OS- 'I have something IMPORTANT to tell you, Jodha Begum' he whispered - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: -Khush-

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Ummm ... My stupid phone doesn't support the blush emo (dance one too) 😡

Ok...😆
So I will go a step further and go 🤢

Ok...now that emoticon reminds me of something else altogether 😆...but I'll take it you are using it positively😆

Don't be shocked ! That is the emo that has a higher value than blushing in certain context ! 😆
Wow...the value system is it? 😆


I'm working to be a teacher but heck ! I wouldn't mind at all and so should you if CVs plagiarize this !
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Gotta love teachers like you😆...btw, are you reading passionate affair too? Just asking, I see your 'likes' yahaan wahaan pe and didn't think 'liking' posts ainvayi was a hobby of yours
LOVE you my nearly silent friend...Hugs...big round that too!😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: mandyg

OMG! lashy, what was that! u made me go back to the long lost akhdaland☺️..how i wish that u were the writer..u know what we all akhda lovers want..esp, what u wrote in blue..mind blowing! here is a big🤗from me dear!

Thank you so so so much my dearest ...
Thanks once again...loads ...here's a big🤗 One from me tootoo
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww ... just finished reading your fanfic ... how sweet is that! he wants to tell her he never even saw anything about ben despite being around her! If only, if only, if only ...
Okay here's a note to the Creatives:
Creatives: look who you need to appoint at Balaji. There's this person called Lashy who writes a darn sight better than you all and writes a credible and emotional story. Either have the guts to ppinch her fanfic or else resign en masse in shame with your heads hanging!
Vekkam maanam edhavadhu irunda, rajinama kuduthuttu Creatives ellarum veetukku pogalam! IF writers ungalali vida romba better! Indha madiri kadhai neega indha janmathullai ezhutha mudiyathu!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: skanda12

Awww ... just finished reading your fanfic ... how sweet is that! he wants to tell her he never even saw anything about ben despite being around her! If only, if only, if only ...

Okay here's a note to the Creatives:
Creatives: look who you need to appoint at Balaji. There's this person called Lashy who writes a darn sight better than you all and writes a credible and emotional story. Either have the guts to ppinch her fanfic or else resign en masse in shame with your heads hanging!
Vekkam maanam edhavadhu irunda, rajinama kuduthuttu Creatives ellarum veetukku pogalam! IF writers ungalali vida romba better! Indha madiri kadhai neega indha janmathullai ezhutha mudiyathu!


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Thanks so much dearie 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And someone was telling someone else about unreserving their comments yesterday - or having them hit with a stick if not done so - if I recall rightly
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Edited by lashy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: lashy

And someone was telling someone else about unreserving their comments yesterday - or having them hit with a stick if not done so - if I recall rightly
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Hmmm...who can be that someone?? 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely, Lashy. especially the part in blue. It is overall so beautifully done, and so convincing, that I did not even mind the warmish parts, which were, moreover, not excessive even for an old fogey like me!

And what a charming phrase petalline water!

You should write more, my dear, instead of spending 6 hours or more on each episode analysis and the responses to the comments. Unless of course you can manage both.

Shyamala Aunty

PS: If I may offer a word of advice, there is no need for advance apologies or self-deprecatory statements like It might not be to everyone's taste. That is a given, seeing the wide variation in personal tastes in fiction and commentary, but you know you are good, plus you have gone to a good bit of effort to produce this. If it is not to someone's taste, that is not your problem!

Something I did to while my time today...nothing really exceptional since the tracks currently aren't too great either...but, just thought it might temporarily raise a few spirits (hoping) - while reading through!!!! Might not be to everyone's tastes...
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OS - 'I have something IMPORTANT to tell you, Jodha Begum' he whispered

'When he made that statement, his face didn't have the typical sly smirks she expected. Instead, his expressions were now strangely serene. She cursed the day that had intertwined her fate with his - why did he have to be a myriad of such confounding emotions?

Proceeding to wipe the tear that was now clinging onto her eye - something that only disturbed the queen even more - he lifted her chin up with authority so she'd have to face him. Dropping his voice to a husky whisper, he went on to convey what he'd wanted to 'She was around me all these days and yet I know not the colour of her eyes...she tried spending many-a-night with me and yet I barely even touched her...because someone I know of with doe-like hazel eyes was constantly in my mind all through... now, why don't YOU spend some time thinking about all this...'

Edited by sashashyam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this one is really good!!!
I loved the way you write!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sashashyam

Lovely, Lashy. especially the part in blue. It is overall so beautifully done, and so convincing, that I did not even mind the warmish parts, which were, moreover, not excessive even for an old fogey like me!

And what a charming phrase petalline water!

You should write more, my dear, instead of spending 6 hours or more on each episode analysis and the responses to the comments. Unless of course you can manage both.

Shyamala Aunty

PS: If I may offer a word of advice, there is no need for advance apologies or self-deprecatory statements like It might not be to everyone's taste. That is a given, seeing the wide variation in personal tastes in fiction and commentary, but you know you are good, plus you have gone to a good bit of effort to produce this. If it is not to someone's taste, that is not your problem!

beautiful genuine touching words aunty...totally loved reading them🤗very uplifting indeed!

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