OS- 'I have something IMPORTANT to tell you, Jodha Begum' he whispered - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
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BATHTUB scene! ☺️ I could totally visualise this scene ☺️ Your lines are always so well orchestrated (does it make sense?! 🤣Trying to sound like a very knowledgeable person🤓 )
Makes perfect sense, dear! 😃
No but seriously you have amazing diction. One of the reasons,I absolutely LUUUVRRVEE your stories. DId I tell you,I was reading Samyukta the other day? Yesh,I wajjj.In rtw 😆
AAwww...ok...😳

You have done a brilliant job with making all those loose ends make sense! The reasons behind Jalal being not-so-Jalal for example. Bang on! I would like to believe these reasons. *prays that the CVs read this OS and take inspiration*
Thank you, my sweet!
What followed next n the story made me ☺️ How can you be SO good with handling to the romantic scenes? It was so raw and so goosebumb-ing ☺️ Every single gesture you paid attention to,how she gets pissed off at the very mention of Ben and how very well knows how she would react!
Awww...what can I say...I'm a very romantic/passionate person by nature...☺️ thanks dear once
The hand holding is their signature move I tell ya! 🤣 If shiv-tej have a kanghi-waala-love,Jal-Jo have hand-waala-love 😆

i loved it when he says "you dotn walk away from me unless i ask you to!" .Reminds me of our gold old fiery Jalal!
*Sigh* tell me about it!😭
I found my cheeks turning red when I imagined Jodha falling into the tub with Jalal ☺️
😆 You mean you imagined YOURSELF falling into the tub with Jalal...
Question-Ermm,was he completely devoid of clothes? ☺️ Just asking 😆 Dont hit me 😆
Nope...he did have some bits on...🤣 otherwise, Jodha and him wouldn't really have been having this conversation - I tell ya!

'I'm sorry, I didn't intend to tell you the rest of the story in this manner...' he nearly bit his lip to stop himself from breaking out into a chuckle 'But, I definitely didn't want you to sustain an injury!'

^This bit! 🤣
😛
I absolutely loved how u described their proximity! His touch gives her chills,doesn't it?☺️ your attention to detail in romantic scenes I absolutely love! ❤️
YUP😳 Awww
Oh my god! Did he actually confess?! THIS is how I would like him to confess it on the show. Jalal is such an interesting character because of his wit,his arrogance,his I dont give a damn attitude and his highly flirtatious nature when he is with Jodha. This is what I love the most about him. He is so good bein romantic,without turning into Majnu(unlike lately in the show),but being himself-this sexy beast!
EXACTLYYY you've worded it all to a T - I want him to remain this way always...😭
I so love how you handled this scene! ❤️
He confessed his feelings without turning into a love sick puppy,instead being a lion who takes pride in his love for his lioness 😳
WOW...Dishu you should write an OS 😳
Jodha is slowly but steadily realising her feelings!
Par yeh kya?! The end?! 😡No fair! I wanted her to hug him and say " i love you too shahenshah!" 🤗
uske liye aur thode saal rukhne padenge...😛
Loved it Shraddha di ❤️
Thank you Dishu di 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

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I'm sure it's something really good 🤗

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OH MY GOD! Shraddha Di!!!!! I must you write an excellent piece.. It was breathe taking.. The way Jalal was behaving took my mind away... I'm short of words at the moment. You have satisfied many of the forum members by giving out this bathtub OS. Everyone here is dying for a bathtub scene between AkDha and now that you have pleased us with ur OS we should all give u a heart full of gratitude and love 🤗
Thank you so so so so much...those were some very kind words...
love 🤗

Okay now coming to the OS... Jalal was so sweet. He tried almost every possible way to pacify Jodha and apologize to her. The poem part was so cute ❤️ Jodha indeed plays an important role in Jalal's life. The heartless emperor has started to feel something for Jodha.

Jodha's anger was justified.. I was waiting for her reply but she kept mum and that's even better becauz she was surprised! What did Jalal actually mean?? Was it a way to tell Jodha that she was special for him.. Or a part of him had actually fallen in love with her...

A bit of both, I think!😛

Jalal and his mishiveous tactics! 😆 Jodha was a darling as well...

She is! Love em both! 😳

Loved ur OS 🤗
U should write more... Brilliant work! 👏

Thank you, my darling!
A bit late in replying...sorry...😳
This crazy track reminded me of this OS...since it's the culmination after the track na😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

oh la la ...amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just perfect. u r so talented. u had me on the edge of my seat wanting more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: mandyg

OMG! lashy, what was that! u made me go back to the long lost akhdaland☺️..how i wish that u were the writer..u know what we all akhda lovers want..esp, what u wrote in blue..mind blowing! here is a big🤗from me dear!

Thank you dear! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Thanks dear 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Ufff AkDha😳😳😳

I can see the passionate AkDha, who made to love this shw and Missing in the shw nw😭

Awesome dear👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat

Shraddha, this was a fabulous as usual. I loved it. Why dont u make it to ss or at least two shot.

I loved the bathntub scenes but my fav part was Why did he have to hurt her so much to prove a point? Why did he do it to her? Was it because HE was still reeling from hurt too - the hurt she'd caused him on THAT fateful night and the morning thereafter

I likevthis introspective jodha. Hope ja serial shows this.



Thanks so much Ayesha...😳
I can't make it into a ss or ff now...😳 Since I've undertaken another one...but, thanks for your comments dear!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautifully written, why oh why dont we get to see this in the serial
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akdha-fan

Wow!!👏👏👏

This story was really a treat to read... I really wish that the CV's take a reading of this and stop giving us that nonsense that is going on in the show now-a-days...The Jodha and Jalal you've portrayed here are the ones that we all wanna see on-screen...!!!
Seriously, Hats Off!!!👍🏼

Nd BTW, Can u continue this story... I believe it would be a LOT better than the rubbish being shown on-screen...


Thank you so much dear... 🤗
I can't continue this one because of the other one I'm writing...but, your words are very encouraging indeed!

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