthi hein. Hum bas teek hein.

Mirza : Aap ki jaban ek baat aur chehera ek baat bol rahi hein bhai jaan. Humein lag raha hein ki aap Jodha bhabhi jaan ko leke pareshan hein.

Jalal : Ji bilkul nahi. Hume sandesh aaya hein ki voh abhi teek taak hein. Vusne hamari jaan bachayi isliye Agra jaane ki baad hum vuski sukriya ada karenge. Aur Agra ki har ek jann Shehenshah ki salamathi chahtha hein. Jodha begum ne bhi vahi kiya hein.

Mirza: Tho aap Jodha bhabhijaan ko Agra ki mamul jann soch rahe hein? Jodha bhabhijaan ki iss kaam se aapko aur koyi pharak nahi pada? Aapka dil aapko kuch nahi bola?

Jalal: Mirza hum Shehensha ye Hindustan hein. Humare paas dil naamki koyi cheez nahi hein aur nahi honi chahiya.

Mirza: Bhai jaan aap ye mat booliyega ki aap ek insaan bhi hein. Aur har insaan ke paas dil hotha hein aur woh dhadaktha bhi hein. Jab bhi apne chahne valo ko dard hotha hein, tho humara ye dil rotha hein. Jab bhi apno ko kush dekthe hein, dil ko bhi kushi milthi hein. Vus apno ke liye kuch bhi karne ke liye bolthi hein ye dil. Dil ki baton mein dimag isthe maal math kijiye Bhaijaan.

Aap kubul karlijiye ki aap bhabhi jaan se mohabat karthe hein. Agar nahi hein tho aap iss tarah busthil hokar Agra chodkar nahi aathe. Aapko bhabhijaan ki dard dekhi nahi gayi. Aap vunka saamna nahi kar paaye hein. Isiliye kyon ki aapko vunse mohabat hein.

Jalal was in deep thought. He was pondering on Mirza's words. If he was normal Jalal, he would have shouted on Mirza to stop his blabbering. Lekin abhi pyaar mein dooba Jalal ko Mirza ki baatein soch mein daal diya hein.

Mirza: Bhaijaan jab aapki mohabat aapke paas nahi ho tho, aisi pareshani hothi hein jaise aapko kuch dinon se hein. Aapko jaake Jodha bhabhijaan se milna chahiye. Hum yaha sambhal lenge.

Jalal : Mirza hume kisise bhi mohabat nahi hein aur hum pareshan bhi nahi hein. Aap jayiye hum khaane ke liye aathe hein.

Mirza smirks and leaves. Jalal cannot stop thinking about Jodha, suddenly he thinks is there any truth in what Mirza is saying. Do I really have dil? If I see Jodha will my worries go away? Hmm nahi hum Jodha begum se nahi milenge. Hume milne ki jaroorat bhi nahi hein. Aise hi hum teek hein.

Edited by kpranavi05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat

It is getting interesting. Why did not jalal meet her? I am curious. Plzzz updatesoon. Thx for pm.

Hi, well the answer to your question is in Ch 7. do read it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter-6
It was really heart touching.
Really loved it.
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Chapter-7
It was brilliant!
Mirza firse love guru bangaya!
Jallu thinking about Jods was sweet.
I'm waiting for nxt chapter.
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
wonderful updates.stubborn jalal not ready to pay any heed to mirza

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