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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akdha-fan

Three cheers for Ch. 19 & 20 (both of which I just read right now...) ~> Hip Hip Hurray! Hip Hip Hurray! Hip Hip Hurray!!!!!!!!🥳

And thanks for the PM!!!!😊

Thanks so much Shreya 🤗

Originally posted by: justlovetv

Really nice update! So Payal and Maan are a couple!😳😃.

Yup they are now... 😳
Both Jodha and Jalal can't stop thinking about each other! Can't wait to see how this unfolds!
Awww thanks yaar... 😳


Originally posted by: zaidi98

read all in part in 1 go..

n just loved da story ..
amazing n awesome...
love da way u express emotions n suitation...
w8ng 4 next..
update soon...

Thank you so much your lovely words are so encouraging...I've added you to the buddy list and will pm you 😳
Edited by lashy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Really nice first meeting with Mrs. Banu and Jodha... (Lashy u don't even spare dog to express his emotions...lol so cute) Jalal is not missing any opportunity... 'So, you like her too haan? 😃

Thanks yaar 😳

(Car) I always love silence... talks more than any things but here I was like common speak up... I love how impatient Jodha is and How cool Jalal is... I love it how sweetly he asked her... Wanna Talk about something Jodha?😆 (after big kand he is asking her innocently do you want to talk about it? Lol) ofcourse Jodha will get irritated ...

Haan badmaash hai ye tho😆

it means that I like you... and not just as a friend...' his voice was soothing, but his gazes at their flirtatious best 'I have a crush on you, isn't it obvious?'😛

omg!!! She left without any response😲... ( I love her inner talk... she truly like him but she don't see future with him.. Awww... Love the part(The most popular guy in university just proposed to me!')

Yes...its a big confusion/step/change in life for her na.. 😳

Jo is real practical... but I don't think she is in love with him yet... when u in love u don't care about anything... they both are attracted but not in love...

Jalal is practical too... I loved it how he said I can't be around you otherwise it is going to be tuff... But can you Jalal?

Very well stated points Bhavu 👏

LASHY Marvelous Stunning loved loved loved it 🤗
Thank you so much my dearest


Originally posted by: najma123

amazing update!!loved it.i didnt expect it at all and when i got it i was in seventh heaven!!thanks a ton.please pm me if you can and update soon

Hey thanks so much... ok sorry forgot to add you to pm list ... will pm you too 🤗

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Im loving this story! Sorry couldn't find time to review it!
Res for reviewing
❤️🤗

Tahni I totally understand dear one.. Just this one line will suffice... 🤗I'm so glad you're able to enjoy it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for quick update!!
it's been a week,already?? !! but love that still both of them are thinking of it, albeit in diff manners!
Jalal's ex-gf, kahin Ruku toh nahin?? let her not be back EVER from the US of A!! Ye Rishabh kabab banene se pehle hi haddi ho gaya!!😡
happy for the new jodi of Maan-Payal! Love Meera's cheeckiness !
OMg, the stalker's back 😲 🤢
updt soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Pals2411

Wonderful part 20 Lashy👏 Really loved it. Both Jallu and Jo are moving sensibly and patiently after the proposal cum rejection. No dramabaazi, very civil😛 I liked that. It makes it all very interesting.
Pallo how can no draamebaazi be very interesting yaar?😲 Our Indian genes are brainwashed/loaded with the need for drama... just kidding.. I understand what you mean...
Don't like much of drama dear, love the unsaid😉 A dignified approach yet passionate and intense loveTongue
Suspense abhi bhi baaki hai. Who is the SMS bhejnewala shaks?😕 One of the girls or boys? Maan to nahi or is it Sir Shantaram😆
WHAT!!!!!!!! 😆loool I've been getting all sorts of suggestions (here, in Pm and on WA) 😆 its fascinating...
All the boys and girls (both Jallu and Jo's friends), the Tip Tip barsa gang of two, Shantaram Sir and even Rishabh is in my doubt list😆 Baki koi baccha hai kya? I am not trusting anyone, except Jallu and Jo and their family members. Mera jasoosi dimag sab par shaq kar raha hai😆 CID ka asar hai. Daya darwaza tod do😆
This is going really good dear. Lashy want the next part to be updated soon. very soon. soon soon soon. 😛 Look what you turned me into😆
Awww thank you so so so much dear... I generally try and update once ever five-six days.. cos it takes me three days just to write a part and two days breather... but, I will update soon...thanks so so so much 🤗
Three days to write, then I am waiting.Tongue I am very ruthless😆 No extra time, breather bhi nahi😆 Update jaldi chahiye matlab chahiye😉Lots of love dear🤗

Edited by Pals2411 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a coincidence! Jalal just seemed to tick off everything on Jodha's checklist. How unexpected!😆😉
It's Twu Wuv People!😃😆
Next chapter please!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u Shradha di for updatin soon🤗🤗
What to say abt ur story..its gripping n so beautiful..ur characteristion has been depicted so naturally...must say..best writer here 👏👏 u tok care of minute details...love u di 😳🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heyya, finally here!! Feels like I've been away for ages😆
Loved loved loved the chapter di...🤗

