The Saviour (AkDha SS)Chap2 Updated

TheShySoul12 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#1

hello hie bye bye...kise ho aap sab?????first of all sabko merry Christmas chalo am back with an story but this time with an ss..this story is going to be in series of three parts i.e., SS1 SS2 aur SS3...ye SS1..hey agar apaki response achi rahi tho i will continue the series if not i will stop it then and there...you have only one way to get the update aur wo comment karana hey ..if not i will stop updating ...i know my writing is a piece of shit..but agar kesi ko padana ho tho please comment ...okay enuf of my bak bak...here is the chap1

Note:

This story doesn't have any connection neither with the history nor with the show..am just use the character of the show..rest every thing is purely my imagination

Chap1:The mother's sacrifices

The malika of the sunthanat was running in a jungle area.. not for her life but to save his child's life from the devil soldiers who were behind them she ran hid behind an big rock ..she lend against the rock and had an look at his son face who was smiling innocently unaware of what happen in his surrounds seeing him she remembered what the pakir predicted about her son's future..

"khuda ka thofa hey aapka beta...dusht shakti ka nash karaney hi piyada huva ye bacha...ye sirf mughal sunthanat ko hi nahi pur duniya ka rakshak banega eska naam hoga AKBAR"

the pakir's words were ringing her ears ..by hook or crook she has to save her child.she can save him only when she will be successful send him from this evil place.just then her eyes fell on an box near her ..just then an idea come into her mind..she took the box and her child and strated walking in the direction she heard the water sound and there she found an ocean .she sat near the ocean and she kissed his forehead..she had an heart full last look at his child andkept him in the box..and she place an diamond chain of her in the box as an sign of her. she closed the box and with an heavy heart the mother gave an tearful good bye to her son she pushed the box into the water soon the box disappeared from her sight and there stood an helpless mother who has no other option except leaving her son in the water ..all alone.."AKBAR my son"she said with an painful voice ..tears were rolling down her face she fell on her knees and was crushing her fate for separating her from her son...the devil soldiers reached the ocean bank and capture the malika..

FAR AWAY FROM THIS PLACE:

"you have promise me maham that you will help me in my needy time and the time has come the i got an information that devil is behind my daughter...he want give an rebirth to his brother with the help of my daughter ...i don't want his to happen ..if my daughter is here he will be successful in his evil deed which i never ever want to happen ..so i need your help in this..will you help me??" asked mayanvati

"of curse yes Maharani Mayanvati ..you have saved my life in the past and maham never ever forget the help give to her ..tell what help can i do??"said maham

"can please adopt my daughter and make her your daughter and take her from here???"questioned mayanvati

"if it will help you out i will defo do it maharani"said MA

mayanvati left the place and came back with a few days old baby girl in her hand and gave her to maham..tears started rolling down mayanvati's check .maham took the baby girl and sweeping the tear off mayanvati 's face ..she said

"you know one thing maha rani?? i always want an girl child and look khuda had gift it to me in this ways..don't worry about her .i will d treat her equal to my son ..she will be growing up as an mugal shehazadhi"

"take care of my jodha maham anga ji.."said mayanvati with teary eyes.

"i will..from this minute she is not your jodha .. she is my jasmine.."maham said to mayanvati

mayanvati gave an smile through her tears and maham took her leave from there..and flawed back to her country

________________________________________________

INDEX:

chap1:above

CH2:Jalad Aur Uska Jungle Billi




________________________________________________

Author's Note:

so here is the first part ...it is filled with lots of adventures .. i hope you people will like my concept and as i said i will continue only if guys are inserted in this one...and i will stick to it .. I really love this concept but I hate it how no one likes my other ffs. Anyhow, whatever if you guys are not interested, I am not afraid to discontinue them so just tell me if you want me to discontinue.them ..i will do it...so this was the 1st chapter hope you liked it ...i know my writing is an crap but i don't think ethana bhi bura nahi hey .ki i don't even deserve to get appreciation.. .I'll update the story only if I get minimum 28 likes.and 3,4 pages comment this rule will be applied for all the chaps..so bolo guys how was the start?? acha bura ya worst ??. DO Like and COMMENT, to show some support and one more thing please only do comment what ever you feel about my story ..i don't mind about it..criticism and suggestions are most welcomed
With lots of love ,
Renu.

Edited by ...Renu... - 11 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

32

Views

7k

Users

15

Likes

57

Frequent Posters

arunsunita_gm thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#2
thnk god yu make maha anga a gud person
cont soon and dont frgt to pm me
gn tc ks hsd
merry christmas
-Enigmatic- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Ohhh wow it seems like different & very intersting😳😃..
Amazing & lovely story👏👏👏
But pljj renu don't change jodha's name ...
moku99 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#4
interesting concept ... do continue and pm me as well
shahbhavini thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#5

Renu Superb Start!!!!!! What a different ...Maham is a good character... hard to believe...Continue soon!!!! love it... Really nice start!

MonalisaJ thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#6
woww..., Nyc start..,👏👏👏 Do update soon..😳
and thnx for the pm..😊😊
Heeralicious thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#7
What a start Renu! Wow a different concept! Loved it! I am so sorry I still gotta read n review ur other FF ! But I loved this!👏👏👏 And ur starting mei hello hi bye bye n ur bak bak was cho0o0o0 chweett!!! Aww!! Update soon darling!👏😳⭐️
TheShySoul12 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

thnk god yu make maha anga a gud person
cont soon and dont frgt to pm me
gn tc ks hsd
merry christmas

well you can't judge it so easily dear ...there are many twist in the story to go...😉

will i think i will be continuing it ..may be...but ah if i do i will PM you...

merry Christmas to you too dear...🤗

TheShySoul12 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: SoniLuvsRT

Ohhh wow it seems like different & very intersting😳😃..
Amazing & lovely story👏👏👏

But pljj renu don't change jodha's name ...

Thank you dear ...😃

well change tho honahi hey dear ..i can't help it ..but its short from will be still JJ only .. see i try to maintain it ..but the full form will be jalal and jasmine instead of jalal and jodha..but end of theday it will be Jodha Akbar only

TheShySoul12 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: hetvi.ipkknd

interesting concept ... do continue and pm me as well

thank you ..

have to think about it dear...but if i do i will surly pm you

thank you ...

Originally posted by: rima4ever

superb start

please continue

thank you ..

will think about it ...

Related Topics

Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: MideOfTheShadow

2 months ago

ishq-e-sultaana (akdha ss/ff)

synopsis when he brought Amer's rose into his harem, she was meant to be a testament to his conquest. when she agreed to marry him, it was with...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: So-So

29 days ago

Akdha SS - Where Passions Collide - Update Part 3 11/08/2025 Akdha SS - Where Passions Collide - Update Part 3 11/08/2025

Part 1 Two Worlds Here she was. Jodha Shekhawat stood in front of the gleaming glass and steel headquarters of Khan Engineering in Agra. The...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

6 months ago

Akdha OS : Ehsaas

Ehsaas The night unfurled its velvety embrace over the grand city of Agra... The towering walls of the Mughal palace stood bathed in moonlight,...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

1 months ago

Akdha OS - Under This Concrete Sky - 13/07/2025

And Then He Looked At Her...... The first time Jodha Sharma stepped into Skyline Infrastructures, she was soaked in the scent of wet earth and...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: talesmith

2 months ago

AKDHA FF - MYRIAD SHADES OF LOVE & WAR

Hi all! Some of you may know me already or maybe not - I had posted a modern OS named Serendipity on this forum some months ago. Here again with...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".