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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 22 :- The birth of Salim
Hello Everyone , so my story has reached till her , all my chapter contains romance 😆😳Right ! So .. it showed AkDha married happily and now coming ... their first sign of love their son Salim ... Importantly .. i'm gonna finish this thread now .. no more chapter after this one ... I know you all will miss my FF ... haina 😃😳.. Please hit like and comment for this last chapter... this FF is nearest to my heart as this was my first try ever , i wrote an FF for the first time and it gave me so much popularity and so many readers .. And i'm so much thankful to each and everyone person who read , liked and comment for my FF ... Thanks a ton guys ! 🤗So lets move towards the last chapter i.e the end of story ...

As Hakim Sahiba told them that Jodha's delivery date might be tomorrow or the day after tomorrow ... Everyone was so excited , " Ya khuda .. itni sari tayyarian kerni ha ... aap sab jaldi jaldi keriye kaam " Hamida bano said worriedly , happily her emotions were out of explaining ... she was so happy , her wish true wish came true so soon ...

" Hum toh uske liye bohot sare tohfay laige .. hum .. hun usko apni godon mein kilayenge " Rukaiya said , tears rolling down from her eyes but the tears of happiness ...

And the whole people of the kingdom prayed for everything to happen correctly and with the blessings of the God ! and that Jodha Begum and the coming child both be healthy and fine ...

Soon the day for which everyone was waiting , each and every second , minute and hour seems as if a year is passing and the time seemed to be stuck there and there ...

It was morning time , Jodha normally get up in the morning and went for her prayers she was singing her bhajan as usual ... Jalal comes and saw her singing , during pregnancy she was always looking beautiful ... he couldn't move his eyes from her ... he takes off his shoes and come inside and stand at her back without disturbing or interrupting her at all ...

She finished her Bhajan and when she turned back she saw Jalal there , "Shehnesha aap .. yahan ... apne humein bataya kyun nahe ke aap yaha ha " ... Jodha exclaimed ... " Aaap itni khubsurat lag rahe thi ke apko tang kerna humein accha nahe laga " Jalal said smirking ... She moves at a side a bit nervously she replied " hhh.. voh .. ac .. acha .. " she was feeling so shy , she tried hiding her belly so much with her saree .. and she was leaving from there when Jalal hold her hand and he turned her at him ...

Ishq ha voh ehsaas ,
Ishq ha voh jazbaat ,
Badal de yeh duniya ..
Badal de yeh halaath ..

Ishq ha voh ehsaas ,
Ishq ha voh jazbaat ,
Badal de yeh duniya ..
Badal de yeh halaath ..

"Shehnesha .. yeh aap kya ker rahein ha ... " Jodha said nervously ... he moved her towards him .. her belly touching his belly ... and he tried kissing her but she pushed him back " Nahe Shehnesha ... ye .. yeh ... " but Jalal sealed her lips with his finger .. " acha theek ha " he said smiling ..
Suddenly he saw a big change in her expressions ... Her expressions expressed a very painful emotion and she took hold of her saree from her belly and cried so much with pain " Shehnesha Shehnesha ... " Jalal took her in his arms " humein bohot dard ho raha ha " she said crying ...
Jalal shouted , "Ammi Jaan , Ruqaiyya Begum idhar aiye " and when everyone came they saw Jodha crying with pain in Jalal's arms " hum .. hakim sahiba ko bulate ha ... " Hamida said running and soon .. Hakim sahiba was there .. she asked everyone to leave , Jodha was holding Jalal's hand very tightly , Jalal was not ready to go " hum nahe jaige " Hakim Sahiba said " nahe Shehnesha aapko jana padega .. " Jalal replied " per hum toh inke sohar hai " But she again refused ... and his leave was so sad , their hands separating from each other , Jodha crying , tears too rolling down from Jalal's eyes ...

Everyone got out from the room , they can hear so much cries of Jodha ..
Jalal hugged Hamida " Ammi Jaan " he said crying ... " kuch nahe Jalal ..
hosla karo ... bohot jald tumhein khushi milenge " ... and yes ! her words proved to be right ... Suddenly , Jodha's cries were no more , everyone looked at each other with suspicion that what happened and when this scene was going on , they heard a very very sweet voice...a cry of a baby... Gosh ! this brought happiness in everyone's face ..

Everyone greeted Jalal and then each other ... JAlal's happiness couldn't find a way , he doesn't understand how to express his feelings and he again hugged Hamida ... Hakim Sahiba came out and gave the baby boy in Jalal's hand ... Gosh ! a very mesmerising moment for Jalal , holding his baby first time in his hands was the greatest pleasure for him ... greatest happiness ... Indeed the saying is true " Children are a source of happiness and Joy ! "

He came inside to Jodha , there Jodha lying , happiness can be expressed by her eyes and her face .. He sat beside her , kissed her forehead while the baby was still in his arms " Mubarak ho Mariam Uz zamani hum waliden ban gaye ha " and a tear rolled down from his eyes saying this ...
Jodha got up and Hugged him " Shehnesha .. apko bhi Mubarak ho " and there and there , the baby smiled ... like a baby smiles when he see or hears something great ... they too smiled seeing the baby smiling and three of them made a big and a tight hug ...

so ... the end 😳 This was much i was able to write or describe .. I hope u guys enjoyed it
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Posted: 11 years ago
perfect end to a perfect story
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved this last chapter a lot...thanks for such a short lovely romantic FF..keep writing still more 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome end to an amazing story 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome chap... superb story .. lovely Happy ending😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
perfect ending of the FF...👏
keep writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
😃AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!😃
😊KEEP WRTING 😊
😊.
GIVE THE LINK OF YOUR NEW FF DI 😊😊😃



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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much Mehak..your FF was a delight from start to finish..it had everything we look for in a fan fiction-wonderfully written,fantastic plot and fab characters ..the love connection between AkDha was pure magic ❤️.
Waiting for another FF frm you soon...Pls don't ever stop writhing
..CHEERS😃
*thanks for PM*


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Posted: 11 years ago
awww- this was so awesome!!! fianlly salim arrived. thx for writing this story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
i really m nt abl to find a word to say hw beautiful end was...till dis date u said thank u to us for reading this ff bt today i wnt to thnk u for writting this ff...indeed this ff is near to heart nt jst to urs bt mine too...1 thing is sure i really gona miss this one...bt hpe u will keep writting more n more ff ss n os for us...n once again thank u for ur lovley writting🤗

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