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amazing update pallavi...

its so emotional nd i ws crying vd jalal while reading ur update...nd wow wow wow for jalal nd maham conversation...ds lady z getting on my nerves.😡...

so jallu vl get to knw d truth vry soon...yeeyyy 👏

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Oh my god!😲 Wowww!!!!!🤗

Pallavi!!! I am contacting JA team today itself to appoint you as JA CV plus dialogue writer😳

Oh my god!!!!!❤️ It was wowww🤗

My my..😲😲 Omg!! Mashallah Kya likha hai!!! ❤️I am so so touched!!!!! Oh God!!!!!🤗

Pallavi U deserve a standing ovation for this 🤗

The convo between The heart and Mind was so perfect! So perfect! Omg! The dialogues Nailed it man!!!❤️ Stroke of genius!!!❤️

Beautiful! You have taken this track beautifully!😳❤️

I loved Jalal's two fighting conscious' !

That Benazir creep...aaah...😡😡😡

Omg! Jodha my love...😭😭😭 I know you'll make her alright! but I want jalal to realise as well that how much he has hurt Jodha!!!!!!❤️

God!!!!! This chapter was beyond sheer brilliance and excellence!!!!! ❤️Take a bow Pallavi!!👏⭐️👏

I just loved what Jalal said to Jodha..Oh my poor love Jodha is already in the effect of poison...God!!!

Plz update asap!! Just loved it!!❤️🤗

Brilliant!!!!!!!!!! Superbbb!!!!!!! Mindblowing!!!!! fantabulous!!!!👏👏🤗

Originally posted by: rima4ever

fantastic mind blowing

thank u for a long update

Originally posted by: anshfever

👏...for ds chapter pallavi.

arguement bw heart nd mind ws brilliant nd yr itne dialogue kha se soch lete ho...mai to dono ki arguements 2 dialogues me hi khatan kr deti 😆.

amazing yr seriously.

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

OMG!!!!! RULA DIYA MUJU😕😭

Mindblowing heart touching ! so intense chapter!!! Tune to muje ander se hila diya... Kaha se ideas leke aati hai...I loved Self Talk between heart and mind...what a confuse emotions... of course Jalal went to Jodha, so heart wins... I am crying seeing Jodha's condition... Jalal is screaming at her with all accuse.😡.. and she is almost dead🤢😭 😭

I loved it UR are really awesome super duper excellent !⭐️

Yaar me to SR ke sapne dekhti thi aur muje dil kholke rula diya😭😭😭

Jaldi Jo ko thik karde!!! Is choti si pyari si bacchi ko kush kar de baba😆😆😆 aekad chummi ka scene to add kar deti baba😆😆😆 me romance ki amma hu... is dard ko kese seh paungi... next update me kamse kam 3 4 chummi to add kar hi dena... chapter me adjust na ho to dream me bhi chalegi par chummi dena baba... 😆😆 Aur Jaldi se update karna👏👏🤣

well done moti
loved it
awesome update

Awesome update plz plz plz continue soon

Wow, I LOVE this ff, you're doing such a great job with this story. I could feel Jalals pain when he saw Jodha's condition, and it showed how much he cared for her, and poor Jodha i hope she gets better soon, please update soon. Thank you!!!

awesome update dear, i hope jodha will be fine soon
do continue soon
& thanks for the pm

Oh god😲😲 How do you do this my Sherni? WOwww...👏👏👏