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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Angel-

lovely update and little emotional one as for me...

really very cute nd amazing thnk u so much 4r tis
waiting for ur next update...😃

Thank you ...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Awesome start plz plz continue soon

Thank you ..and will continue...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello hie bye bye..!!!!how are you all...?? did any one miss my update?? i know no one would miss it but yaar just formality keliye poch rahi thi...meney koi proof reading nahi kiya ..so just simply ignore the typos...hope you will enjoy the update..Happy Reading..!!!!!!
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CH2:Jalad Aur Uska Jungle Billi

"humney pura hindustain ki chor chap laga diya hey ..per hum us jodha aur uski rakshak ko nahi dund payey..maf kardije ye huzur.." the soldier fell on his knees before the kala saya

"humey safayi nahi jodha chahiye...javoo aur use dundkar lova javoo"he said puching the soldier

"20 saal..20saal hogayi ..per bhi hum usi jodha ko dund nahi paiya hu..chahey tu kahi bhi chupi ho jodha ..mei tumey dundey key hi rahunga...tum muje se nahi bach sakthi ho .."said kaal saya giving his trademark evil laughter

IN SALIMGAD:

"Maham humey bohat chinta ho rahi hey ... "said malika haasena looking out the royal place window

"bhabhijaani...aap frik mat kijey ..bhachey owshad(medicine ) lekar hi lovtengey "said MA

"nahi maham humey owshad ki visayi mey chinta nahi ho rahi hey ..humey bhachonki visyi

chinta ho rahi hey " said malika with tears filled eyes..
"aapko chinta karaney ki koi zaru rat nahi hey ..jab tak wo dono ek sat hai ..ek dusreko kuch nahi honedengey ..aap bayphrik hojaye" said ma assuring her.
"wo dono sath hey isska tho daar hey "said the malika

Far way In The Jungle:
"ye jallad ko tho mei chudungi nahi ...wo aapney aap ko samj tha kya hai ?? uskey bina mei kuch bhi nahi kar sakthi ?? tho mei usey dheka dungi ki mei kon hu.. usey phele mei us owshad ko dund lungi ..agar aisa nahi huva..tho mei Maham Anga ki beti shehazadi Jasmine hi nahi hu "said the angry shehazadi ..who was hell angry on her childhood friend Err..sorry childhood enemy..who was also her cousin too...well its all the old story as every day they do ..today to they fought with each other...and trust me they don't need any solid reason to fight with each other
in fact they don't even need some reason to fight ...well our beautiful shehazadi who was busy in crushing her jallad .. didn't even notice when did he go to an cliff area and when she lost her balance slip down the cliff. all thanks to the some branch of an tree which help her to be alive.."Jalal" she shouted as loud as she can ...so that her jallad will come to her rescue ..now you people may be think why hell will he come to her rescue?? the is that magical bond they share..they showoff infront every one they portrait as if they want to kill each other..but if one of them is in danger the other tries his /her best to save him/her ..if one got injured the other feels the pain of it ..in short they both share an Tom & Jerry bonding who fight through out the day ..but end of the day they both can't live without each other..
there is saying right "speak about the devil and the devil appears"same thing is applied here..look we were talking about jalal and he appeared.. to the rescue of his jungle billi..he was an shehazada of 20 years..who was able to kill any girl with his looks..and yes our Jb was not less then him ..she make any men to on knees for her...so now finally our hero arrived and our heroin saw him
"Jalal"she shouted with happiness that he is finally here
"jungle billi zinda hey ??ya upar chali gayi???"he shouted acting as if he was try to make out where she is..
"bichamey attki hu..tuje koi thaklif" she shouted at him with totally frustration
"nahi muje koi thaklif nahi hai bas puch raha ta.."he said with very cool attitude
"abey aissa hi muje saaval puch tha rahey ga ya per bachaye ga bhi??"she said
" bachavunga na..aap na hat de"he said giving his hand to her
he caught her hand..after long section of struggling he pulled her out successful ..due to the force he applied to pull her out ...she straight away landed over him ...now both were lying on the ground ..jalal was on the ground and jasmine(jodha)was on his top...both were pulled into an long eye lock and there was an long LLHH section between the both..but soon our jallu came back to the real world
"ab din bar muje per bait kar muje issa hi dhektha rehana hey kya?? ya pher owshad bhi dundey??" he said
"muje koi soch nahi hey teri upar bait kar tuje dhekney ki"she said crossing her hand against her chest
"acha tho ab tu kya kar rahi hai?"he said
"lo uttgayi ..khush??"she said getting up from him ..
"ah bohat khush"he said clean off all the mud from his shirt
"kiska interzar kar rahi ho ??shub murat ka?tera hogaya tho ab chale??"she said showing least interest in what he is doing
"ah ..per tuney tho kaha tha ki tu akele hi owshad dundkey leyega??ab kya huva daar gayi?"he said tauting her
"daar aur muje ..kabi nahi.wo bas"she strated think about some bahana.
"wo wo kya..kuch nahi sida sida manle ki tuje daar lag rahi hey "he said laughing at her.
"ya allah ..tumara samasa kya hai??mei tho bas tumara kam aasan karna chahithi per tu keha rahai hai ki muje daar hai isley mei tumarey sath chal rahi hu ??ab mei tuje sabt kardungi ki
muje daar nahi hai ...mei aapney rastey javungi ..aur tum apaney rastey ..kudhasiz"she blast on him and left the spot without even waiting for his reply
"ya khudh aapney iss ladki ko kyu..kaise aur kisliye bana hai aapney??" he mummed looking at her retreating back..
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PRECAP:
Jalal aur jasmine (jodha) in jungle akele at night time
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Lol muje pata hai ... this was an really really very bad one ...am really sorry about that ..please spare me and my stupid stories..so bolo guys how was that?? acha tha ya bura ya worst ??. DO Like and COMMENT, to show some support and one more thing please only do comment what ever you feel about my story ..i don't mind about it..criticism and suggestions are most welcomed ..Keep Reading and Keep supporting..!!!!!
With lots of love ,
Renu..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome chapter ! 👍🏼
I liked this storyline very much !! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum Story 👏nd thankx foe pm
update soon
Precap nite time Akdha akele ...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Renu u r awesome...i was just thinking tum log itna mast mast concept latey kaha se ho...kaash cvz bhi tumhari tarah innovative sochte...lol...sorry no offence to cvz...update soon dear !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Amazing update plz continue soon

Thank you ...!!!!!

Thank you ..!!!!!

@ Both :well that will be depended on the number of likes i get ... if i do continue i will let you know..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishika123

Awesome chapter ! 👍🏼

I liked this storyline very much !! 🤗

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