The first part..dreamy when you leave out everything else and concentrate wholly on imagining Jalal in shower! These are times when I seriously wonder how Jo has so much self control...not that she has seen him in shower, but she really should imagine once atleast...☺️

Coming out of the world of fantasies..back to ff reality!😆
It was deffo going to take him time to get the whole thing out of his mind..it's not that small an issue na. And well, he really isn't used to being rejected..😭
But what I liked is..inspite of everything that happened and the rejection from her side he didn't react harshly. It's very easy to take out the anger and frustration, esp on the person who is the reason for it.. he's mature that way! A huge round of hugs to him for that..😳🤗

Jo..well she's not really ready to give this whole thing a thought.. like you said, being stubborn. Her mind is there though..no messages from him, no mood to change nail paints...it's affecting her too..she's just trying to avoid it, but it's there at the back of her mind the whole while..poor thing! 😒

Her description of her Mr. Perfect was simply WOW! ❤️The best part..Jalal almost fit the bill, the most important thing is the problem..
And as always..I simply love Meera, the perfect friend!!😳😳

So Maan had been having feelings for Payal too...nice! The proposal was a surprise!! Glad they're happy..😃
Don't hit me..but I really don't know why I don't trust Maan!😲😆

Awesomely written chapter...love you for making this so realistic and believable!! And since I know you've started writing the next chapter, can I get it on sunday or monday?? Pleaseee...😒😳😆
Love ya loadss 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
@mdeshpande
Thanks for quick update!!
it's been a week,already?? !! but love that still both of them are thinking of it, albeit in diff manners!
The way the story is progressing most of my updates have at least a few days between them...
Jalal's ex-gf, kahin Ruku toh nahin?? let her not be back EVER from the US of A!!
No don't worry I'm trying to keep it like a realistic story...it's not going to have the standard drama elements like in a serial😆
Ye Rishabh kabab banene se pehle hi haddi ho gaya!!😡
Rishabh was always around.. the rishtha that her family kept going on about..ye wohi ladka hai... 😛
happy for the new jodi of Maan-Payal! Love Meera's cheeckiness!
Loool... yeah😆
OMg, the stalker's back 😲 🤢
Yes...he never was away...😉
updt soon!!
Thanks dear 🤗

@ Pals
Don't like much of drama dear, love the unsaid😉 A dignified approach yet passionate and intense love😛
Yes.. same here... like realistic passion rather than drama-filled passion! 😛
All the boys and girls (both Jallu and Jo's friends), the Tip Tip barsa gang of two, Shantaram Sir and even Rishabh is in my doubt list😆 Baki koi baccha hai kya? I am not trusting anyone, except Jallu and Jo and their family members. Mera jasoosi dimag sab par shaq kar raha hai😉 CID ka asar hai. Daya darwaza tod do😆
I can see how you've thoded all the daya darwaazaas 😆 I don't know if I should say this...but, someone actually even asked me if it was a lesbian stalking her? 😆
Three days to write, then I am waiting.😛 I am very ruthless😆 No extra time, breather bhi nahi😆 Update jaldi chahiye matlab chahiye😉Lots of love dear🤗
🤗Awww my lil don

@ Sneha
What a coincidence! Jalal just seemed to tick off everything on Jodha's checklist. How unexpected!😆😉
I know what a coincidence indeed! 😉
Next chapter please!
Hee hee... thanks sweetheart 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: sunshine_sun

Thank u Shradha di for updatin soon🤗🤗
What to say abt ur story..its gripping n so beautiful..ur characteristion has been depicted so naturally...must say..best writer here 👏👏 u tok care of minute details...love u di 😳🤗


Thank you so so so so much Hena.. such beautiful words.. thanks a lottt dearest 🤗🤗
Edited by lashy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay I have to catch up on last couple of updates. Leaving a bookmark for me to read at leisure later today.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Achha ji,
Ab HUM post karenge..( note the modesty here plz..)...
Hmm.. So, akkalmand dheet ka dimaag chalne laga hai..bcoz woh aur ussko tanhai frequently aisi baatein karte hain...woh yeh kehti, woh yoon hasti...n all that jazz..
So he IS tryin to figure her out...good work..get those grey cells workin...coz she is the zara hatke type..and he ...the Look at me I'm so kewl...(even tho he is nice)... needs that fall on his behind...to get her worth and see that she is so much more than the rest of his past inamoratas...
SHE...on the other hand...needs a good shakedown ...to understand that HE is much more than the sum of his parts...no matter how..ummm...delectable individually those parts may be😉...

Love does require work...to appreciate its true value in our lives...and relationships that matter...do ask for effort..

Like it said, Madame...well scribed..

Toodles,
LizzieB

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